23:0323:03, 30 March 2023diffhist+155
List of massacres of Indigenous Australians
Rephrased to avoid passive voice evasions. Added 'mining' as the gold rush was a significant cause of European population increase and subsequent massacres. Tightened language eg 'land clearing' not 'clearing of land'
12:5012:50, 8 March 2023diffhist+303
List of massacres of Indigenous Australians
Removed euphemistic language of 'clashes' and mitigating qualifiers unsupported by citations (eg 'controversial', 'some of which were massacres') about Newcastle Map project. Updated Newcastle Map statistics.
12:1412:14, 8 March 2023diffhist−147
Stolen Generations
Removed sentence claiming 'only one or two' files had 'being Aboriginal' on them as it was contradicted by the cited source.
23:0323:03, 30 March 2023diffhist+155
List of massacres of Indigenous Australians
Rephrased to avoid passive voice evasions. Added 'mining' as the gold rush was a significant cause of European population increase and subsequent massacres. Tightened language eg 'land clearing' not 'clearing of land'
12:5012:50, 8 March 2023diffhist+303
List of massacres of Indigenous Australians
Removed euphemistic language of 'clashes' and mitigating qualifiers unsupported by citations (eg 'controversial', 'some of which were massacres') about Newcastle Map project. Updated Newcastle Map statistics.
12:1412:14, 8 March 2023diffhist−147
Stolen Generations
Removed sentence claiming 'only one or two' files had 'being Aboriginal' on them as it was contradicted by the cited source.