15:4215:42, 8 July 2024diffhist+11
Noah's Ark Zoo Farm
Made development section more succinct and cohesive by collecting the early years (i.e. conception). Also added recent pictures of zoo (elephant fields and BIAZA sign)Tag: Visual edit
10:1810:18, 13 May 2024diffhist+300
Oyster Yachts
Large edit including: update to address Oyster's return to profit; removal of heavily biased language and clear advertorial-style writing; added sources; rejigged structure to make more sense. This article is still very problematic due to clear bias in original author as well as most sources being Oyster's own website - but I hope this helped a bit.Tag: Visual edit
10:3010:30, 10 May 2024diffhist−1,629
Noah's Ark Zoo Farm
Changed "Owner" status (as the zoo is now a charity and not owned by anyone). Removed superfluous information about marriage counselling and church life which felt irrelevant to the history of the zoo. I appreciate that, as other editors have mentioned, without Bush there is no zoo, but there is so much information on this page which doesn't meet the remit of the zoo.Tags: RevertedVisual edit
15:4215:42, 8 July 2024diffhist+11
Noah's Ark Zoo Farm
Made development section more succinct and cohesive by collecting the early years (i.e. conception). Also added recent pictures of zoo (elephant fields and BIAZA sign)Tag: Visual edit
10:1810:18, 13 May 2024diffhist+300
Oyster Yachts
Large edit including: update to address Oyster's return to profit; removal of heavily biased language and clear advertorial-style writing; added sources; rejigged structure to make more sense. This article is still very problematic due to clear bias in original author as well as most sources being Oyster's own website - but I hope this helped a bit.Tag: Visual edit
10:3010:30, 10 May 2024diffhist−1,629
Noah's Ark Zoo Farm
Changed "Owner" status (as the zoo is now a charity and not owned by anyone). Removed superfluous information about marriage counselling and church life which felt irrelevant to the history of the zoo. I appreciate that, as other editors have mentioned, without Bush there is no zoo, but there is so much information on this page which doesn't meet the remit of the zoo.Tags: RevertedVisual edit