18:2718:27, 9 March 2024diffhist+1,296
Louise Lucas
Added info (and cite) about Lucas' role in arena. Added her chairmanship of finance committee. Clarified relationship of "incident" to a protest. Removed seemingly useless sentence that she got more votes than anyone else when she won an election (that's how elections work).
01:0301:03, 19 July 2023diffhist−1,201
United Airlines Flight 232
→Investigation: This paragraph just repeats information (what the flight crew did and the result) that was described more thoroughly in the prior section. It interrupts the flow of the discussion of the fan blade issue for no good reason.Tags: RevertedMobile editMobile web edit
17:0717:07, 19 April 2015diffhist+21
Pear
"family" linked to the generic family (about people), not the biological taxonomy concept of family, which is what the article is really referring to.
8 December 2013
14:3914:39, 8 December 2013diffhist0
Andes
The intro said the Andes run "north to south through 7 countries" but then those countries were listed alphabetically. I reordered them north to south. The other option would be to keep them alphabetical but remove the "north to south."
9 November 2013
22:1922:19, 9 November 2013diffhist+114
Hob Gadling
→Appearances: The dates of the fictional events between successive meetings of Gadling and Dream were incorrect; for example, he is rich and knighted not at their second meeting (1489) but their third (1589).
18:3818:38, 3 September 2008diffhist+4
Jessica Valenti
Reverting: the cited page calls Valenti a "freelance contributor" and Wikipedia should use the same term in the absence of another cite
17:5717:57, 9 May 2008diffhist−105
Jessica Valenti
The Seal Press question has been discussed and there is no consensus. Therefore, I'm taking out mention of it again.
18:2718:27, 9 March 2024diffhist+1,296
Louise Lucas
Added info (and cite) about Lucas' role in arena. Added her chairmanship of finance committee. Clarified relationship of "incident" to a protest. Removed seemingly useless sentence that she got more votes than anyone else when she won an election (that's how elections work).
01:0301:03, 19 July 2023diffhist−1,201
United Airlines Flight 232
→Investigation: This paragraph just repeats information (what the flight crew did and the result) that was described more thoroughly in the prior section. It interrupts the flow of the discussion of the fan blade issue for no good reason.Tags: RevertedMobile editMobile web edit
17:0717:07, 19 April 2015diffhist+21
Pear
"family" linked to the generic family (about people), not the biological taxonomy concept of family, which is what the article is really referring to.
8 December 2013
14:3914:39, 8 December 2013diffhist0
Andes
The intro said the Andes run "north to south through 7 countries" but then those countries were listed alphabetically. I reordered them north to south. The other option would be to keep them alphabetical but remove the "north to south."
9 November 2013
22:1922:19, 9 November 2013diffhist+114
Hob Gadling
→Appearances: The dates of the fictional events between successive meetings of Gadling and Dream were incorrect; for example, he is rich and knighted not at their second meeting (1489) but their third (1589).
18:3818:38, 3 September 2008diffhist+4
Jessica Valenti
Reverting: the cited page calls Valenti a "freelance contributor" and Wikipedia should use the same term in the absence of another cite
17:5717:57, 9 May 2008diffhist−105
Jessica Valenti
The Seal Press question has been discussed and there is no consensus. Therefore, I'm taking out mention of it again.