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The Global Fund to Fight AIDS, Tuberculosis and Malaria
I made significant edits to the creation section in an attempt to address the overly detailed and personal essay tags, which I removed. I checked original sources and added more sources. I removed references to extraneous organizations or minor players to refocus the section on the Global Fund.
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The Global Fund to Fight AIDS, Tuberculosis and Malaria
Attempted to address excessive detail flag by removing irrelevant paragraphs. Grammar changes to conform with Wikipedia standards. Eliminated some excessive quotes, reduced others. Eliminated editorializing not supported by listed references.
16:3716:37, 14 July 2018diffhist−5,198
The Global Fund to Fight AIDS, Tuberculosis and Malaria
I made significant edits to the creation section in an attempt to address the overly detailed and personal essay tags, which I removed. I checked original sources and added more sources. I removed references to extraneous organizations or minor players to refocus the section on the Global Fund.
01:2601:26, 9 July 2018diffhist−5,515
The Global Fund to Fight AIDS, Tuberculosis and Malaria
Attempted to address excessive detail flag by removing irrelevant paragraphs. Grammar changes to conform with Wikipedia standards. Eliminated some excessive quotes, reduced others. Eliminated editorializing not supported by listed references.