A user with 6,906 edits. Account created on 5 March 2006.
10 October 2023
- 08:47 08:47, 10 October 2023 diff hist −47 Kiri-sute gomen →lede: minor copyedit: "old" is a redundancy; misc. copyediting for clarity; rm larger redundancy
23 July 2023
- 23:39 23:39, 23 July 2023 diff hist −144 User talk:JAStewart Undid unproductive edit by 94.102.82.82 ( talk): anonymous bump of ancient thread current Tag: Undo
1 July 2023
- 02:45 02:45, 1 July 2023 diff hist −22 m Mass media →Issues with definition: minor copyedit: this distinction is meaningless given the broad context
4 April 2023
- 00:47 00:47, 4 April 2023 diff hist +1 m King Kong →Overview: more mature wording; minor copyediting
- 00:44 00:44, 4 April 2023 diff hist +27 King Kong →lede: +{{By whom}}: with current wording, it's a vague real-world attribution for which there are no references (nor is the subject followed-up upon later in the article except in-universe)
24 April 2022
- 05:5205:52, 24 April 2022 diff hist −25 m E Ink rm quantification: only cited source doesn't support this assessment
12 April 2021
- 22:18 22:18, 12 April 2021 diff hist +41 m Joystick →lede: further refinement: non-breaking spaces to prevent disconnection from enumeration; pluralize suction cups: two are visible
10 April 2021
- 02:02 02:02, 10 April 2021 diff hist +52 Joystick →lede: anchor "VG joystick" and "hat switch" in image caption; reword caption to clarify that not all VG joysticks necessarily have those features
16 March 2021
- 08:16 08:16, 16 March 2021 diff hist −326 Tiger Woods PGA Tour 11 rm unneeded {{clear}} template creating massive whitespace after the lede; →Trivia: rm section per WP:HTRIV (a policy which could not be more apt in this context)
14 March 2021
- 05:51 05:51, 14 March 2021 diff hist −14,080 Arc Rise Fantasia →Synopsis: rm section per WP:WAF, WP:SS, WP:COPY, etc.: this is NOT a synopsis, this is a nearly complete retelling of a someone else's intellectual property
2 December 2020
- 07:38 07:38, 2 December 2020 diff hist −67 Animal Crackers Undid unproductive edit by 173.12.189.101 ( talk) Tag: Undo
- 07:38 07:38, 2 December 2020 diff hist −68 Nutcracker (disambiguation) Undid unproductive edit by 173.12.189.101 ( talk) per WP:RED: when there's an article, then we'll add it Tag: Undo
7 October 2020
- 00:40 00:40, 7 October 2020 diff hist −1 m Childrens Hospital →Recurring: further clarification
17 September 2020
- 06:19 06:19, 17 September 2020 diff hist +70 Childrens Hospital →Recurring: clarify & refine info about Viscuso; other misc. for clarity/brevity/grammar
13 June 2020
- 19:02 19:02, 13 June 2020 diff hist −45 Kubernetes →History: update ref link; correct project name per ref; tighten up wording about Seven of Nine for brevity; italicize Star Trek per WP:MOS: series name
5 March 2020
- 05:45 05:45, 5 March 2020 diff hist −10 Zendrum →History: rm circular wikilink; de-embolden "Synthaxe Drumitar": the lede clearly specifies Zendrum is based on it, so it can't be another name for article subject
1 March 2020
- 20:47 20:47, 1 March 2020 diff hist +714 Talk:YCbCr →Ref image discrepancy: new section
8 February 2020
- 05:50 05:50, 8 February 2020 diff hist −8 m Pirates of the Caribbean: The Curse of the Black Pearl →Cast: rm overlinking: 99% of people reading this will know what "drunk" and "gay" are
- 05:47 05:47, 8 February 2020 diff hist +128 Pirates of the Caribbean: The Curse of the Black Pearl update quote and expand/clarify: orig. wording made it seem like this was an actual conversation that took place
