05:0305:03, 25 November 2013diffhist−443
Cowbell
Fixed sentence structure and grammar. Moved/deleted/added a handful sentences to increase readability .Only thing left to do is to possibly organize some of the information for better flow.Tag: Visual edit
03:3503:35, 25 November 2013diffhist−18
Sekolah Seri Puteri
some copy editing for the first few paragraphs. I started to fix run on sentences, but there are so many. I don't want to alter the original too much. Advice?? also fixed a few grammatical errors/Tag: Visual edit
08:1108:11, 24 November 2013diffhist+751
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User:JCDavis13/sandbox
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05:0305:03, 25 November 2013diffhist−443
Cowbell
Fixed sentence structure and grammar. Moved/deleted/added a handful sentences to increase readability .Only thing left to do is to possibly organize some of the information for better flow.Tag: Visual edit
03:3503:35, 25 November 2013diffhist−18
Sekolah Seri Puteri
some copy editing for the first few paragraphs. I started to fix run on sentences, but there are so many. I don't want to alter the original too much. Advice?? also fixed a few grammatical errors/Tag: Visual edit
08:1108:11, 24 November 2013diffhist+751
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User:JCDavis13/sandbox
←Created page with '{{User sandbox}} <!-- EDIT BELOW THIS LINE --> {{ {{{|safesubst:}}}#invoke:Unsubst||$N=Content |date=__DATE__ |$B= <!--{{Content}} begin-->{{Ambox | name = Cont...'