03:4503:45, 7 September 2016diffhist−396
Vox Day
Undid revision 738138478 by
Pkeets (
talk) "Primary sources are original materials that are close to an event, and are often accounts written by people who are directly involved" find another source
00:4100:41, 8 July 2016diffhist−4
People v. Turner
Making this sound like an encyclopedia and not a letter to a friend - substituting "the victim" and "Doe" for "Emily"
23:4023:40, 7 July 2016diffhist−7,249
People v. Turner
It adds nothing to the article to do a bad job copy/pasting the narrative from the police report. The entire section is one massive violation of BLP.
02:5902:59, 7 July 2016diffhist−10
People v. Turner
changing keyword "attempted rape" to "rape" because it links to the definition for "sexual assault", which is already a keyword
03:4503:45, 7 September 2016diffhist−396
Vox Day
Undid revision 738138478 by
Pkeets (
talk) "Primary sources are original materials that are close to an event, and are often accounts written by people who are directly involved" find another source
00:4100:41, 8 July 2016diffhist−4
People v. Turner
Making this sound like an encyclopedia and not a letter to a friend - substituting "the victim" and "Doe" for "Emily"
23:4023:40, 7 July 2016diffhist−7,249
People v. Turner
It adds nothing to the article to do a bad job copy/pasting the narrative from the police report. The entire section is one massive violation of BLP.
02:5902:59, 7 July 2016diffhist−10
People v. Turner
changing keyword "attempted rape" to "rape" because it links to the definition for "sexual assault", which is already a keyword