A user with 241 edits. Account created on 9 September 2005.
27 August 2020
- 08:41 08:41, 27 August 2020 diff hist −2 m Tenth Amendment to the United States Constitution replaced awkward and ambiguous linguistic surplusage from initial paragraph, and cured a staggeringly inept omission, namely the total lack of reference to the phrase in the Amendment barring the states from exercising any powers forbidden to them by the Constitution that are not necessarily delegated to the United States (e.g. powers that the Constitution asserts that no political entity within its jurisdiction may exercise.
17 September 2017
- 18:56 18:56, 17 September 2017 diff hist +23 m John Keegan →Works
- 18:55 18:55, 17 September 2017 diff hist +4 m John Keegan →Works
- 18:54 18:54, 17 September 2017 diff hist +144 m John Keegan →Works: provide alternative subtitle published by Vintage Books
- 18:49 18:49, 17 September 2017 diff hist +23 m SMS Emden →References
- 18:47 18:47, 17 September 2017 diff hist +190 m SMS Emden →References: add reference re date of Panang Battle
- 18:39 18:39, 17 September 2017 diff hist −55 SMS Emden Deleted destroyed oil and corrected date. Destroyed oil was part of a raid on the port of Madras on Sept. 22, 1914 and was not part of the Penang battle Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:34 18:34, 17 September 2017 diff hist +54 SMS Emden Added destroyed oil reserves and corrected the date of the attack Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10 August 2017
- 17:11 17:11, 10 August 2017 diff hist +29 m Single-source publishing Changed tone of critique of conceptualizations as a potential weakness of single-source publishing.
- 12:41 12:41, 10 August 2017 diff hist −7 User:Dfloren1 Changed domicile. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 12:38 12:38, 10 August 2017 diff hist +2 Toulmin method Italicize claim Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 12:37 12:37, 10 August 2017 diff hist +2 Toulmin method Italicize "claim" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 12:36 12:36, 10 August 2017 diff hist −69 Toulmin method Removed unhelpful redundancy. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
8 August 2017
- 15:17 15:17, 8 August 2017 diff hist +32 Single-source publishing Broke long, ambiguous sentence into two, more clear, individual sentences. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:09 15:09, 8 August 2017 diff hist −1 m Single-source publishing →Definition: fix typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
24 May 2017
- 23:39 23:39, 24 May 2017 diff hist 0 m Dead-blow hammer Replaced bad isbn for Benford book with correct isbn
- 23:36 23:36, 24 May 2017 diff hist −4 m Dead-blow hammer remove hyphens from isbn
- 23:35 23:35, 24 May 2017 diff hist −1 m Dead-blow hammer converted improper upper case letters to lower case in title in reference dealing with telecommunications.
- 23:27 23:27, 24 May 2017 diff hist 0 m Motorboating (disambiguation) No edit summary
- 23:27 23:27, 24 May 2017 diff hist 0 m Motorboating (disambiguation) No edit summary
- 23:26 23:26, 24 May 2017 diff hist +71 m Motorboating (disambiguation) Eliminate redundancies, remove periods at end of entries, and redo link position per Wikipedia style manual for dab pages. Improve description of motorboating (sexuality).
23 May 2017
- 15:27 15:27, 23 May 2017 diff hist −1 m Single-source publishing British English spelling of "labour" changed to American English spelling "labor".
- 15:24 15:24, 23 May 2017 diff hist 0 m Single-source publishing Apply hyphenation rule to compound adjective in compound phrase. Chicago Manual of Style, AP Style Manual, preferred usage in Oxygen XML's website, etc. Did not edit non-hyphenated phrase when it was part of a title.
12 March 2017
- 07:36 07:36, 12 March 2017 diff hist −19 Aswan Dam →Construction and filling, 1960–1976: Fix typos. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
4 February 2017
- 19:19 19:19, 4 February 2017 diff hist +71 m Chlorpyrifos →Residue: change Dow Chemical Corporation to The Dow Chemical Company
- 18:15 18:15, 4 February 2017 diff hist +2,140 Chlorpyrifos →Residue: add recent news from EPA on recommended exposure tolerance levels and news about how EPA's scientific findings may be rejected for purely political and economic considerations.
