21:2321:23, 20 December 2022diffhist+15
Blue Goose Records
Added Alan Seidler to the artists who recorded under this label. Seidler's 1975 Blue Goose album Duke of Ook featured comedic songs of various forms of "old-time" piano musiccurrentTags: Visual editMobile editMobile web edit
20 May 2022
01:3401:34, 20 May 2022diffhist+24
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Banjo fitting
Adding/removing wikilink(s) First sentence, adding link to "hydraulic machinery" for the work "hydraulic" to provide more context.
18 April 2022
03:3303:33, 18 April 2022diffhist+27
Space Launch System
→Early plans: 2nd sentence: changed "a target date for the system being operational," to "a target date of December 31, 2016 for the system to be fully operational," as stated by Public Law 111-267.
03:3003:30, 18 April 2022diffhist+35
Space Launch System
→Early plans: 1st sentence: Specified Public Law 111–267 in the text as the "act of Congress". 2nd sentence: changed "a certain mass" to "130 tons or more of payload" as specified in PL 111-267.
16:0516:05, 12 April 2022diffhist+24
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Banjo fitting
Copyedit (minor): Added "(upper center of photo)" to brake caliper photo caption, to point out which parts are being referred to.
00:1900:19, 12 April 2022diffhist+6
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Banjo fitting
Spelling/grammar/punctuation/typographical correction: First paragraph, "...transfer. It is..." was "...transfer, is...".
00:1300:13, 12 April 2022diffhist+7
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Banjo fitting
Spelling/grammar/punctuation/typographical correction: ..."through the center of the union" was "through center the union".
00:1100:11, 12 April 2022diffhist−3
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Banjo fitting
Spelling/grammar/punctuation/typographical correction: "internally relieved bolt" was "an internally relieved bolt".
23:5723:57, 11 April 2022diffhist+362
Banjo fitting
Extensive revision of first paragraph to provide more detailed explanation. Moved one sentence to "Common applications" section. Put "internally relieved bolt" in proper location - such a bolt is only part of a banjo connection, as explained.
23:3123:31, 11 April 2022diffhist−31
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Banjo fitting
Spelling/grammar/punctuation/typographical correction: Removed stray text left over from schematic figure edit.
23:1623:16, 11 April 2022diffhist+232
Banjo fitting
Added schematic of an assembled banjo fitting (generic, not to scale) to show fluid path within a typical fitting. 1st sentence: changed "comprises" to "is comprised of". Expanding article
23:0623:06, 11 April 2022diffhist+277
Banjo fitting
Added photo of two full banjo fittings - one disassembled to show individual parts, the other assembled to a tee fitting and a hose.
19:0419:04, 23 January 2022diffhist+127
UGM-133 Trident II
→History: Fifth paragraph: Added details from astronautix.com (already cited) about first Trident II test flights from LC-46 at Cape Canaveral, including range of land-based test dates. Adding/improving reference(s) Expanding article
14:3414:34, 17 January 2022diffhist+1
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Kenneth Arnold
→Aftermath: Spelling/grammar/punctuation/typographical correction Changed quote marks to indicate all words to end of sentence quote the Cosmopolitan piece, as confirmed by reviewing cited article.
21:2321:23, 20 December 2022diffhist+15
Blue Goose Records
Added Alan Seidler to the artists who recorded under this label. Seidler's 1975 Blue Goose album Duke of Ook featured comedic songs of various forms of "old-time" piano musiccurrentTags: Visual editMobile editMobile web edit
20 May 2022
01:3401:34, 20 May 2022diffhist+24
m
Banjo fitting
Adding/removing wikilink(s) First sentence, adding link to "hydraulic machinery" for the work "hydraulic" to provide more context.
18 April 2022
03:3303:33, 18 April 2022diffhist+27
Space Launch System
→Early plans: 2nd sentence: changed "a target date for the system being operational," to "a target date of December 31, 2016 for the system to be fully operational," as stated by Public Law 111-267.
03:3003:30, 18 April 2022diffhist+35
Space Launch System
→Early plans: 1st sentence: Specified Public Law 111–267 in the text as the "act of Congress". 2nd sentence: changed "a certain mass" to "130 tons or more of payload" as specified in PL 111-267.
16:0516:05, 12 April 2022diffhist+24
m
Banjo fitting
Copyedit (minor): Added "(upper center of photo)" to brake caliper photo caption, to point out which parts are being referred to.
00:1900:19, 12 April 2022diffhist+6
m
Banjo fitting
Spelling/grammar/punctuation/typographical correction: First paragraph, "...transfer. It is..." was "...transfer, is...".
00:1300:13, 12 April 2022diffhist+7
m
Banjo fitting
Spelling/grammar/punctuation/typographical correction: ..."through the center of the union" was "through center the union".
00:1100:11, 12 April 2022diffhist−3
m
Banjo fitting
Spelling/grammar/punctuation/typographical correction: "internally relieved bolt" was "an internally relieved bolt".
23:5723:57, 11 April 2022diffhist+362
Banjo fitting
Extensive revision of first paragraph to provide more detailed explanation. Moved one sentence to "Common applications" section. Put "internally relieved bolt" in proper location - such a bolt is only part of a banjo connection, as explained.
23:3123:31, 11 April 2022diffhist−31
m
Banjo fitting
Spelling/grammar/punctuation/typographical correction: Removed stray text left over from schematic figure edit.
23:1623:16, 11 April 2022diffhist+232
Banjo fitting
Added schematic of an assembled banjo fitting (generic, not to scale) to show fluid path within a typical fitting. 1st sentence: changed "comprises" to "is comprised of". Expanding article
23:0623:06, 11 April 2022diffhist+277
Banjo fitting
Added photo of two full banjo fittings - one disassembled to show individual parts, the other assembled to a tee fitting and a hose.
19:0419:04, 23 January 2022diffhist+127
UGM-133 Trident II
→History: Fifth paragraph: Added details from astronautix.com (already cited) about first Trident II test flights from LC-46 at Cape Canaveral, including range of land-based test dates. Adding/improving reference(s) Expanding article
14:3414:34, 17 January 2022diffhist+1
m
Kenneth Arnold
→Aftermath: Spelling/grammar/punctuation/typographical correction Changed quote marks to indicate all words to end of sentence quote the Cosmopolitan piece, as confirmed by reviewing cited article.