14:0514:05, 26 June 2024diffhist−3
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Serial Experiments Lain
→Plot: Removed needless italics on one word. Changed 'shatter' to 'fracture'—something cannot 'begin' to shatter, as the act of shattering is in the moment that something breaks into pieces. This either happens or it does not.Tag: Visual edit
08:2008:20, 4 June 2024diffhist+1
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Spiritfarer
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103.70.152.8 (
talk) - The word 'wrangle' isn't better in this case as the act of gathering the creatures is simply to run and make contact with them, at which point they automatically return to their mother. The gameplay and act of gathering them isn't akin to 'wrangling' and there is no struggle involved.currentTag: Undo
13:0513:05, 5 March 2024diffhist−914
END Fund
Removed repeated paragraph and replaced with other contextual info about the fund. Moved citation to existing paragraph for consistency.currentTag: Visual edit
14:0514:05, 26 June 2024diffhist−3
m
Serial Experiments Lain
→Plot: Removed needless italics on one word. Changed 'shatter' to 'fracture'—something cannot 'begin' to shatter, as the act of shattering is in the moment that something breaks into pieces. This either happens or it does not.Tag: Visual edit
08:2008:20, 4 June 2024diffhist+1
m
Spiritfarer
Undid revision
1227162857 by
103.70.152.8 (
talk) - The word 'wrangle' isn't better in this case as the act of gathering the creatures is simply to run and make contact with them, at which point they automatically return to their mother. The gameplay and act of gathering them isn't akin to 'wrangling' and there is no struggle involved.currentTag: Undo
13:0513:05, 5 March 2024diffhist−914
END Fund
Removed repeated paragraph and replaced with other contextual info about the fund. Moved citation to existing paragraph for consistency.currentTag: Visual edit