20:0520:05, 18 August 2010diffhist−147
Jake Long
there is no good reason to include it and it reads more easily the way i have proposed. i'm unclear as to why you keep reverting this change.
10 August 2010
14:3814:38, 10 August 2010diffhist−147
Jake Long
That is unnecessary information that clutters the way it reads. What I have proposed is more readable and explains the story fully.
11:3711:37, 8 August 2010diffhist−7
Kurt Vonnegut
no mention that he has german citizenship. the article is very clear that his ethnic heritage is german, but his nationality is American
6 August 2010
21:2921:29, 6 August 2010diffhist−380
Martina Navratilova
while she said this. presenting it in this manner perpetuates the idea that if you hated bush that you are somehow a lesser american. the prior quote is clear about her views.
5 August 2010
11:3511:35, 5 August 2010diffhist+18
Devin Hester
cleanup, remove broken citation link. recited with a good link already in article. remove nicknames that aren't cited. have never heard of those nicknames, so if they are legit, then plz recite
4 August 2010
19:5819:58, 4 August 2010diffhist−157
Zlatan Ibrahimović
Undid & redid my rev. to explain my justfication properly -I don't think that pic is of zlatan. He is 6'5. Unless the guy on the LEFT is a giant, there is no way the guy on the RIGHT is 2meters + tall
18:3318:33, 4 August 2010diffhist−157
Zlatan Ibrahimović
I don't think that pic is of zlatan. He is 6 foot 5. Unless the guy on the right is a giant, there is no way the guy on the left is 2meters + tall
3 August 2010
17:5017:50, 3 August 2010diffhist−572
Jake Long
there is no causation explanation in those sentences. something needs to be added or that material is totally disconnected from the rest of the story. couches on the porch? so what?
20:0520:05, 18 August 2010diffhist−147
Jake Long
there is no good reason to include it and it reads more easily the way i have proposed. i'm unclear as to why you keep reverting this change.
10 August 2010
14:3814:38, 10 August 2010diffhist−147
Jake Long
That is unnecessary information that clutters the way it reads. What I have proposed is more readable and explains the story fully.
11:3711:37, 8 August 2010diffhist−7
Kurt Vonnegut
no mention that he has german citizenship. the article is very clear that his ethnic heritage is german, but his nationality is American
6 August 2010
21:2921:29, 6 August 2010diffhist−380
Martina Navratilova
while she said this. presenting it in this manner perpetuates the idea that if you hated bush that you are somehow a lesser american. the prior quote is clear about her views.
5 August 2010
11:3511:35, 5 August 2010diffhist+18
Devin Hester
cleanup, remove broken citation link. recited with a good link already in article. remove nicknames that aren't cited. have never heard of those nicknames, so if they are legit, then plz recite
4 August 2010
19:5819:58, 4 August 2010diffhist−157
Zlatan Ibrahimović
Undid & redid my rev. to explain my justfication properly -I don't think that pic is of zlatan. He is 6'5. Unless the guy on the LEFT is a giant, there is no way the guy on the RIGHT is 2meters + tall
18:3318:33, 4 August 2010diffhist−157
Zlatan Ibrahimović
I don't think that pic is of zlatan. He is 6 foot 5. Unless the guy on the right is a giant, there is no way the guy on the left is 2meters + tall
3 August 2010
17:5017:50, 3 August 2010diffhist−572
Jake Long
there is no causation explanation in those sentences. something needs to be added or that material is totally disconnected from the rest of the story. couches on the porch? so what?