19:5619:56, 11 December 2014diffhist−10
m
Short Trip Home
Changed "classically trained" to "classical violinist" for Bell. The latter inaccurately implies that his repertoire is mainly other than classical.
19:5219:52, 25 September 2014diffhist−11
Darzu ist erschienen der Sohn Gottes, BWV 40
Title Should be "Dazu...." Only wikipedia has this spelling. "Darzu" is meaningless, at least in Modern High German. While it's conceivable that it's a spelling that's changed over time, I can find no other source with this spelling. Most use "Dazu".
00:1200:12, 17 February 2014diffhist+40
Bill Russell
→College career: Previously "Woolpert was unaffected by issues of skin color." This is surely controversial, as many would argue that such is impossible. Clarified by adding a few words. ~~~~
19:2919:29, 16 December 2013diffhist−67
Big Pimpin'
1) The original song is "Khosara Khosara" (spellings vary). 2) 2007 lawsuit was over use of this piece, not "Big Pimpin". 3) Also changed "copyright of" to "on", since referring to a work, not an owner.4) general cleanup. ~~~~
17:4917:49, 26 March 2013diffhist−10
m
Sharon Kam
changed opening sentence from "classically trained"-- in accordance with standard format for classical musicians.~~~~
21:4521:45, 20 March 2013diffhist+7
m
Luca Marenzio
→Music: Added "almost" to " featuring a modulation through the entire
circle of fifths", since this phrase starts in G and ends in A. The coming D (which would complete the circle) is not present.~~~~
17:5717:57, 19 March 2013diffhist+4
m
Alexander Rahbari
Added "has" to 1st sentence. If he's still alive, there's still the possibility he could play with more orchestras. Thus: present perfect.~~~~
19:5319:53, 7 March 2013diffhist−46
Cuarteto Latinoamericano
Deleted opening phrase "Celebrating its thirtieth anniversary season," since this will only apply (applied??) for one year. Better to include "...founded in [year]" at the end of this sentence. ~~~~
19:5619:56, 11 December 2014diffhist−10
m
Short Trip Home
Changed "classically trained" to "classical violinist" for Bell. The latter inaccurately implies that his repertoire is mainly other than classical.
19:5219:52, 25 September 2014diffhist−11
Darzu ist erschienen der Sohn Gottes, BWV 40
Title Should be "Dazu...." Only wikipedia has this spelling. "Darzu" is meaningless, at least in Modern High German. While it's conceivable that it's a spelling that's changed over time, I can find no other source with this spelling. Most use "Dazu".
00:1200:12, 17 February 2014diffhist+40
Bill Russell
→College career: Previously "Woolpert was unaffected by issues of skin color." This is surely controversial, as many would argue that such is impossible. Clarified by adding a few words. ~~~~
19:2919:29, 16 December 2013diffhist−67
Big Pimpin'
1) The original song is "Khosara Khosara" (spellings vary). 2) 2007 lawsuit was over use of this piece, not "Big Pimpin". 3) Also changed "copyright of" to "on", since referring to a work, not an owner.4) general cleanup. ~~~~
17:4917:49, 26 March 2013diffhist−10
m
Sharon Kam
changed opening sentence from "classically trained"-- in accordance with standard format for classical musicians.~~~~
21:4521:45, 20 March 2013diffhist+7
m
Luca Marenzio
→Music: Added "almost" to " featuring a modulation through the entire
circle of fifths", since this phrase starts in G and ends in A. The coming D (which would complete the circle) is not present.~~~~
17:5717:57, 19 March 2013diffhist+4
m
Alexander Rahbari
Added "has" to 1st sentence. If he's still alive, there's still the possibility he could play with more orchestras. Thus: present perfect.~~~~
19:5319:53, 7 March 2013diffhist−46
Cuarteto Latinoamericano
Deleted opening phrase "Celebrating its thirtieth anniversary season," since this will only apply (applied??) for one year. Better to include "...founded in [year]" at the end of this sentence. ~~~~