00:4500:45, 8 July 2024diffhist−28
Ekam - The Oneness Temple
→top: removing NPOV banner, as all quoted sections by User:NatGertler are removed and I believe the underlying [WP:PROMO] and [WP:EPSTYLE] are also addressed. will inform in talk pageTags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
23:5523:55, 7 July 2024diffhist−55
Ekam - The Oneness Temple
Per https://english.religion.info/2008/07/13/india-a-visit-to-the-oneness-temple-of-amma-bhagwan/ which is the most quoted source on the subject the temple was built by the Oneness organization and not White Lotus.
22:5622:56, 2 July 2024diffhist−169
Aurangzeb
→Early life: Fixed [WP:EPSTYLE] - the language is often not neutral and written with [MOS:PUFFERY]. an example of lack of neutrality is it mentions what the subject of the article who lived 350 years before today "felt", at best this is [WP:NOR].Tags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
22:5122:51, 1 July 2024diffhist−34
Aurangzeb
→Early life: removes [MOS:PUFFERY] - "scholarly" for subjects , "powerful" for an elephant, "celebrated" instead of documenting, "heroism".Tags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
22:3922:39, 1 July 2024diffhist+55
Aurangzeb
Undid revision
1231968635 by
Toddy1 (
talk) Undoing unexplained undoing of my edit which improved [WP:EPSTYLE], conveyed the same information without assuming intent of actors (which can be construed as [WP:NOR] and more grammatical form. Undoing this action which has no reasons only a subjective "earlier was better" which is subjective.Tags: UndoMobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
00:2200:22, 1 July 2024diffhist+55
Aurangzeb
→Early life: [WP:EPSTYLE] - changes the language to simpler words and removed unnecessary sentences. Makes more coherent.Tags: RevertedMobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
22:0522:05, 18 May 2024diffhist−276
Tipu Sultan
Improve [WP:EPSTYLE], remove [MOS:PUFFERY], reorganizes the lead to better reflect the importance of events related in the life the [WP:BLP]Tag: Visual edit
19:3419:34, 13 May 2024diffhist−188
DD National
→History: Removes unnecessary unverifiable statements opposed to [WP:EPSTYLE] and irrelevant to the articles purposeTags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
00:4500:45, 8 July 2024diffhist−28
Ekam - The Oneness Temple
→top: removing NPOV banner, as all quoted sections by User:NatGertler are removed and I believe the underlying [WP:PROMO] and [WP:EPSTYLE] are also addressed. will inform in talk pageTags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
23:5523:55, 7 July 2024diffhist−55
Ekam - The Oneness Temple
Per https://english.religion.info/2008/07/13/india-a-visit-to-the-oneness-temple-of-amma-bhagwan/ which is the most quoted source on the subject the temple was built by the Oneness organization and not White Lotus.
22:5622:56, 2 July 2024diffhist−169
Aurangzeb
→Early life: Fixed [WP:EPSTYLE] - the language is often not neutral and written with [MOS:PUFFERY]. an example of lack of neutrality is it mentions what the subject of the article who lived 350 years before today "felt", at best this is [WP:NOR].Tags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
22:5122:51, 1 July 2024diffhist−34
Aurangzeb
→Early life: removes [MOS:PUFFERY] - "scholarly" for subjects , "powerful" for an elephant, "celebrated" instead of documenting, "heroism".Tags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
22:3922:39, 1 July 2024diffhist+55
Aurangzeb
Undid revision
1231968635 by
Toddy1 (
talk) Undoing unexplained undoing of my edit which improved [WP:EPSTYLE], conveyed the same information without assuming intent of actors (which can be construed as [WP:NOR] and more grammatical form. Undoing this action which has no reasons only a subjective "earlier was better" which is subjective.Tags: UndoMobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
00:2200:22, 1 July 2024diffhist+55
Aurangzeb
→Early life: [WP:EPSTYLE] - changes the language to simpler words and removed unnecessary sentences. Makes more coherent.Tags: RevertedMobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
22:0522:05, 18 May 2024diffhist−276
Tipu Sultan
Improve [WP:EPSTYLE], remove [MOS:PUFFERY], reorganizes the lead to better reflect the importance of events related in the life the [WP:BLP]Tag: Visual edit
19:3419:34, 13 May 2024diffhist−188
DD National
→History: Removes unnecessary unverifiable statements opposed to [WP:EPSTYLE] and irrelevant to the articles purposeTags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit