A user with 73 edits. Account created on 12 March 2024.
12 July 2024
- 00:57 00:57, 12 July 2024 diff hist +40 m Alberto Costa (British politician) Added data for context to a recent edit. current
11 July 2024
- 23:45 23:45, 11 July 2024 diff hist +1,234 Talk:Woodhouse Colliery →Maths just don't make sense in this article: new section current Tag: New topic
6 July 2024
- 22:26 22:26, 6 July 2024 diff hist −18 m Prime Ministerial Car Removed reference to PM in favour of simply 'occupants', since these cars may carry other people (e.g. ministers or PM's family members) without the PM being present. Also changed 'protect against' to 'safeguard in the event of'. I feel that 'protect against' might imply a degree of 'prevention' - and in any event 'safeguard' seems like more appropriate language. current
- 03:57 03:57, 6 July 2024 diff hist +301 m Prime Ministerial Car added a 'clarification required' tag
- 03:49 03:49, 6 July 2024 diff hist +8 m Prime Ministerial Car Corrected poor writing standards - the section begins by discussing 'cars' plural but suddenly jumped to discussing a singular case.
- 03:45 03:45, 6 July 2024 diff hist 0 m Armour-piercing ammunition corrected 'capable at' to 'capable of'. current
29 June 2024
- 17:08 17:08, 29 June 2024 diff hist +598 Talk:Lobito Herreño →Are there any feral Lobito Herreno dogs on any of the Canary Islands?: new section current Tag: New topic
28 June 2024
- 00:23 00:23, 28 June 2024 diff hist −74 m Potchefstroom Removed phrase about the local airport from a section on sports facilities - it was unreferenced and nothing to do with sports facilities.
27 June 2024
- 23:07 23:07, 27 June 2024 diff hist −61 m Laura Muir Edited for clarity - previous version was garbled and used excessive commas.
- 23:00 23:00, 27 June 2024 diff hist −11 m Laura Muir removed mention of Gemma Reekie as this article is about Laura Muir. Also, this edit corrects a syntax error whereby the subjects of the sentence were "Muir and Reekie", but subsequently referred to by the singular pronoun 'her'.
- 22:50 22:50, 27 June 2024 diff hist −90 m Mayfair (cigarette) Removed reference to defunct 'Gallaher Group'. Removed advertising tagline as its inclusion was in breach of UK law. Acting in line with WP box warning that this article reads like a commercial advert.
- 22:42 22:42, 27 June 2024 diff hist −357 m Mayfair (cigarette) Removed reference to Gallaher Group as it no longer exists. Removed advertising slogan as UK law prohibits this. Removed reference to value and price as incorrect, outdated and in breach of UK law.
- 22:36 22:36, 27 June 2024 diff hist −41 m Mayfair (cigarette) Removed word 'English' from 'English brand of cigarette'. The intended phrase was undoubtedly "UK brand", but since the article goes on to mention the international markets for this brand it is clearly incorrect to call it either an English or a UK brand.
- 21:52 21:52, 27 June 2024 diff hist −30 m Glasgow Central (UK Parliament constituency) No edit summary
- 21:49 21:49, 27 June 2024 diff hist −78 Glasgow Central (UK Parliament constituency) Made some edits to reflect the fact this is now a former constituency - including changing tenses. Some of the content strikes me as drivelous - phrases like "Glasgow city centre to the north including Kelvingrove", when Kelvingrove is in the west. Also vague statements about student populations and "best educated constituency". I've done as much as I can be bothered to do, to at least bring key aspects up to date in 2024.
25 June 2024
- 16:43 16:43, 25 June 2024 diff hist +1,647 Talk:Hereditary (film) →Suggestion for improvement: new section current Tag: New topic
18 June 2024
- 23:31 23:31, 18 June 2024 diff hist +624 Talk:Quaker Houghton →No consistency of company's name: new section current Tag: New topic
- 23:24 23:24, 18 June 2024 diff hist +57 Quaker Houghton No edit summary
- 21:08 21:08, 18 June 2024 diff hist +245 m White sponge nevus added two additional supporting references
- 21:04 21:04, 18 June 2024 diff hist +47 m White sponge nevus Added reference where [citation needed] message was present.
- 01:04 01:04, 18 June 2024 diff hist −2 m White sponge nevus Correction of syntax error, removed word "a"
- 01:02 01:02, 18 June 2024 diff hist +56 m White sponge nevus Corrected syntax errors and de facto scientific errors as per previously cited references.
- 00:54 00:54, 18 June 2024 diff hist +9 m White sponge nevus Corrected own revision whereby "flora" is now revised to the contemporary term "microbiota".
- 00:50 00:50, 18 June 2024 diff hist +2 m White sponge nevus Corrected syntax error "a mutations", including correction that this pathology is caused by one or more mutations. Removed word "certain" as in "certain genes" as it was redundant/superfluous.
