A user with 57 edits. Account created on 16 February 2005.
27 June 2024
- 16:04 16:04, 27 June 2024 diff hist −2 m Rugrats Changed “of whom she…butted head with” to “with whom she…butted heads” Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
23 January 2023
- 20:39 20:39, 23 January 2023 diff hist +2 m Cleo Manago →Early life and other activities: Changed "credited the term" to "originated the term" - "to credit [direct object] to [indirect]") is synonymous with "give credit to", "ascribe the origin of [some thing] to" or "acknowledge." Because this verb phrase lacks an indirect object (e.g. "he credited the term [to someone]"). "To credit [direct object]" without an indirect object in the verb phrase would normally imply the accounting/financial sense of the word
21 January 2023
- 03:16 03:16, 21 January 2023 diff hist +2 m The Void (Star Trek: Voyager) Changed “is set on” to “is set upon” as “set upon” is the more common variant of the phrasal verb synonym of “attack”, “pounce on” etc. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
28 August 2022
- 19:26 19:26, 28 August 2022 diff hist −23 Disrupted planet Minor edit: "considered to have caused a planet to be disrupted" --> "considered to have disrupted a planet" Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
4 August 2022
- 16:13 16:13, 4 August 2022 diff hist −2 m Olympic Mountains Small syntax change to turn an awkward leading dependent phrase into a simpler passive predicate. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
2 February 2022
- 00:46 00:46, 2 February 2022 diff hist +1 m Ranu Pani →Climate: Simple grammatical corrections and syntactic cleanup
- 00:42 00:42, 2 February 2022 diff hist +69 m Ranu Pani →History: Grammatical corrections and copy editing to fix errors that appear related to foreign language translation into English
30 September 2021
- 22:00 22:00, 30 September 2021 diff hist −4 m Old Occitan Changed “spelling. This means that” to spelling, meaning that” for improved clairty and to remove extraneous demonstrative phrasing Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
18 September 2021
- 02:48 02:48, 18 September 2021 diff hist −1 m Quantum foam Changed placement and use of commas Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
26 March 2021
- 19:05 19:05, 26 March 2021 diff hist −3 m Ahlamu Changed “be safely be said” to “safely be said” Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15 February 2021
- 18:32 18:32, 15 February 2021 diff hist −1 Heat-pipe tectonics →Beyond heat-pipe tectonics: Changed “either... and” to “either...or” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
9 December 2020
- 03:40 03:40, 9 December 2020 diff hist +12 Trans-Pecos Volcanic Field Changed “most of the field contains” to “most of the volcanoes in the field are.” The original phrasing is awkward and ungrammatical given the typical usage of the referent. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:38 03:38, 9 December 2020 diff hist −66 Trans-Pecos Volcanic Field Removed “which some could be Super-volcanic or just normal volcanoes.” This statement is supposition and adds nothing to the article. Further, “normal volcanoes” is not a useful comparator; statement just makes the article less clear. A cited source would make this statement useful. Finally, it’s not grammatical and the tone is inappropriate. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
30 November 2020
- 04:32 04:32, 30 November 2020 diff hist +2 Boy Interrupted →Adolescence: Changed "ok" to "okay"
20 November 2019
- 05:19 05:19, 20 November 2019 diff hist 0 m Mount Taylor (New Mexico) →Native American traditions: changed "Torquoise" to "Turquoise", the correct spelling; I checked Google for references to a "Torquoise Mountain" and found nothing, indicating that this is just a misspelling and not an idiomatic spelling of the word only used for this mountain.