- 05:32 05:32, 8 February 2020 diff hist +148 m Pirates of the Caribbean: The Curse of the Black Pearl →Cast: update ref with archive url
29 January 2020
- 20:18 20:18, 29 January 2020 diff hist −23 List of Allied World War II conferences Undid good-faith edit by 2001:…:C254:85B ( talk): overlinking Tag: Undo
- 18:44 18:44, 29 January 2020 diff hist +103 The Central Park Concert →External links: add IMDB per my previous edit; format AOL link
- 18:36 18:36, 29 January 2020 diff hist −3,306 The Central Park Concert →Personnel: hyphens/N-dashes → M-dashes; rm unneeded non-breaking spaces; simplify instrument listing and linking; rm exhaustive production listing per WP:IINFO: lacks any context or obvious need, missing dozens of credited personal, and info is available on more appropriate archival platforms, including IMDB
15 January 2020
- 09:16 09:16, 15 January 2020 diff hist +77 Akira (1988 film) →Home media: "very first" → "first"; rm "currently possible" per WP:DATED; rm overlinking; clarify audio formats; misc. copyediting for brevity and clarity
19 November 2019
- 16:54 16:54, 19 November 2019 diff hist −42 Son of a Preacher Man →Origins: misc. copyediting for clarity/brevity: rm excessive and redundant wording, rectify syntactical issues, clarify which Franklin in ¶2, "till" → "until"
- 10:21 10:21, 19 November 2019 diff hist −93 Colonialism rm recently-added short description: even for a brief description, far too generalized and ignores associated imperialism (ie. sounds like nation building rather than conquest)
- 10:12 10:12, 19 November 2019 diff hist −24 Louise Slaughter →lede: "Chairwoman" → "Chairperson": House tends to use the latter in official publications; "obtaining" → "earn": one earns their degree; minor condense/trim of material for concision/brevity
- 09:59 09:59, 19 November 2019 diff hist −9 Louise Slaughter →lede: correct tense: despite her death, the district continues to exist and still encompasses Rochester and Monroe County; reword district numbering date; rm whitespace
30 April 2019
- 17:56 17:56, 30 April 2019 diff hist −968 Off the Map (video) rm original research tagged for nearly a decade; correct run time (w/ hidden note); misc. copyediting
1 April 2019
- 07:19 07:19, 1 April 2019 diff hist −221 Unplugged (Alice in Chains album) →Overview: rm pure opinion
31 March 2019
- 05:28 05:28, 31 March 2019 diff hist −5 m Live at Piedmont Park update RS review link
29 March 2019
- 02:04 02:04, 29 March 2019 diff hist +3,406 DVD move info not exclusive to recordable discs into a new "Specifications" sub-sec; expand section to include DVD-10, -13, and -14; other misc. copyediting
28 March 2019
- 00:47 00:47, 28 March 2019 diff hist −486 Liquid Tension Experiment 2 →Overview: rm orig. research: citation is for overall influence, not the riff itself; rm redundancy
27 March 2019
- 20:24 20:24, 27 March 2019 diff hist −51 m DVD additional (albeit minor) misc. copyediting
- 19:45 19:45, 27 March 2019 diff hist −14 DVD →DVD recordable and rewritable: move disc image out of 'Dual-layer' and into 'Recordable' where it relevent; misc. copyediting
- 19:37 19:37, 27 March 2019 diff hist +103 DVD rm redundant mentions of transition pause and recording speed; +{{Cn}} for rec. speed and recorder costs; misc copyediting for clarity, brevity, grammar, syntax, etc. per WP:MOS, WP:WEASEL, WP:NOTGUIDE, et al.
25 March 2019
- 06:58 06:58, 25 March 2019 diff hist −144 The Hunt for Red October (1990 video game) rm links per WP:COPYLINK; correct tense: game continues to feature these sequences; '5' → 'five'; misc. copyediting
19 October 2018
- 17:52 17:52, 19 October 2018 diff hist +3 m Virus "those that cause AIDS" → " HIV": rm needlessly oblique wording; +"or even sabotage": HIV doesn't simply evade, but cripples immune response
- 17:45 17:45, 19 October 2018 diff hist −47 m Virus rm "antibiotic" reference: self-evident and irrelevant (might as well mention that allergy meds, anti-rejection meds, homeopathy, leeches, trepanation, et al "have no effect" either…)
- 05:57 05:57, 19 October 2018 diff hist +8 Mark Twain →Love of science and technology: rephrase AH part for clarification: use of historical "what ifs" extends beyond science fiction (super hero lore, video games, etc.); rm "said to be": redundant and chatty
15 May 2018
- 20:15 20:15, 15 May 2018 diff hist −204 Super NES Classic Edition Undid good-faith edit by TheDisneyGamer ( talk): no need for a list here, the number is fine; "first-ever" and "first" are same thing; release dates are in info box Tag: Undo
8 May 2018
- 23:25 23:25, 8 May 2018 diff hist +14 m Super NES Classic Edition clarify Star Fox 2 in lede: rm "new" per WP:RECENTISM and replace with "first official" (unofficial pirated ROMs have existed for public consumption for some time)
23 March 2018
- 06:35 06:35, 23 March 2018 diff hist −7 m IBM Works fix error I introduced in external link; minor copyedit
- 06:32 06:32, 23 March 2018 diff hist −1 m D'arcy Wretzky →lede: correct tense: even if not current bassist, she is still the original
19 March 2018
- 23:42 23:42, 19 March 2018 diff hist −24 IBM Works →lede: correct tense: though well out of favor, it continues to be an office suite, still includes the mentioned applications when installed, and is still included in BonusPak; minor copyedit; update external link
18 March 2018
- 22:26 22:26, 18 March 2018 diff hist +26 Tachyon move Sept. 2011 info from lede and move to history per WP:LEDE: a specific event in which the particles were NOT found is irrelevant to the general introduction of the subject; correct caption to remove "we" per WP:YOU
27 November 2017
- 04:54 04:54, 27 November 2017 diff hist −79 The Nutcracker and the Mouse King →lede: rm opinion →Adaptations: separate entries for Dumas and Tchaikovsky; +{{ Ref improve}}
- 04:44 04:44, 27 November 2017 diff hist −217 Trepak (The Nutcracker) rm pure opinion
13 November 2017
- 07:27 07:27, 13 November 2017 diff hist −160 Set animal →Physical characteristics: rm tagged statement per WP:WEASEL, WP:V, WP:NOR, et al.
4 November 2017
- 01:52 01:52, 4 November 2017 diff hist +240 Harpocrates →Cultural uses: add ref for uncited info; condense and delink examples list; minor addition; condense {{See also}}
A user with 6,906 edits. Account created on 5 March 2006.
10 October 2023
- 08:47 08:47, 10 October 2023 diff hist −47 Kiri-sute gomen →lede: minor copyedit: "old" is a redundancy; misc. copyediting for clarity; rm larger redundancy
23 July 2023
- 23:39 23:39, 23 July 2023 diff hist −144 User talk:JAStewart Undid unproductive edit by 94.102.82.82 ( talk): anonymous bump of ancient thread current Tag: Undo
1 July 2023
- 02:45 02:45, 1 July 2023 diff hist −22 m Mass media →Issues with definition: minor copyedit: this distinction is meaningless given the broad context
4 April 2023
- 00:47 00:47, 4 April 2023 diff hist +1 m King Kong →Overview: more mature wording; minor copyediting
- 00:44 00:44, 4 April 2023 diff hist +27 King Kong →lede: +{{By whom}}: with current wording, it's a vague real-world attribution for which there are no references (nor is the subject followed-up upon later in the article except in-universe)
24 April 2022
- 05:5205:52, 24 April 2022 diff hist −25 m E Ink rm quantification: only cited source doesn't support this assessment
12 April 2021
- 22:18 22:18, 12 April 2021 diff hist +41 m Joystick →lede: further refinement: non-breaking spaces to prevent disconnection from enumeration; pluralize suction cups: two are visible
10 April 2021
- 02:02 02:02, 10 April 2021 diff hist +52 Joystick →lede: anchor "VG joystick" and "hat switch" in image caption; reword caption to clarify that not all VG joysticks necessarily have those features
16 March 2021
- 08:16 08:16, 16 March 2021 diff hist −326 Tiger Woods PGA Tour 11 rm unneeded {{clear}} template creating massive whitespace after the lede; →Trivia: rm section per WP:HTRIV (a policy which could not be more apt in this context)
14 March 2021
- 05:51 05:51, 14 March 2021 diff hist −14,080 Arc Rise Fantasia →Synopsis: rm section per WP:WAF, WP:SS, WP:COPY, etc.: this is NOT a synopsis, this is a nearly complete retelling of a someone else's intellectual property
2 December 2020
