22:4122:41, 16 June 2013diffhist−407
Italian garden
I've removed some of the repetition and vagueness, and some of the tendentious writing about influence. But it's all so vague. It needs major work: facts, dates, references etc.
21:3221:32, 28 November 2012diffhist−14
Leica M9
Changed "entry level" to "cheapest" for clarity. Removed "full frame", for clarity; all M cameras are full frame as it says at the top of the article.~~~~
21:2921:29, 28 November 2012diffhist−92
Leica M9
Parenthetical isn't a noun, mate. Removed "billed as the essence" etc. That's for the advertising, not for Wikipedia.~~~~
21:0721:07, 28 November 2012diffhist+229
Leica M9
The M9-E is like the M9 and M9-P only it's missing the frame-line selection lever. It's the critical difference and the point of the M9-E paragraph. You need to know what the lever does.~~~~
22:4122:41, 16 June 2013diffhist−407
Italian garden
I've removed some of the repetition and vagueness, and some of the tendentious writing about influence. But it's all so vague. It needs major work: facts, dates, references etc.
21:3221:32, 28 November 2012diffhist−14
Leica M9
Changed "entry level" to "cheapest" for clarity. Removed "full frame", for clarity; all M cameras are full frame as it says at the top of the article.~~~~
21:2921:29, 28 November 2012diffhist−92
Leica M9
Parenthetical isn't a noun, mate. Removed "billed as the essence" etc. That's for the advertising, not for Wikipedia.~~~~
21:0721:07, 28 November 2012diffhist+229
Leica M9
The M9-E is like the M9 and M9-P only it's missing the frame-line selection lever. It's the critical difference and the point of the M9-E paragraph. You need to know what the lever does.~~~~