- 00:42 00:42, 18 June 2024 diff hist +133 m Kim Jong Un Added further supporting reference to scientific literature.
- 00:31 00:31, 18 June 2024 diff hist +222 m Kim Jong Un Added Body Mass Index data based on already-cited observations of International Observers, for scientific purposes and readers' information.
- 00:22 00:22, 18 June 2024 diff hist +3 m Kim Jong Un inserted missing word 'a' and corrected tense from present to past tense.
- 00:15 00:15, 18 June 2024 diff hist −9 m Kim Jong Un The quoted reference suggests Mr Kim gained 30kg in weight/mass - it does not state that his weight gain was in the form of fat. It is unkind and inaccurate to suggest otherwise. He may have been working out.
17 June 2024
- 22:14 22:14, 17 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Alberto Costa (British politician) Expanded on pre-existing sentence with further information from existing reference used.
- 22:07 22:07, 17 June 2024 diff hist +51 Alberto Costa (British politician) No edit summary
- 22:00 22:00, 17 June 2024 diff hist +56 m Alberto Costa (British politician) adding additional important information from pre-existing reference to that previously noted in the article.
- 21:57 21:57, 17 June 2024 diff hist +165 m Alberto Costa (British politician) Providing additional information to pre-existing sentence. Tag: use of deprecated (unreliable) source
- 21:50 21:50, 17 June 2024 diff hist +282 m Alberto Costa (British politician) Expands on pre-existing sentence regarding Mr Costa's support of the UK leaving the European Union (Brexit).
- 21:39 21:39, 17 June 2024 diff hist +303 m Alberto Costa (British politician) Added reference to Parliamentary election section
- 19:28 19:28, 17 June 2024 diff hist +101 m Alberto Costa (British politician) Added a missing space and expanded detail on Mr Costa's education.
- 17:45 17:45, 17 June 2024 diff hist +1,027 m White sponge nevus No edit summary
13 June 2024
- 00:18 00:18, 13 June 2024 diff hist +2,024 Talk:Horsfield's tarsier →Quality issues with this article: new section current Tag: New topic
7 June 2024
- 20:31 20:31, 7 June 2024 diff hist +388 Talk:Jupiter →'Snowline' needs explanation: Reply Tag: Reply
- 20:26 20:26, 7 June 2024 diff hist +54 m Jupiter As per question I raised in Talk, someone replied that 'snow line' is primarily known as 'frost line'. There was one other mention of 'snow line' in the article, therefore I have changed the other two mentions from 'snowline' to 'snow line' and linked them to the relevant WP article.
- 13:20 13:20, 7 June 2024 diff hist +1,677 Talk:Nitrogen →"uncombined element": new section Tag: New topic
- 12:38 12:38, 7 June 2024 diff hist +14 m Nitrogen Added link to 'pnictogen' article
- 12:37 12:37, 7 June 2024 diff hist +657 Talk:Jupiter →'Snowline' needs explanation: new section Tag: New topic
6 June 2024
- 21:17 21:17, 6 June 2024 diff hist +2 m Nicola Sturgeon The original sentence was not syntactically correct. Fixed.
- 17:08 17:08, 6 June 2024 diff hist +2,001 Talk:Casemate →Excellent etymology section: new section current Tag: New topic
29 May 2024
- 21:01 21:01, 29 May 2024 diff hist +1 1988–1994 British broadcasting voice restrictions Changed "killed several British soldiers" to "killed eight British soldiers". The use of the word "several" was at best inaccurate and at worst flippant and disrespectful. This is an encyclopaedia, and language like "several" is a clear case of WP:weaselwords.
24 May 2024
- 12:07 12:07, 24 May 2024 diff hist −193 Billy Luther No edit summary
- 11:53 11:53, 24 May 2024 diff hist +45 Frybread Face and Me →Cast: In addition to being the writer and director, Billy Luther narrates this film as the lead character Benny, as grown-up Benny looking back on this story of his summer on the 'rez'.
21 May 2024
- 19:26 19:26, 21 May 2024 diff hist +173 Talk:Navajo →I'm curious about why some Navajo actors are absent from WP: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 16:41 16:41, 21 May 2024 diff hist +17 m Frybread Face and Me Towards the end of the film, the lead character Benny corrects his mum when she calls his cousin 'Frybread Face', which is her nickname. Benny says to his mum, "Her name is Dawn". For the rest of the film Benny's cousin is only given her proper name of Dawn, intended perhaps to symbolise his respect and stronger bond with her, as well as his realisation that he is at the 'dawn' of his adulthood. In any event, the character's real name is Dawn and this should be included for completeness.
- 13:08 13:08, 21 May 2024 diff hist +1,436 Talk:Navajo →I'm curious about why some Navajo actors are absent from WP: new section Tag: New topic
A user with 73 edits. Account created on 12 March 2024.
