20:4620:46, 15 May 2024diffhist+208
Orlando Furioso
→Other: Added 2 sentences (1 paragraph) about the English word "rodomontade" with a link to the Wikipedia article about the word (which is based on a character in this poem).
5 May 2024
23:3623:36, 5 May 2024diffhist−45
Antithesis
Removed a puzzling sentence after researching it for 1 hour. It made no sense to me or to two other Wikipedia editors (whom I do not know). See the Talk Page, Puzzling English, for our 3 reports. “The [sic; changed to “This” 1 yr. later] is based on the logical phrase or term↵.”Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
23:0723:07, 2 May 2024diffhist+13
Invar
→Applications: In Applications, changed "television shadow-mask frames" to "color-television tubes' shadow-mask frames"currentTags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
22 April 2024
21:0721:07, 22 April 2024diffhist+18
Jōmon period
→top: Replaced "it" with ""straw-rope pattern"" [rope markings] thusly: "...[he] translated "straw-rope pattern" into Japanese as "Jōmon". (I'm not entirely sure this edit is beneficial, but the word "it" seemed to me to equate with "sherds of pottery" from earlier in the sentence.)
23:0523:05, 13 December 2023diffhist+273
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BTS
→top: Added expected length of service (18 months--time varies with branch of service: 18-21 months.) with citation to a NYT article dated yesterday
00:2200:22, 30 August 2023diffhist+8
The Zombies
→1961–1964: In picture caption, added link to Wiki article “Pub” to existing “public house”. 1st sentence of “Pub” article begins: “A pub (short for public house)…”. (Americans don’t know this.)Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
19:1419:14, 4 June 2023diffhist−6
8-track cartridge
→Technology: - “about” from “(about twice the speed of a cassette)”—3 3/4 inches per second is exactly, not about, twice the 1 7/8 i.p.s. of cassettes.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
1 June 2023
21:4021:40, 1 June 2023diffhist+179
The World Is Flat
→External links: Added external link to a podcast book-review of “The World is Flat” episode of “If Books Could Kill” 1:08 Apple/Patreon June 1, 2023Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
26 April 2023
22:1422:14, 26 April 2023diffhist0
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Leviathan
punctuation: commas (+1, -1): "the demon of the deadly sin envy" scans like "...deadly sin-envy" as: who would envy sin??
20:4620:46, 15 May 2024diffhist+208
Orlando Furioso
→Other: Added 2 sentences (1 paragraph) about the English word "rodomontade" with a link to the Wikipedia article about the word (which is based on a character in this poem).
5 May 2024
23:3623:36, 5 May 2024diffhist−45
Antithesis
Removed a puzzling sentence after researching it for 1 hour. It made no sense to me or to two other Wikipedia editors (whom I do not know). See the Talk Page, Puzzling English, for our 3 reports. “The [sic; changed to “This” 1 yr. later] is based on the logical phrase or term↵.”Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
23:0723:07, 2 May 2024diffhist+13
Invar
→Applications: In Applications, changed "television shadow-mask frames" to "color-television tubes' shadow-mask frames"currentTags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
22 April 2024
21:0721:07, 22 April 2024diffhist+18
Jōmon period
→top: Replaced "it" with ""straw-rope pattern"" [rope markings] thusly: "...[he] translated "straw-rope pattern" into Japanese as "Jōmon". (I'm not entirely sure this edit is beneficial, but the word "it" seemed to me to equate with "sherds of pottery" from earlier in the sentence.)
23:0523:05, 13 December 2023diffhist+273
m
BTS
→top: Added expected length of service (18 months--time varies with branch of service: 18-21 months.) with citation to a NYT article dated yesterday
00:2200:22, 30 August 2023diffhist+8
The Zombies
→1961–1964: In picture caption, added link to Wiki article “Pub” to existing “public house”. 1st sentence of “Pub” article begins: “A pub (short for public house)…”. (Americans don’t know this.)Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
19:1419:14, 4 June 2023diffhist−6
8-track cartridge
→Technology: - “about” from “(about twice the speed of a cassette)”—3 3/4 inches per second is exactly, not about, twice the 1 7/8 i.p.s. of cassettes.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
1 June 2023
21:4021:40, 1 June 2023diffhist+179
The World Is Flat
→External links: Added external link to a podcast book-review of “The World is Flat” episode of “If Books Could Kill” 1:08 Apple/Patreon June 1, 2023Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
26 April 2023
22:1422:14, 26 April 2023diffhist0
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Leviathan
punctuation: commas (+1, -1): "the demon of the deadly sin envy" scans like "...deadly sin-envy" as: who would envy sin??