15 November 2019
- 19:47 19:47, 15 November 2019 diff hist −2 m Cloud changed "universal adaptation of...nomenclature" to "universal adoption" as "adaptation" means "alteration" not "uptake, bring or begin to use", which is what is meant
5 November 2019
- 22:35 22:35, 5 November 2019 diff hist −1 m Centurion (film) →Plot: changed "revenge" to "avenge"
2 November 2019
- 19:38 19:38, 2 November 2019 diff hist +7 m Day of the Dead Changed "boy and young men dressed as granpas" to the grammatically correct "boys" and changed "granpas" to "grandfathers" to correct both spelling and to avoid the word "grandpa" which is not really fitting for its use in this article
1 November 2019
- 23:50 23:50, 1 November 2019 diff hist 0 m Devils Garden volcanic field Changed "The Blowouts" to "the Blowouts" as articles should not be capitalized
13 September 2019
- 15:02 15:02, 13 September 2019 diff hist −3 m Polistes carnifex →Taxonomy and phylogeny: changed "as like" to "like", because "as like" is not a valid conjunction in English
12 August 2019
- 18:28 18:28, 12 August 2019 diff hist −180 m Atlas personality removing "* Yang Xiao Long from the animated series, RWBY, takes on a pseudo-parental role at an early age for her younger sister, Ruby Rose, upon the death of their mother, Summer Rose." - this character is neither notable nor one likely to be understood outside the narrow context of RWBY media/fandom
24 July 2019
- 21:05 21:05, 24 July 2019 diff hist −3 Mount Thielsen Changed "Oregonian volcanoes" to "Oregon volcanoes" - the adjective form "Oregonian," in common usage, applies only to people, not things.
23 July 2019
- 17:16 17:16, 23 July 2019 diff hist 0 m Architect (The Matrix) →Constructing the First Matrixes: - changed "Matrixes" to "Matrices", the correct plural of "Matrix"
1 May 2019
- 21:16 21:16, 1 May 2019 diff hist −8 Trans-Mexican Volcanic Belt →Geologic framework: Removed minor graffito Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
7 March 2019
- 21:42 21:42, 7 March 2019 diff hist −1 m Metabolic rift →Writers since Marx: corrected "immerged" to "emerged"
19 February 2019
- 18:56 18:56, 19 February 2019 diff hist −2 m Plasmid removed "a" from "a chromosomal DNA"; the indirect article is inappropriate here as "chromosomal DNA" is a mass noun
12 February 2019
- 19:24 19:24, 12 February 2019 diff hist −4 Mount Suribachi removed "the" from "the "Mount Pipe""; the phrase "the "Mount Pipe"" is ungrammatical
- 18:35 18:35, 12 February 2019 diff hist −13 m Jemez Mountains Changed "in New Mexico and one in AZ(Hano Tewa)" to "in New Mexico and Arizona"; spacing and abbreviation use were incorrect, and it seems unnecessary and contrary to the tone of the article to explain which Arizona pueblo speaks Tewa, given that this is an article about volcanoes
28 January 2019
- 01:39 01:39, 28 January 2019 diff hist +110 m Torrefazione Italia →Caffè Umbria: added information about locations in Portland, Oregon
27 November 2018
- 22:57 22:57, 27 November 2018 diff hist +336 Talk:Mount Bailey (Oregon)/GA1 →Geography and geology
20 November 2018
- 01:00 01:00, 20 November 2018 diff hist +1 Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them (film) →Plot: changed "arrives by ship to New York en route..." to "...arrives by ship in New York, en route to..."
19 September 2018
- 16:31 16:31, 19 September 2018 diff hist 0 Jumanji →Plot: changed "stroke up a friendship" to "strike up a friendship"
25 February 2018
- 21:59 21:59, 25 February 2018 diff hist −64 m Yuba City, California →Geography: Removed the redundant phrase "The Sutter Buttes are the world's smallest mountain range" as it was redundant, it lacked a citation and awkwardly placed.
16 November 2017
- 23:20 23:20, 16 November 2017 diff hist −9 m Itcha Range →Occupation: removed duplicate "caribou" from first paragraph
30 October 2017
- 17:47 17:47, 30 October 2017 diff hist +19 m Mount McLoughlin Added the synonym "stratovolcano" to "composite volcano" phrase in the first paragraph as "composite volcano" may be unclear and "stratovolcano" is both the article to which the link connects and is a more-frequently-used term
25 February 2016
- 01:25 01:25, 25 February 2016 diff hist +21 User:Eridax700/Books/Ancient Languages and Culture of the Mediterranean and Europe No edit summary current
- 01:25 01:25, 25 February 2016 diff hist −2,756 User:Eridax700/Books/Ancient Languages and Culture of the Mediterranean and Europe No edit summary
- 01:18 01:18, 25 February 2016 diff hist +3,833 N User:Eridax700/Books/Ancient Languages and Culture of the Mediterranean and Europe ←Created page with '{{saved book |title= |subtitle= |cover-image= |cover-color= | setting-papersize = letter | setting-toc = auto | setting-columns = 2 }} == Ancient Languag...'
