21:1021:10, 3 March 2024diffhist−19
Paracetamol
The citations clearly state efficacy and the language here should reflect that. ("Effective nonspecific medications [for migraine] include acetaminophen" and "Paracetamol 1000 mg provided a small benefit [...] for people with frequent episodic TTH".)Tag: Visual edit
02:4302:43, 25 February 2024diffhist+27
Flaco (owl)
Existing sentence has suboptimal phrasing, reworded to clarify that Flaco took up residence around Central Park, not the person who cut open the enclosureTags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
09:1109:11, 20 February 2024diffhist−1,787
Paracetamol
Lead section is too long, with "possible" side effects making up the bulk of the section. Condensing to focus on key points and validated side effects; a deeper discussion of possible side effects and inconclusive evidence can be saved for the body.Tag: Visual edit
21:1021:10, 3 March 2024diffhist−19
Paracetamol
The citations clearly state efficacy and the language here should reflect that. ("Effective nonspecific medications [for migraine] include acetaminophen" and "Paracetamol 1000 mg provided a small benefit [...] for people with frequent episodic TTH".)Tag: Visual edit
02:4302:43, 25 February 2024diffhist+27
Flaco (owl)
Existing sentence has suboptimal phrasing, reworded to clarify that Flaco took up residence around Central Park, not the person who cut open the enclosureTags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
09:1109:11, 20 February 2024diffhist−1,787
Paracetamol
Lead section is too long, with "possible" side effects making up the bulk of the section. Condensing to focus on key points and validated side effects; a deeper discussion of possible side effects and inconclusive evidence can be saved for the body.Tag: Visual edit