15:3615:36, 6 April 2006diffhist+7
Harper's Magazine
"including her" seems a bit POV; changing to "claiming it contains". Also changing order of "without evidence" for clarity
15:3615:36, 6 April 2006diffhist+7
Harper's Magazine
"including her" seems a bit POV; changing to "claiming it contains". Also changing order of "without evidence" for clarity