- 01:15 01:15, 25 February 2016 diff hist +2,282 N User:Eridax700/Books/An Encyclopedia ←Created page with '{{saved book |title= |subtitle= |cover-image= |cover-color= | setting-papersize = letter | setting-toc = auto | setting-columns = 2 }} == An Encyclopedia...' current
18 July 2014
- 23:45 23:45, 18 July 2014 diff hist +86 Talk:IPad Mini →Validity of "Setup Criticism"
- 23:45 23:45, 18 July 2014 diff hist +394 Talk:IPad Mini →Validity of "Setup Criticism": new section
- 23:40 23:40, 18 July 2014 diff hist −165 m IPad Mini →Criticism of setup mode
21 December 2013
- 19:45 19:45, 21 December 2013 diff hist −87 m Mecha Grammatical change to correct hanging reference and predicate without subject
26 February 2011
- 11:39 11:39, 26 February 2011 diff hist +191 Talk:Inconsistent triad No edit summary
31 August 2008
- 05:24 05:24, 31 August 2008 diff hist −2 m Magic lantern The word "China-phile" is unnecessary when we have the word "Sinophile"
26 June 2008
- 05:48 05:48, 26 June 2008 diff hist −25 Sofia Rotaru →Early life and career
6 January 2008
- 02:03 02:03, 6 January 2008 diff hist −1 La Guita Xica No edit summary
- 02:03 02:03, 6 January 2008 diff hist −7 La Guita Xica No edit summary
- 02:02 02:02, 6 January 2008 diff hist +10 La Guita Xica No edit summary
20 March 2006
- 08:58 08:58, 20 March 2006 diff hist −427 Carmot I removed the part about "Full Metal Alchemist," as it wasn't at all relevant to "carmot"
A user with 57 edits. Account created on 16 February 2005.
27 June 2024
- 16:04 16:04, 27 June 2024 diff hist −2 m Rugrats Changed “of whom she…butted head with” to “with whom she…butted heads” Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
23 January 2023
- 20:39 20:39, 23 January 2023 diff hist +2 m Cleo Manago →Early life and other activities: Changed "credited the term" to "originated the term" - "to credit [direct object] to [indirect]") is synonymous with "give credit to", "ascribe the origin of [some thing] to" or "acknowledge." Because this verb phrase lacks an indirect object (e.g. "he credited the term [to someone]"). "To credit [direct object]" without an indirect object in the verb phrase would normally imply the accounting/financial sense of the word
21 January 2023
- 03:16 03:16, 21 January 2023 diff hist +2 m The Void (Star Trek: Voyager) Changed “is set on” to “is set upon” as “set upon” is the more common variant of the phrasal verb synonym of “attack”, “pounce on” etc. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
28 August 2022
- 19:26 19:26, 28 August 2022 diff hist −23 Disrupted planet Minor edit: "considered to have caused a planet to be disrupted" --> "considered to have disrupted a planet" Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
4 August 2022
- 16:13 16:13, 4 August 2022 diff hist −2 m Olympic Mountains Small syntax change to turn an awkward leading dependent phrase into a simpler passive predicate. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
2 February 2022
- 00:46 00:46, 2 February 2022 diff hist +1 m Ranu Pani →Climate: Simple grammatical corrections and syntactic cleanup
- 00:42 00:42, 2 February 2022 diff hist +69 m Ranu Pani →History: Grammatical corrections and copy editing to fix errors that appear related to foreign language translation into English
30 September 2021
- 22:00 22:00, 30 September 2021 diff hist −4 m Old Occitan Changed “spelling. This means that” to spelling, meaning that” for improved clairty and to remove extraneous demonstrative phrasing Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
18 September 2021
- 02:48 02:48, 18 September 2021 diff hist −1 m Quantum foam Changed placement and use of commas Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
26 March 2021
- 19:05 19:05, 26 March 2021 diff hist −3 m Ahlamu Changed “be safely be said” to “safely be said” Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15 February 2021
- 18:32 18:32, 15 February 2021 diff hist −1 Heat-pipe tectonics →Beyond heat-pipe tectonics: Changed “either... and” to “either...or” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
9 December 2020