8 January 2017
- 17:19 17:19, 8 January 2017 diff hist +1,039 User talk:Oleg Alexandrov →Romanian history - aviator Constantin Cantacuzino: new section
- 17:02 17:02, 8 January 2017 diff hist +727 User talk:Oleg Alexandrov No edit summary
- 16:30 16:30, 8 January 2017 diff hist −4 Yulia Tymoshenko →Cultural and political image: Fixed grammar, removed typo. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:27 16:27, 8 January 2017 diff hist +3 Yulia Tymoshenko →Cultural and political image: Changed Yu to Tymoshenko in this sentence: "According to the Ukrainian magazine Focus Lady Yu was placed first in annual ranking of the most influential women in Ukraine in 2006–2010 (five years)." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:09 04:09, 8 January 2017 diff hist −41 Constantin Cantacuzino (aviator) →World War II: Replaced irrelevant fact (duration of flight) with significant fact (liberated nearly 1300 POWs). Source: Stephen Ambrose, The Wild Blue: the men and boys who flew the b-24s over Germany 1944-45, p. 122. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21 August 2016
- 20:23 20:23, 21 August 2016 diff hist +6 m Hajo Holborn →Early life: Combine the first two sentences to clarify the subject of the second sentence. Ambiguity regarding use of pronoun "he" to start second sentence after first sentence introduces two persons with identical last name.
- 19:49 19:49, 21 August 2016 diff hist −309 m Philippines and the United Nations remove redundant source reference.
- 19:46 19:46, 21 August 2016 diff hist +100 m Philippines and the United Nations remove bad link and replace with identical source story republished by different media outlet
- 19:38 19:38, 21 August 2016 diff hist +959 Philippines and the United Nations Add section on challenges to relationship, and add news re recent dustup
7 June 2016
- 16:01 16:01, 7 June 2016 diff hist −5 Service-level agreement →Backbone Internet providers: Fixed typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:59 15:59, 7 June 2016 diff hist +3 Service-level agreement →Backbone Internet providers: Fixed tyoo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:58 15:58, 7 June 2016 diff hist 0 Service-level agreement →Backbone Internet providers: Fixed typo in link Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:57 15:57, 7 June 2016 diff hist +40 Service-level agreement →Backbone Internet providers: Provided wiki link for unexplained acronym Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
5 June 2016
- 22:43 22:43, 5 June 2016 diff hist +35 m List of Silicon Valley episodes →Season 2 (2015): clarification of Russ Hanneman's white knight investor deal with Pied Piper.
- 22:02 22:02, 5 June 2016 diff hist −5 m Divine retribution clean up grammatically incorrect sentence
2 June 2016
- 07:47 07:47, 2 June 2016 diff hist +3 Principle of sufficient reason Fixed typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
14 May 2016
- 01:32 01:32, 14 May 2016 diff hist +29 Substantive due process Clarified definitional sentence by reducing it into two shorter sentences. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
22 September 2015
- 21:27 21:27, 22 September 2015 diff hist −2 m Thought leader delete empty lines
- 21:26 21:26, 22 September 2015 diff hist −18 m Thought leader fix grammar and reordered paragraphs by relevance
6 September 2015
- 19:15 19:15, 6 September 2015 diff hist 0 m Corporate personhood fix link
- 19:14 19:14, 6 September 2015 diff hist +2 m Corporate personhood fix link
- 19:13 19:13, 6 September 2015 diff hist +170 Corporate personhood Edit opening paragraph to emphasize the definition without altering it; move 2d paragraph (consisting solely of discussion of corporate personhood in U.S. legal history) to subsection on case law in the U.S.; clean up last paragraph
22 August 2015
- 22:28 22:28, 22 August 2015 diff hist −5 Emulsion Fixed grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
- 22:14 22:14, 22 August 2015 diff hist +16 Colloid No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
A user with 241 edits. Account created on 9 September 2005.
