22:0422:04, 17 April 2011diffhist−45
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Angelo Garcia
Remove redundant reference to "openly discussed" his personal life, which are the same words at the beginning of the next sentence.
20:3820:38, 19 June 2010diffhist−47
Angelo Garcia
again, removed redundant use of the phrase "openly discussed" and use of ", which" when "that" is more appropriate
20:0520:05, 19 June 2010diffhist−25
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Angelo Garcia
I removed some redundancies in order to improve the flow of the text. I also added a Wiki link to the photographer, since he has also shot nudes of several other celebrities, e.g., Levi Johnston.
22:0422:04, 17 April 2011diffhist−45
m
Angelo Garcia
Remove redundant reference to "openly discussed" his personal life, which are the same words at the beginning of the next sentence.
20:3820:38, 19 June 2010diffhist−47
Angelo Garcia
again, removed redundant use of the phrase "openly discussed" and use of ", which" when "that" is more appropriate
20:0520:05, 19 June 2010diffhist−25
m
Angelo Garcia
I removed some redundancies in order to improve the flow of the text. I also added a Wiki link to the photographer, since he has also shot nudes of several other celebrities, e.g., Levi Johnston.