- 03:40 03:40, 9 December 2020 diff hist +12 Trans-Pecos Volcanic Field Changed “most of the field contains” to “most of the volcanoes in the field are.” The original phrasing is awkward and ungrammatical given the typical usage of the referent. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:38 03:38, 9 December 2020 diff hist −66 Trans-Pecos Volcanic Field Removed “which some could be Super-volcanic or just normal volcanoes.” This statement is supposition and adds nothing to the article. Further, “normal volcanoes” is not a useful comparator; statement just makes the article less clear. A cited source would make this statement useful. Finally, it’s not grammatical and the tone is inappropriate. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
30 November 2020
- 04:32 04:32, 30 November 2020 diff hist +2 Boy Interrupted →Adolescence: Changed "ok" to "okay"
20 November 2019
- 05:19 05:19, 20 November 2019 diff hist 0 m Mount Taylor (New Mexico) →Native American traditions: changed "Torquoise" to "Turquoise", the correct spelling; I checked Google for references to a "Torquoise Mountain" and found nothing, indicating that this is just a misspelling and not an idiomatic spelling of the word only used for this mountain.
15 November 2019
- 19:47 19:47, 15 November 2019 diff hist −2 m Cloud changed "universal adaptation of...nomenclature" to "universal adoption" as "adaptation" means "alteration" not "uptake, bring or begin to use", which is what is meant
5 November 2019
- 22:35 22:35, 5 November 2019 diff hist −1 m Centurion (film) →Plot: changed "revenge" to "avenge"
2 November 2019
- 19:38 19:38, 2 November 2019 diff hist +7 m Day of the Dead Changed "boy and young men dressed as granpas" to the grammatically correct "boys" and changed "granpas" to "grandfathers" to correct both spelling and to avoid the word "grandpa" which is not really fitting for its use in this article
1 November 2019
- 23:50 23:50, 1 November 2019 diff hist 0 m Devils Garden volcanic field Changed "The Blowouts" to "the Blowouts" as articles should not be capitalized
13 September 2019
- 15:02 15:02, 13 September 2019 diff hist −3 m Polistes carnifex →Taxonomy and phylogeny: changed "as like" to "like", because "as like" is not a valid conjunction in English
12 August 2019
- 18:28 18:28, 12 August 2019 diff hist −180 m Atlas personality removing "* Yang Xiao Long from the animated series, RWBY, takes on a pseudo-parental role at an early age for her younger sister, Ruby Rose, upon the death of their mother, Summer Rose." - this character is neither notable nor one likely to be understood outside the narrow context of RWBY media/fandom
24 July 2019
- 21:05 21:05, 24 July 2019 diff hist −3 Mount Thielsen Changed "Oregonian volcanoes" to "Oregon volcanoes" - the adjective form "Oregonian," in common usage, applies only to people, not things.
23 July 2019
- 17:16 17:16, 23 July 2019 diff hist 0 m Architect (The Matrix) →Constructing the First Matrixes: - changed "Matrixes" to "Matrices", the correct plural of "Matrix"
1 May 2019
- 21:16 21:16, 1 May 2019 diff hist −8 Trans-Mexican Volcanic Belt →Geologic framework: Removed minor graffito Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
7 March 2019
- 21:42 21:42, 7 March 2019 diff hist −1 m Metabolic rift →Writers since Marx: corrected "immerged" to "emerged"
19 February 2019
- 18:56 18:56, 19 February 2019 diff hist −2 m Plasmid removed "a" from "a chromosomal DNA"; the indirect article is inappropriate here as "chromosomal DNA" is a mass noun
12 February 2019
- 19:24 19:24, 12 February 2019 diff hist −4 Mount Suribachi removed "the" from "the "Mount Pipe""; the phrase "the "Mount Pipe"" is ungrammatical
- 18:35 18:35, 12 February 2019 diff hist −13 m Jemez Mountains Changed "in New Mexico and one in AZ(Hano Tewa)" to "in New Mexico and Arizona"; spacing and abbreviation use were incorrect, and it seems unnecessary and contrary to the tone of the article to explain which Arizona pueblo speaks Tewa, given that this is an article about volcanoes
28 January 2019
- 01:39 01:39, 28 January 2019 diff hist +110 m Torrefazione Italia →Caffè Umbria: added information about locations in Portland, Oregon
27 November 2018
- 22:57 22:57, 27 November 2018 diff hist +336 Talk:Mount Bailey (Oregon)/GA1 →Geography and geology
20 November 2018
- 01:00 01:00, 20 November 2018 diff hist +1 Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them (film) →Plot: changed "arrives by ship to New York en route..." to "...arrives by ship in New York, en route to..."