27 August 2020
- 08:41 08:41, 27 August 2020 diff hist −2 m Tenth Amendment to the United States Constitution replaced awkward and ambiguous linguistic surplusage from initial paragraph, and cured a staggeringly inept omission, namely the total lack of reference to the phrase in the Amendment barring the states from exercising any powers forbidden to them by the Constitution that are not necessarily delegated to the United States (e.g. powers that the Constitution asserts that no political entity within its jurisdiction may exercise.
17 September 2017
- 18:56 18:56, 17 September 2017 diff hist +23 m John Keegan →Works
- 18:55 18:55, 17 September 2017 diff hist +4 m John Keegan →Works
- 18:54 18:54, 17 September 2017 diff hist +144 m John Keegan →Works: provide alternative subtitle published by Vintage Books
- 18:49 18:49, 17 September 2017 diff hist +23 m SMS Emden →References
- 18:47 18:47, 17 September 2017 diff hist +190 m SMS Emden →References: add reference re date of Panang Battle
- 18:39 18:39, 17 September 2017 diff hist −55 SMS Emden Deleted destroyed oil and corrected date. Destroyed oil was part of a raid on the port of Madras on Sept. 22, 1914 and was not part of the Penang battle Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:34 18:34, 17 September 2017 diff hist +54 SMS Emden Added destroyed oil reserves and corrected the date of the attack Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10 August 2017
- 17:11 17:11, 10 August 2017 diff hist +29 m Single-source publishing Changed tone of critique of conceptualizations as a potential weakness of single-source publishing.
- 12:41 12:41, 10 August 2017 diff hist −7 User:Dfloren1 Changed domicile. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 12:38 12:38, 10 August 2017 diff hist +2 Toulmin method Italicize claim Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 12:37 12:37, 10 August 2017 diff hist +2 Toulmin method Italicize "claim" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 12:36 12:36, 10 August 2017 diff hist −69 Toulmin method Removed unhelpful redundancy. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
8 August 2017
- 15:17 15:17, 8 August 2017 diff hist +32 Single-source publishing Broke long, ambiguous sentence into two, more clear, individual sentences. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:09 15:09, 8 August 2017 diff hist −1 m Single-source publishing →Definition: fix typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
24 May 2017
- 23:39 23:39, 24 May 2017 diff hist 0 m Dead-blow hammer Replaced bad isbn for Benford book with correct isbn
- 23:36 23:36, 24 May 2017 diff hist −4 m Dead-blow hammer remove hyphens from isbn
- 23:35 23:35, 24 May 2017 diff hist −1 m Dead-blow hammer converted improper upper case letters to lower case in title in reference dealing with telecommunications.
- 23:27 23:27, 24 May 2017 diff hist 0 m Motorboating (disambiguation) No edit summary
- 23:27 23:27, 24 May 2017 diff hist 0 m Motorboating (disambiguation) No edit summary
- 23:26 23:26, 24 May 2017 diff hist +71 m Motorboating (disambiguation) Eliminate redundancies, remove periods at end of entries, and redo link position per Wikipedia style manual for dab pages. Improve description of motorboating (sexuality).
23 May 2017
- 15:27 15:27, 23 May 2017 diff hist −1 m Single-source publishing British English spelling of "labour" changed to American English spelling "labor".
- 15:24 15:24, 23 May 2017 diff hist 0 m Single-source publishing Apply hyphenation rule to compound adjective in compound phrase. Chicago Manual of Style, AP Style Manual, preferred usage in Oxygen XML's website, etc. Did not edit non-hyphenated phrase when it was part of a title.
12 March 2017
- 07:36 07:36, 12 March 2017 diff hist −19 Aswan Dam →Construction and filling, 1960–1976: Fix typos. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
4 February 2017
- 19:19 19:19, 4 February 2017 diff hist +71 m Chlorpyrifos →Residue: change Dow Chemical Corporation to The Dow Chemical Company
- 18:15 18:15, 4 February 2017 diff hist +2,140 Chlorpyrifos →Residue: add recent news from EPA on recommended exposure tolerance levels and news about how EPA's scientific findings may be rejected for purely political and economic considerations.