- 07:38 07:38, 2 December 2020 diff hist −67 Animal Crackers Undid unproductive edit by 173.12.189.101 ( talk) Tag: Undo
- 07:38 07:38, 2 December 2020 diff hist −68 Nutcracker (disambiguation) Undid unproductive edit by 173.12.189.101 ( talk) per WP:RED: when there's an article, then we'll add it Tag: Undo
7 October 2020
- 00:40 00:40, 7 October 2020 diff hist −1 m Childrens Hospital →Recurring: further clarification
17 September 2020
- 06:19 06:19, 17 September 2020 diff hist +70 Childrens Hospital →Recurring: clarify & refine info about Viscuso; other misc. for clarity/brevity/grammar
13 June 2020
- 19:02 19:02, 13 June 2020 diff hist −45 Kubernetes →History: update ref link; correct project name per ref; tighten up wording about Seven of Nine for brevity; italicize Star Trek per WP:MOS: series name
5 March 2020
- 05:45 05:45, 5 March 2020 diff hist −10 Zendrum →History: rm circular wikilink; de-embolden "Synthaxe Drumitar": the lede clearly specifies Zendrum is based on it, so it can't be another name for article subject
1 March 2020
- 20:47 20:47, 1 March 2020 diff hist +714 Talk:YCbCr →Ref image discrepancy: new section
8 February 2020
- 05:50 05:50, 8 February 2020 diff hist −8 m Pirates of the Caribbean: The Curse of the Black Pearl →Cast: rm overlinking: 99% of people reading this will know what "drunk" and "gay" are
- 05:47 05:47, 8 February 2020 diff hist +128 Pirates of the Caribbean: The Curse of the Black Pearl update quote and expand/clarify: orig. wording made it seem like this was an actual conversation that took place
- 05:32 05:32, 8 February 2020 diff hist +148 m Pirates of the Caribbean: The Curse of the Black Pearl →Cast: update ref with archive url
29 January 2020
- 20:18 20:18, 29 January 2020 diff hist −23 List of Allied World War II conferences Undid good-faith edit by 2001:…:C254:85B ( talk): overlinking Tag: Undo
- 18:44 18:44, 29 January 2020 diff hist +103 The Central Park Concert →External links: add IMDB per my previous edit; format AOL link
- 18:36 18:36, 29 January 2020 diff hist −3,306 The Central Park Concert →Personnel: hyphens/N-dashes → M-dashes; rm unneeded non-breaking spaces; simplify instrument listing and linking; rm exhaustive production listing per WP:IINFO: lacks any context or obvious need, missing dozens of credited personal, and info is available on more appropriate archival platforms, including IMDB
15 January 2020
- 09:16 09:16, 15 January 2020 diff hist +77 Akira (1988 film) →Home media: "very first" → "first"; rm "currently possible" per WP:DATED; rm overlinking; clarify audio formats; misc. copyediting for brevity and clarity
19 November 2019
- 16:54 16:54, 19 November 2019 diff hist −42 Son of a Preacher Man →Origins: misc. copyediting for clarity/brevity: rm excessive and redundant wording, rectify syntactical issues, clarify which Franklin in ¶2, "till" → "until"
- 10:21 10:21, 19 November 2019 diff hist −93 Colonialism rm recently-added short description: even for a brief description, far too generalized and ignores associated imperialism (ie. sounds like nation building rather than conquest)
- 10:12 10:12, 19 November 2019 diff hist −24 Louise Slaughter →lede: "Chairwoman" → "Chairperson": House tends to use the latter in official publications; "obtaining" → "earn": one earns their degree; minor condense/trim of material for concision/brevity
- 09:59 09:59, 19 November 2019 diff hist −9 Louise Slaughter →lede: correct tense: despite her death, the district continues to exist and still encompasses Rochester and Monroe County; reword district numbering date; rm whitespace
30 April 2019
- 17:56 17:56, 30 April 2019 diff hist −968 Off the Map (video) rm original research tagged for nearly a decade; correct run time (w/ hidden note); misc. copyediting
1 April 2019
- 07:19 07:19, 1 April 2019 diff hist −221 Unplugged (Alice in Chains album) →Overview: rm pure opinion
31 March 2019
- 05:28 05:28, 31 March 2019 diff hist −5 m Live at Piedmont Park update RS review link
29 March 2019
- 02:04 02:04, 29 March 2019 diff hist +3,406 DVD move info not exclusive to recordable discs into a new "Specifications" sub-sec; expand section to include DVD-10, -13, and -14; other misc. copyediting
28 March 2019
- 00:47 00:47, 28 March 2019 diff hist −486 Liquid Tension Experiment 2 →Overview: rm orig. research: citation is for overall influence, not the riff itself; rm redundancy
27 March 2019
- 20:24 20:24, 27 March 2019 diff hist −51 m DVD additional (albeit minor) misc. copyediting
- 19:45 19:45, 27 March 2019 diff hist −14 DVD →DVD recordable and rewritable: move disc image out of 'Dual-layer' and into 'Recordable' where it relevent; misc. copyediting
- 19:37 19:37, 27 March 2019 diff hist +103 DVD rm redundant mentions of transition pause and recording speed; +{{Cn}} for rec. speed and recorder costs; misc copyediting for clarity, brevity, grammar, syntax, etc. per WP:MOS, WP:WEASEL, WP:NOTGUIDE, et al.
25 March 2019
- 06:58 06:58, 25 March 2019 diff hist −144 The Hunt for Red October (1990 video game) rm links per WP:COPYLINK; correct tense: game continues to feature these sequences; '5' → 'five'; misc. copyediting
19 October 2018
- 17:52 17:52, 19 October 2018 diff hist +3 m Virus "those that cause AIDS" → " HIV": rm needlessly oblique wording; +"or even sabotage": HIV doesn't simply evade, but cripples immune response
- 17:45 17:45, 19 October 2018 diff hist −47 m Virus rm "antibiotic" reference: self-evident and irrelevant (might as well mention that allergy meds, anti-rejection meds, homeopathy, leeches, trepanation, et al "have no effect" either…)
- 05:57 05:57, 19 October 2018 diff hist +8 Mark Twain →Love of science and technology: rephrase AH part for clarification: use of historical "what ifs" extends beyond science fiction (super hero lore, video games, etc.); rm "said to be": redundant and chatty
15 May 2018
- 20:15 20:15, 15 May 2018 diff hist −204 Super NES Classic Edition Undid good-faith edit by TheDisneyGamer ( talk): no need for a list here, the number is fine; "first-ever" and "first" are same thing; release dates are in info box Tag: Undo
8 May 2018
- 23:25 23:25, 8 May 2018 diff hist +14 m Super NES Classic Edition clarify Star Fox 2 in lede: rm "new" per WP:RECENTISM and replace with "first official" (unofficial pirated ROMs have existed for public consumption for some time)
23 March 2018
- 06:35 06:35, 23 March 2018 diff hist −7 m IBM Works fix error I introduced in external link; minor copyedit
- 06:32 06:32, 23 March 2018 diff hist −1 m D'arcy Wretzky →lede: correct tense: even if not current bassist, she is still the original
19 March 2018
- 23:42 23:42, 19 March 2018 diff hist −24 IBM Works →lede: correct tense: though well out of favor, it continues to be an office suite, still includes the mentioned applications when installed, and is still included in BonusPak; minor copyedit; update external link
18 March 2018
- 22:26 22:26, 18 March 2018 diff hist +26 Tachyon move Sept. 2011 info from lede and move to history per WP:LEDE: a specific event in which the particles were NOT found is irrelevant to the general introduction of the subject; correct caption to remove "we" per WP:YOU
27 November 2017
- 04:54 04:54, 27 November 2017 diff hist −79 The Nutcracker and the Mouse King →lede: rm opinion →Adaptations: separate entries for Dumas and Tchaikovsky; +{{ Ref improve}}
- 04:44 04:44, 27 November 2017 diff hist −217 Trepak (The Nutcracker) rm pure opinion
13 November 2017
- 07:27 07:27, 13 November 2017 diff hist −160 Set animal →Physical characteristics: rm tagged statement per WP:WEASEL, WP:V, WP:NOR, et al.
4 November 2017
- 01:52 01:52, 4 November 2017 diff hist +240 Harpocrates →Cultural uses: add ref for uncited info; condense and delink examples list; minor addition; condense {{See also}}