23:0123:01, 24 January 2022diffhist+29
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Mayonnaise
→History: IMHO, this description allows for a more clearly setting up the following paragraph, as relates to the number of possible origins.
21:1121:11, 5 January 2020diffhist−25
Human body temperature
Minor grammar and syntax changes to help readers better understand the introduction of this subject. Note, it appears that another person is editing this page. If those changes were lost, please note it was not intentional..
20:0020:00, 12 October 2018diffhist+22
Willie Mays
→top: was, clearly and quickly identifies Mr. Mays as being deceased. The term, "naturally born" removes any doubt as to citizenship, (IF the intent in/of using the word "American" was to convey his citizenship of the United States). But, I left the word "American" in, but it could be considered redundant as he early life is well defined.
18:5618:56, 5 March 2014diffhist+12
m
Gold
→top: Lead paragraph is an introduction as to gold's physical properties. Its appeal (as to attractiveness) is covered elsewhere in the article.
17:2217:22, 6 November 2012diffhist+214
Tubal ligation
Added back the gender comparison, which is valuable information for those researching the benefits/disadvantages of/for each gender as to Sterilization methods
16:3116:31, 16 May 2012diffhist0
m
Killing of Kelly Thomas
Original syntax suggests that he was beaten to death on the spot, which is not true. He died later in the hospital as a result of that beating.
17:2617:26, 18 May 2011diffhist−304
Osama bin Laden
Undid revision 429734461 by
WLRoss (
talk) Everything in this edit IS supported by citations, and/or other reliable sources herein. Also, there were grammar/factual errors corrected in this edi
23:0123:01, 24 January 2022diffhist+29
m
Mayonnaise
→History: IMHO, this description allows for a more clearly setting up the following paragraph, as relates to the number of possible origins.
21:1121:11, 5 January 2020diffhist−25
Human body temperature
Minor grammar and syntax changes to help readers better understand the introduction of this subject. Note, it appears that another person is editing this page. If those changes were lost, please note it was not intentional..
20:0020:00, 12 October 2018diffhist+22
Willie Mays
→top: was, clearly and quickly identifies Mr. Mays as being deceased. The term, "naturally born" removes any doubt as to citizenship, (IF the intent in/of using the word "American" was to convey his citizenship of the United States). But, I left the word "American" in, but it could be considered redundant as he early life is well defined.
18:5618:56, 5 March 2014diffhist+12
m
Gold
→top: Lead paragraph is an introduction as to gold's physical properties. Its appeal (as to attractiveness) is covered elsewhere in the article.
17:2217:22, 6 November 2012diffhist+214
Tubal ligation
Added back the gender comparison, which is valuable information for those researching the benefits/disadvantages of/for each gender as to Sterilization methods
16:3116:31, 16 May 2012diffhist0
m
Killing of Kelly Thomas
Original syntax suggests that he was beaten to death on the spot, which is not true. He died later in the hospital as a result of that beating.
17:2617:26, 18 May 2011diffhist−304
Osama bin Laden
Undid revision 429734461 by
WLRoss (
talk) Everything in this edit IS supported by citations, and/or other reliable sources herein. Also, there were grammar/factual errors corrected in this edi