12 July 2024
- 00:57 00:57, 12 July 2024 diff hist +40 m Alberto Costa (British politician) Added data for context to a recent edit. current
11 July 2024
- 23:45 23:45, 11 July 2024 diff hist +1,234 Talk:Woodhouse Colliery →Maths just don't make sense in this article: new section current Tag: New topic
6 July 2024
- 22:26 22:26, 6 July 2024 diff hist −18 m Prime Ministerial Car Removed reference to PM in favour of simply 'occupants', since these cars may carry other people (e.g. ministers or PM's family members) without the PM being present. Also changed 'protect against' to 'safeguard in the event of'. I feel that 'protect against' might imply a degree of 'prevention' - and in any event 'safeguard' seems like more appropriate language. current
- 03:57 03:57, 6 July 2024 diff hist +301 m Prime Ministerial Car added a 'clarification required' tag
- 03:49 03:49, 6 July 2024 diff hist +8 m Prime Ministerial Car Corrected poor writing standards - the section begins by discussing 'cars' plural but suddenly jumped to discussing a singular case.
- 03:45 03:45, 6 July 2024 diff hist 0 m Armour-piercing ammunition corrected 'capable at' to 'capable of'. current
29 June 2024
- 17:08 17:08, 29 June 2024 diff hist +598 Talk:Lobito Herreño →Are there any feral Lobito Herreno dogs on any of the Canary Islands?: new section current Tag: New topic
28 June 2024
- 00:23 00:23, 28 June 2024 diff hist −74 m Potchefstroom Removed phrase about the local airport from a section on sports facilities - it was unreferenced and nothing to do with sports facilities.
27 June 2024
- 23:07 23:07, 27 June 2024 diff hist −61 m Laura Muir Edited for clarity - previous version was garbled and used excessive commas.
- 23:00 23:00, 27 June 2024 diff hist −11 m Laura Muir removed mention of Gemma Reekie as this article is about Laura Muir. Also, this edit corrects a syntax error whereby the subjects of the sentence were "Muir and Reekie", but subsequently referred to by the singular pronoun 'her'.
- 22:50 22:50, 27 June 2024 diff hist −90 m Mayfair (cigarette) Removed reference to defunct 'Gallaher Group'. Removed advertising tagline as its inclusion was in breach of UK law. Acting in line with WP box warning that this article reads like a commercial advert.
- 22:42 22:42, 27 June 2024 diff hist −357 m Mayfair (cigarette) Removed reference to Gallaher Group as it no longer exists. Removed advertising slogan as UK law prohibits this. Removed reference to value and price as incorrect, outdated and in breach of UK law.
- 22:36 22:36, 27 June 2024 diff hist −41 m Mayfair (cigarette) Removed word 'English' from 'English brand of cigarette'. The intended phrase was undoubtedly "UK brand", but since the article goes on to mention the international markets for this brand it is clearly incorrect to call it either an English or a UK brand.
- 21:52 21:52, 27 June 2024 diff hist −30 m Glasgow Central (UK Parliament constituency) No edit summary
- 21:49 21:49, 27 June 2024 diff hist −78 Glasgow Central (UK Parliament constituency) Made some edits to reflect the fact this is now a former constituency - including changing tenses. Some of the content strikes me as drivelous - phrases like "Glasgow city centre to the north including Kelvingrove", when Kelvingrove is in the west. Also vague statements about student populations and "best educated constituency". I've done as much as I can be bothered to do, to at least bring key aspects up to date in 2024.
25 June 2024
- 16:43 16:43, 25 June 2024 diff hist +1,647 Talk:Hereditary (film) →Suggestion for improvement: new section current Tag: New topic
18 June 2024
- 23:31 23:31, 18 June 2024 diff hist +624 Talk:Quaker Houghton →No consistency of company's name: new section current Tag: New topic
- 23:24 23:24, 18 June 2024 diff hist +57 Quaker Houghton No edit summary
- 21:08 21:08, 18 June 2024 diff hist +245 m White sponge nevus added two additional supporting references
- 21:04 21:04, 18 June 2024 diff hist +47 m White sponge nevus Added reference where [citation needed] message was present.
- 01:04 01:04, 18 June 2024 diff hist −2 m White sponge nevus Correction of syntax error, removed word "a"
- 01:02 01:02, 18 June 2024 diff hist +56 m White sponge nevus Corrected syntax errors and de facto scientific errors as per previously cited references.
- 00:54 00:54, 18 June 2024 diff hist +9 m White sponge nevus Corrected own revision whereby "flora" is now revised to the contemporary term "microbiota".
- 00:50 00:50, 18 June 2024 diff hist +2 m White sponge nevus Corrected syntax error "a mutations", including correction that this pathology is caused by one or more mutations. Removed word "certain" as in "certain genes" as it was redundant/superfluous.
