14:0314:03, 16 November 2014diffhist+351
Tanoli
I have toay refixed this article and smoothed out many issues and given it a more balanced and objective p o view
21:0921:09, 26 September 2014diffhist+601
Mohammad Abdul Ghafoor Hazarvi
this long article has many problems, apart from having v few reliable refs, its is also v poorly written and full of plumery and peacock type statements and has a definitely biased/slanted stance , needs to be completely rewritten for clarity and simplici
20:3920:39, 26 September 2014diffhist+29
Karlal
v poorly referenced and poorly written article, needs to be simplified and clarified also basic grammar corrections
20:3820:38, 26 September 2014diffhist−71
Karlal
removed some non notable material and also a dubious self-published volume based on self-manufactured sources
20:1820:18, 26 September 2014diffhist+2,715
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User talk:Salmadesou
added note to contributor explaining in a simple way some wikipedia rules reg notability, references etc, and advicecurrent
18:3818:38, 24 September 2014diffhist+4,459
Talk:Tanoli
added detailed note for Mastkhankhel to help clarify and explain the factual historical position along broad parameters
14:0314:03, 16 November 2014diffhist+351
Tanoli
I have toay refixed this article and smoothed out many issues and given it a more balanced and objective p o view
21:0921:09, 26 September 2014diffhist+601
Mohammad Abdul Ghafoor Hazarvi
this long article has many problems, apart from having v few reliable refs, its is also v poorly written and full of plumery and peacock type statements and has a definitely biased/slanted stance , needs to be completely rewritten for clarity and simplici
20:3920:39, 26 September 2014diffhist+29
Karlal
v poorly referenced and poorly written article, needs to be simplified and clarified also basic grammar corrections
20:3820:38, 26 September 2014diffhist−71
Karlal
removed some non notable material and also a dubious self-published volume based on self-manufactured sources
20:1820:18, 26 September 2014diffhist+2,715
N
User talk:Salmadesou
added note to contributor explaining in a simple way some wikipedia rules reg notability, references etc, and advicecurrent
18:3818:38, 24 September 2014diffhist+4,459
Talk:Tanoli
added detailed note for Mastkhankhel to help clarify and explain the factual historical position along broad parameters