23:2723:27, 2 January 2023diffhist+26
Hegemony
→Sociology: Since this was a long quote from one particular critic it seems strange to attribute it to nonspecified plural 'critics'.Tags: Mobile editMobile web edit
21:3221:32, 6 December 2022diffhist+28
Carl Benjamin
It seems weird to open by describing him as far/alt right, both becourse he personally rejects these labels, and because the buzzfeed article cited as a reference does not actually make this claim. I think this opening is more fair and balanced.Tags: RevertedMobile editMobile web edit
21:2121:21, 6 December 2022diffhist+817
Carl Benjamin
→Political views: I think it makes sense to start with a persons own description of their own political views, before going into characterizations by critics.Tags: RevertedMobile editMobile web edit
20:3520:35, 9 October 2022diffhist+58
Stereotype threat
This sentence felt a bit misleading since different metastudies on the topic have reached contradictory conclusionsTags: RevertedMobile editMobile web edit
00:2500:25, 20 August 2022diffhist−168
New eugenics
→Ethics: The current text was misleading, since Fox critizices traditional (coersive) eugenics, but supports liberal eugenics.Tags: Mobile editMobile web edit
01:0201:02, 4 June 2022diffhist+43
Postal voting in the United States
Revised to accurately portray the information on the linked page. It says that absentee-ballot ballot fraud represents 24 % of the 491 ballot fraud cases; not that there were 491 instances of absentee-ballot ballot fraud.Tags: Mobile editMobile web edit
23:2723:27, 2 January 2023diffhist+26
Hegemony
→Sociology: Since this was a long quote from one particular critic it seems strange to attribute it to nonspecified plural 'critics'.Tags: Mobile editMobile web edit
21:3221:32, 6 December 2022diffhist+28
Carl Benjamin
It seems weird to open by describing him as far/alt right, both becourse he personally rejects these labels, and because the buzzfeed article cited as a reference does not actually make this claim. I think this opening is more fair and balanced.Tags: RevertedMobile editMobile web edit
21:2121:21, 6 December 2022diffhist+817
Carl Benjamin
→Political views: I think it makes sense to start with a persons own description of their own political views, before going into characterizations by critics.Tags: RevertedMobile editMobile web edit
20:3520:35, 9 October 2022diffhist+58
Stereotype threat
This sentence felt a bit misleading since different metastudies on the topic have reached contradictory conclusionsTags: RevertedMobile editMobile web edit
00:2500:25, 20 August 2022diffhist−168
New eugenics
→Ethics: The current text was misleading, since Fox critizices traditional (coersive) eugenics, but supports liberal eugenics.Tags: Mobile editMobile web edit
01:0201:02, 4 June 2022diffhist+43
Postal voting in the United States
Revised to accurately portray the information on the linked page. It says that absentee-ballot ballot fraud represents 24 % of the 491 ballot fraud cases; not that there were 491 instances of absentee-ballot ballot fraud.Tags: Mobile editMobile web edit