- 00:42 00:42, 18 June 2024 diff hist +133 m Kim Jong Un Added further supporting reference to scientific literature.
- 00:31 00:31, 18 June 2024 diff hist +222 m Kim Jong Un Added Body Mass Index data based on already-cited observations of International Observers, for scientific purposes and readers' information.
- 00:22 00:22, 18 June 2024 diff hist +3 m Kim Jong Un inserted missing word 'a' and corrected tense from present to past tense.
- 00:15 00:15, 18 June 2024 diff hist −9 m Kim Jong Un The quoted reference suggests Mr Kim gained 30kg in weight/mass - it does not state that his weight gain was in the form of fat. It is unkind and inaccurate to suggest otherwise. He may have been working out.
17 June 2024
- 22:14 22:14, 17 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Alberto Costa (British politician) Expanded on pre-existing sentence with further information from existing reference used.
- 22:07 22:07, 17 June 2024 diff hist +51 Alberto Costa (British politician) No edit summary
- 22:00 22:00, 17 June 2024 diff hist +56 m Alberto Costa (British politician) adding additional important information from pre-existing reference to that previously noted in the article.
- 21:57 21:57, 17 June 2024 diff hist +165 m Alberto Costa (British politician) Providing additional information to pre-existing sentence. Tag: use of deprecated (unreliable) source
- 21:50 21:50, 17 June 2024 diff hist +282 m Alberto Costa (British politician) Expands on pre-existing sentence regarding Mr Costa's support of the UK leaving the European Union (Brexit).
- 21:39 21:39, 17 June 2024 diff hist +303 m Alberto Costa (British politician) Added reference to Parliamentary election section
- 19:28 19:28, 17 June 2024 diff hist +101 m Alberto Costa (British politician) Added a missing space and expanded detail on Mr Costa's education.
- 17:45 17:45, 17 June 2024 diff hist +1,027 m White sponge nevus No edit summary
13 June 2024
- 00:18 00:18, 13 June 2024 diff hist +2,024 Talk:Horsfield's tarsier →Quality issues with this article: new section current Tag: New topic
7 June 2024
- 20:31 20:31, 7 June 2024 diff hist +388 Talk:Jupiter →'Snowline' needs explanation: Reply Tag: Reply
- 20:26 20:26, 7 June 2024 diff hist +54 m Jupiter As per question I raised in Talk, someone replied that 'snow line' is primarily known as 'frost line'. There was one other mention of 'snow line' in the article, therefore I have changed the other two mentions from 'snowline' to 'snow line' and linked them to the relevant WP article.
- 13:20 13:20, 7 June 2024 diff hist +1,677 Talk:Nitrogen →"uncombined element": new section Tag: New topic
- 12:38 12:38, 7 June 2024 diff hist +14 m Nitrogen Added link to 'pnictogen' article
- 12:37 12:37, 7 June 2024 diff hist +657 Talk:Jupiter →'Snowline' needs explanation: new section Tag: New topic
6 June 2024
- 21:17 21:17, 6 June 2024 diff hist +2 m Nicola Sturgeon The original sentence was not syntactically correct. Fixed.
- 17:08 17:08, 6 June 2024 diff hist +2,001 Talk:Casemate →Excellent etymology section: new section current Tag: New topic
29 May 2024
- 21:01 21:01, 29 May 2024 diff hist +1 1988–1994 British broadcasting voice restrictions Changed "killed several British soldiers" to "killed eight British soldiers". The use of the word "several" was at best inaccurate and at worst flippant and disrespectful. This is an encyclopaedia, and language like "several" is a clear case of WP:weaselwords.
24 May 2024
- 12:07 12:07, 24 May 2024 diff hist −193 Billy Luther No edit summary
- 11:53 11:53, 24 May 2024 diff hist +45 Frybread Face and Me →Cast: In addition to being the writer and director, Billy Luther narrates this film as the lead character Benny, as grown-up Benny looking back on this story of his summer on the 'rez'.
21 May 2024
- 19:26 19:26, 21 May 2024 diff hist +173 Talk:Navajo →I'm curious about why some Navajo actors are absent from WP: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 16:41 16:41, 21 May 2024 diff hist +17 m Frybread Face and Me Towards the end of the film, the lead character Benny corrects his mum when she calls his cousin 'Frybread Face', which is her nickname. Benny says to his mum, "Her name is Dawn". For the rest of the film Benny's cousin is only given her proper name of Dawn, intended perhaps to symbolise his respect and stronger bond with her, as well as his realisation that he is at the 'dawn' of his adulthood. In any event, the character's real name is Dawn and this should be included for completeness.
- 13:08 13:08, 21 May 2024 diff hist +1,436 Talk:Navajo →I'm curious about why some Navajo actors are absent from WP: new section Tag: New topic