17:1317:13, 27 November 2023diffhist+69
Cedar Point
"rickety and rough" seems unsourced and otherwise an opinion re. Cyclone, changed it to a more objective general description of the ride. Also, added more information about where Jason McClure went, as John Hildebrandt's departure is described but Jason McClure's is not. The source for this is the same as the existing one about Carrie Boldman.
19:3119:31, 13 November 2023diffhist+177
Magnum XL-200
Added some detail about the 2023 "incident" and corrected the date; while the article is from August 4, the stoppage occurred July 31 and the ride was still closed by the day before, so all info I added comes straight from the existing source.Tag: Reverted
17:1317:13, 27 November 2023diffhist+69
Cedar Point
"rickety and rough" seems unsourced and otherwise an opinion re. Cyclone, changed it to a more objective general description of the ride. Also, added more information about where Jason McClure went, as John Hildebrandt's departure is described but Jason McClure's is not. The source for this is the same as the existing one about Carrie Boldman.
19:3119:31, 13 November 2023diffhist+177
Magnum XL-200
Added some detail about the 2023 "incident" and corrected the date; while the article is from August 4, the stoppage occurred July 31 and the ride was still closed by the day before, so all info I added comes straight from the existing source.Tag: Reverted