15:5615:56, 31 December 2023diffhist−4,528
Robert Ballagh
→Career: Ok, this is a massive job, there is so much unneeded and nonsensical detail here. Especially considering this is a biography of a living person with most sources coming from interviews and his memoirs. I am being generous in what I leave here as I understand his importance, but this article needs more work to make it neutral and encyclopaedic.Tag: Visual edit
17:5317:53, 30 December 2023diffhist−2,891
Robert Ballagh
Trimming lead *again*, removing puffery. Group shows don't belong on any artists page. There is an amazing amount of non-encyclopedic language and does not read as nuetral at present. Please let's hash this out in Talk.Tag: Visual edit
15:5615:56, 31 December 2023diffhist−4,528
Robert Ballagh
→Career: Ok, this is a massive job, there is so much unneeded and nonsensical detail here. Especially considering this is a biography of a living person with most sources coming from interviews and his memoirs. I am being generous in what I leave here as I understand his importance, but this article needs more work to make it neutral and encyclopaedic.Tag: Visual edit
17:5317:53, 30 December 2023diffhist−2,891
Robert Ballagh
Trimming lead *again*, removing puffery. Group shows don't belong on any artists page. There is an amazing amount of non-encyclopedic language and does not read as nuetral at present. Please let's hash this out in Talk.Tag: Visual edit