20:2920:29, 8 May 2024diffhist−11
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Hornet
Copy Edit - Replaced the wordy phrase "It is therefore likely that ..." with the direct phrase "... therefore likely ..."Tag: Visual edit
22:3022:30, 15 August 2023diffhist−10
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Star
Changed "existence" to "lifetimes" to emphasize time over the life of a star, replaced an unnecessary repetition of high with a hyphenated expression, and removed an unnecessary comma.Tag: Visual edit
15:0015:00, 14 August 2023diffhist−52
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Star
Reworded a tortured sentence and the following sentence into an easier to read semicolon sentence with more direct phrasing.Tag: Visual edit
14:3414:34, 14 August 2023diffhist−6
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Star
Replaced verb + helping-verb pairs with verbs that mean the same thing and replaced a noun-of phrase with an adjective that means the same thing.Tag: Visual edit
14:3014:30, 14 August 2023diffhist+1
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Star
Changed comma to em dash, which is a more appropriate punctuation mark interjecting the following subordinate clause than a comma is.Tag: Visual edit
20:2920:29, 8 May 2024diffhist−11
m
Hornet
Copy Edit - Replaced the wordy phrase "It is therefore likely that ..." with the direct phrase "... therefore likely ..."Tag: Visual edit
22:3022:30, 15 August 2023diffhist−10
m
Star
Changed "existence" to "lifetimes" to emphasize time over the life of a star, replaced an unnecessary repetition of high with a hyphenated expression, and removed an unnecessary comma.Tag: Visual edit
15:0015:00, 14 August 2023diffhist−52
m
Star
Reworded a tortured sentence and the following sentence into an easier to read semicolon sentence with more direct phrasing.Tag: Visual edit
14:3414:34, 14 August 2023diffhist−6
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Star
Replaced verb + helping-verb pairs with verbs that mean the same thing and replaced a noun-of phrase with an adjective that means the same thing.Tag: Visual edit
14:3014:30, 14 August 2023diffhist+1
m
Star
Changed comma to em dash, which is a more appropriate punctuation mark interjecting the following subordinate clause than a comma is.Tag: Visual edit