8 January 2017
- 17:19 17:19, 8 January 2017 diff hist +1,039 User talk:Oleg Alexandrov →Romanian history - aviator Constantin Cantacuzino: new section
- 17:02 17:02, 8 January 2017 diff hist +727 User talk:Oleg Alexandrov No edit summary
- 16:30 16:30, 8 January 2017 diff hist −4 Yulia Tymoshenko →Cultural and political image: Fixed grammar, removed typo. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:27 16:27, 8 January 2017 diff hist +3 Yulia Tymoshenko →Cultural and political image: Changed Yu to Tymoshenko in this sentence: "According to the Ukrainian magazine Focus Lady Yu was placed first in annual ranking of the most influential women in Ukraine in 2006–2010 (five years)." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:09 04:09, 8 January 2017 diff hist −41 Constantin Cantacuzino (aviator) →World War II: Replaced irrelevant fact (duration of flight) with significant fact (liberated nearly 1300 POWs). Source: Stephen Ambrose, The Wild Blue: the men and boys who flew the b-24s over Germany 1944-45, p. 122. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21 August 2016
- 20:23 20:23, 21 August 2016 diff hist +6 m Hajo Holborn →Early life: Combine the first two sentences to clarify the subject of the second sentence. Ambiguity regarding use of pronoun "he" to start second sentence after first sentence introduces two persons with identical last name.
- 19:49 19:49, 21 August 2016 diff hist −309 m Philippines and the United Nations remove redundant source reference.
- 19:46 19:46, 21 August 2016 diff hist +100 m Philippines and the United Nations remove bad link and replace with identical source story republished by different media outlet
- 19:38 19:38, 21 August 2016 diff hist +959 Philippines and the United Nations Add section on challenges to relationship, and add news re recent dustup
7 June 2016
- 16:01 16:01, 7 June 2016 diff hist −5 Service-level agreement →Backbone Internet providers: Fixed typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:59 15:59, 7 June 2016 diff hist +3 Service-level agreement →Backbone Internet providers: Fixed tyoo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:58 15:58, 7 June 2016 diff hist 0 Service-level agreement →Backbone Internet providers: Fixed typo in link Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:57 15:57, 7 June 2016 diff hist +40 Service-level agreement →Backbone Internet providers: Provided wiki link for unexplained acronym Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
5 June 2016
- 22:43 22:43, 5 June 2016 diff hist +35 m List of Silicon Valley episodes →Season 2 (2015): clarification of Russ Hanneman's white knight investor deal with Pied Piper.
- 22:02 22:02, 5 June 2016 diff hist −5 m Divine retribution clean up grammatically incorrect sentence
2 June 2016
- 07:47 07:47, 2 June 2016 diff hist +3 Principle of sufficient reason Fixed typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
14 May 2016
- 01:32 01:32, 14 May 2016 diff hist +29 Substantive due process Clarified definitional sentence by reducing it into two shorter sentences. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
22 September 2015
- 21:27 21:27, 22 September 2015 diff hist −2 m Thought leader delete empty lines
- 21:26 21:26, 22 September 2015 diff hist −18 m Thought leader fix grammar and reordered paragraphs by relevance
6 September 2015
- 19:15 19:15, 6 September 2015 diff hist 0 m Corporate personhood fix link
- 19:14 19:14, 6 September 2015 diff hist +2 m Corporate personhood fix link
- 19:13 19:13, 6 September 2015 diff hist +170 Corporate personhood Edit opening paragraph to emphasize the definition without altering it; move 2d paragraph (consisting solely of discussion of corporate personhood in U.S. legal history) to subsection on case law in the U.S.; clean up last paragraph
22 August 2015
- 22:28 22:28, 22 August 2015 diff hist −5 Emulsion Fixed grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
- 22:14 22:14, 22 August 2015 diff hist +16 Colloid No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit