23:4623:46, 30 March 2024diffhist+346
Rin Kaiho
Thanks Blahhmosh for the info in your edit summary, but it still needs a citation. I have a source for living in Taiwan but not for citizenship.
09:4709:47, 4 July 2022diffhist−8
Terence McKenna
→Studying and traveling: Unlink: I'm not sure what "neural DNA" is supposed to be, but linking each word separately doesn't help, and misleads people into clicking on a single word where they expected the phrase
10:0510:05, 20 May 2022diffhist−64
Isao Tomita
Undid revision 1087164488 by
Koncorde (
talk) I believe it's normal for composers to be referred to by family name regardless of notability. Happy to revert if you can provide a source for why this is a special fact about Tomita. See talk page.Tags: UndoReverted
06:2206:22, 8 May 2022diffhist−64
Isao Tomita
Delete "known mononymously as": it's normal for composers to be referred to by family name, not deserving of special mentionTag: Reverted
13:0713:07, 4 April 2022diffhist−25
Mantovani
→Posthumous publishing: Remove "original research" tag. "1981 is later than 1980" doesn't require a citation. Personally I don't mind the humorous phrasing of "...required posthumous conducting", but if you want a more encyclopedic tone then feel free to edit.
3 April 2022
01:2001:20, 3 April 2022diffhist−44
Mantovani
Delete "known mononymously as": it's normal for conductors and composers to be referred to by family name, not deserving of special mention
28 March 2022
11:1211:12, 28 March 2022diffhist+13
Sam Feder
Remove pronouns. Most sources refer to Sam Feder exclusively as "Sam", occasionally "Feder" or "they", but rarely "he". I've chosen "Feder" as being more formal and encyclopedic, but there's a case to made for using "Sam" throughout
23:2423:24, 17 March 2022diffhist+146
Criticality accident
Resolve inconsistent counts; note that "A review of criticality incidents" (McLaughlin et al, ref 1) is old and incomplete; it would be good if someone could clarify the criteria for inclusion in the table
23:5523:55, 13 March 2022diffhist−38
Bradford Factor
→Calculation: rephrased formula: the symbol B adds nothing and smacks of circular reasoning (you don't put the Bradford factor *into* the formula for calculating Bradford factor!). Also "working year" varies from country to country
11 March 2022
22:3922:39, 11 March 2022diffhist−175
Dante Alighieri
→Works: Delete quotation -- I think the unnamed translator is not being literal here, and a single line isn't very informative in this context -- citation still needed for the paragraph as a whole
02:5602:56, 2 March 2022diffhist−110
The Wurzels
→Name: Delete unsourced statement (wurzel as UK slang for yokel): citation needed tag is now more than a year old, and noone has come up with a citation.
28 February 2022
22:1922:19, 28 February 2022diffhist−31
Turn (angle)
Removed unsourced statement (symbol for "turn" is "tr" or "pla"): the top google hit for "turn symbol pla" is this page itself, and nothing else looks remotely relevant
10:2110:21, 9 February 2022diffhist−2,115
Nocturnes (Chopin)
Delete what looks like original research: it's not terribly useful, and contains some errors (e.g. op 9/2 definitely has a contrasting section). I'm being
WP:BOLD here: feel free to revert and fix if you disagree.
10:1710:17, 9 February 2022diffhist−7
Pinto
rename "entertainers" to "other" -- can anyone think of a better generic term? I had trouble finding George because classical music composers are not normally called "entertainers". Not sure if that term covers models and film directors either.
03:1703:17, 9 October 2021diffhist−357
Bertrand Meyer
Delete assertion that without Eiffel, languages such as Java, C#, Python wouldn't exist -- a statement this strong shouldn't remain in the article without a source
01:3501:35, 11 August 2021diffhist−17
Shirley Crabtree
Unlink "British Wrestling Federation": it was pointing to a page that doesn't mention BWF at all. I think someone needs to create a BWF page before we can make sense of this.Tag: Reverted
23:4623:46, 30 March 2024diffhist+346
Rin Kaiho
Thanks Blahhmosh for the info in your edit summary, but it still needs a citation. I have a source for living in Taiwan but not for citizenship.
