21:3521:35, 27 November 2021diffhist−3
And I Love Her
→Composition: Switched two sentences in a paragraph in order to improve flow into the next paragraph, as the latter paragraph immediately references a point made by the former. Without the change, the reader may feel lead in a different direction than what ultimately comes.Tags: Mobile editMobile web edit
21:4621:46, 6 June 2017diffhist+1,335
Daryl Morey
→Career: Added content and the generally accepted ounter-argument to the page's one-sided, slightly negative skew of the subject's accomplishments.Tags: Mobile editMobile web edit
21:3521:35, 27 November 2021diffhist−3
And I Love Her
→Composition: Switched two sentences in a paragraph in order to improve flow into the next paragraph, as the latter paragraph immediately references a point made by the former. Without the change, the reader may feel lead in a different direction than what ultimately comes.Tags: Mobile editMobile web edit
21:4621:46, 6 June 2017diffhist+1,335
Daryl Morey
→Career: Added content and the generally accepted ounter-argument to the page's one-sided, slightly negative skew of the subject's accomplishments.Tags: Mobile editMobile web edit