19 September 2018
- 16:31 16:31, 19 September 2018 diff hist 0 Jumanji →Plot: changed "stroke up a friendship" to "strike up a friendship"
25 February 2018
- 21:59 21:59, 25 February 2018 diff hist −64 m Yuba City, California →Geography: Removed the redundant phrase "The Sutter Buttes are the world's smallest mountain range" as it was redundant, it lacked a citation and awkwardly placed.
16 November 2017
- 23:20 23:20, 16 November 2017 diff hist −9 m Itcha Range →Occupation: removed duplicate "caribou" from first paragraph
30 October 2017
- 17:47 17:47, 30 October 2017 diff hist +19 m Mount McLoughlin Added the synonym "stratovolcano" to "composite volcano" phrase in the first paragraph as "composite volcano" may be unclear and "stratovolcano" is both the article to which the link connects and is a more-frequently-used term
25 February 2016
- 01:25 01:25, 25 February 2016 diff hist +21 User:Eridax700/Books/Ancient Languages and Culture of the Mediterranean and Europe No edit summary current
- 01:25 01:25, 25 February 2016 diff hist −2,756 User:Eridax700/Books/Ancient Languages and Culture of the Mediterranean and Europe No edit summary
- 01:18 01:18, 25 February 2016 diff hist +3,833 N User:Eridax700/Books/Ancient Languages and Culture of the Mediterranean and Europe ←Created page with '{{saved book |title= |subtitle= |cover-image= |cover-color= | setting-papersize = letter | setting-toc = auto | setting-columns = 2 }} == Ancient Languag...'
- 01:15 01:15, 25 February 2016 diff hist +2,282 N User:Eridax700/Books/An Encyclopedia ←Created page with '{{saved book |title= |subtitle= |cover-image= |cover-color= | setting-papersize = letter | setting-toc = auto | setting-columns = 2 }} == An Encyclopedia...' current
18 July 2014
- 23:45 23:45, 18 July 2014 diff hist +86 Talk:IPad Mini →Validity of "Setup Criticism"
- 23:45 23:45, 18 July 2014 diff hist +394 Talk:IPad Mini →Validity of "Setup Criticism": new section
- 23:40 23:40, 18 July 2014 diff hist −165 m IPad Mini →Criticism of setup mode
21 December 2013
- 19:45 19:45, 21 December 2013 diff hist −87 m Mecha Grammatical change to correct hanging reference and predicate without subject
26 February 2011
- 11:39 11:39, 26 February 2011 diff hist +191 Talk:Inconsistent triad No edit summary
31 August 2008
- 05:24 05:24, 31 August 2008 diff hist −2 m Magic lantern The word "China-phile" is unnecessary when we have the word "Sinophile"
26 June 2008
- 05:48 05:48, 26 June 2008 diff hist −25 Sofia Rotaru →Early life and career
6 January 2008
- 02:03 02:03, 6 January 2008 diff hist −1 La Guita Xica No edit summary
- 02:03 02:03, 6 January 2008 diff hist −7 La Guita Xica No edit summary
- 02:02 02:02, 6 January 2008 diff hist +10 La Guita Xica No edit summary
20 March 2006
- 08:58 08:58, 20 March 2006 diff hist −427 Carmot I removed the part about "Full Metal Alchemist," as it wasn't at all relevant to "carmot"