09:4709:47, 4 July 2022diffhist−8
Terence McKenna
→Studying and traveling: Unlink: I'm not sure what "neural DNA" is supposed to be, but linking each word separately doesn't help, and misleads people into clicking on a single word where they expected the phrase
10:0510:05, 20 May 2022diffhist−64
Isao Tomita
Undid revision 1087164488 by
Koncorde (
talk) I believe it's normal for composers to be referred to by family name regardless of notability. Happy to revert if you can provide a source for why this is a special fact about Tomita. See talk page.Tags: UndoReverted
06:2206:22, 8 May 2022diffhist−64
Isao Tomita
Delete "known mononymously as": it's normal for composers to be referred to by family name, not deserving of special mentionTag: Reverted
13:0713:07, 4 April 2022diffhist−25
Mantovani
→Posthumous publishing: Remove "original research" tag. "1981 is later than 1980" doesn't require a citation. Personally I don't mind the humorous phrasing of "...required posthumous conducting", but if you want a more encyclopedic tone then feel free to edit.
3 April 2022
01:2001:20, 3 April 2022diffhist−44
Mantovani
Delete "known mononymously as": it's normal for conductors and composers to be referred to by family name, not deserving of special mention
28 March 2022
11:1211:12, 28 March 2022diffhist+13
Sam Feder
Remove pronouns. Most sources refer to Sam Feder exclusively as "Sam", occasionally "Feder" or "they", but rarely "he". I've chosen "Feder" as being more formal and encyclopedic, but there's a case to made for using "Sam" throughout
23:2423:24, 17 March 2022diffhist+146
Criticality accident
Resolve inconsistent counts; note that "A review of criticality incidents" (McLaughlin et al, ref 1) is old and incomplete; it would be good if someone could clarify the criteria for inclusion in the table
23:5523:55, 13 March 2022diffhist−38
Bradford Factor
→Calculation: rephrased formula: the symbol B adds nothing and smacks of circular reasoning (you don't put the Bradford factor *into* the formula for calculating Bradford factor!). Also "working year" varies from country to country
11 March 2022
22:3922:39, 11 March 2022diffhist−175
Dante Alighieri
→Works: Delete quotation -- I think the unnamed translator is not being literal here, and a single line isn't very informative in this context -- citation still needed for the paragraph as a whole
02:5602:56, 2 March 2022diffhist−110
The Wurzels
→Name: Delete unsourced statement (wurzel as UK slang for yokel): citation needed tag is now more than a year old, and noone has come up with a citation.
28 February 2022
22:1922:19, 28 February 2022diffhist−31
Turn (angle)
Removed unsourced statement (symbol for "turn" is "tr" or "pla"): the top google hit for "turn symbol pla" is this page itself, and nothing else looks remotely relevant
10:2110:21, 9 February 2022diffhist−2,115
Nocturnes (Chopin)
Delete what looks like original research: it's not terribly useful, and contains some errors (e.g. op 9/2 definitely has a contrasting section). I'm being
WP:BOLD here: feel free to revert and fix if you disagree.
10:1710:17, 9 February 2022diffhist−7
Pinto
rename "entertainers" to "other" -- can anyone think of a better generic term? I had trouble finding George because classical music composers are not normally called "entertainers". Not sure if that term covers models and film directors either.
03:1703:17, 9 October 2021diffhist−357
Bertrand Meyer
Delete assertion that without Eiffel, languages such as Java, C#, Python wouldn't exist -- a statement this strong shouldn't remain in the article without a source
01:3501:35, 11 August 2021diffhist−17
Shirley Crabtree
Unlink "British Wrestling Federation": it was pointing to a page that doesn't mention BWF at all. I think someone needs to create a BWF page before we can make sense of this.Tag: Reverted