17:3717:37, 5 July 2024diffhist+471
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Tom & Jerry (2021 film)
Rearranged some stuff (moved the quotations from the second introductory paragraph into Production). Again, this is not an ego move, this is a collaborative effort and I’m trying to make sure the tone of the article is relatively neutral.Tag: Visual edit
16:3916:39, 4 July 2024diffhist−2,908
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Tom & Jerry (2021 film)
Nothing is being done for ego’s sake; there were a lot of sentences that were unnecessary or poorly cited. I’m glad you added some stuff back so the article can be massaged into the best it can be, but there was a lot of verbosity and bias I was trying to clean up.Tag: Visual edit
20:4720:47, 1 January 2023diffhist+11
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The Super Mario Bros. Movie
Don’t want to start an edit war over something pretty frivolous, but in the first sentence of the first paragraph, I would rather refer to what the film is based on as the Mario video game franchise. “Super Mario” only refers to the mainline series of platforming games, but we can see this film is borrowing from Donkey Kong, Mario Kart, etc., which fall under the Mario franchise as a sort of umbrella (the Mario franchise wiki page implies as much). Other than that, a few grammar tweaks.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web edit
03:5003:50, 29 December 2022diffhist−247
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The Super Mario Bros. Movie
Reworked the wording in the first paragraph; retained allusions to the other two Mario films but omitted the title and instead described their year, country and medium. It was feeling too wordy, especially considering the full titles are already cited above as related or “not to be confused with” articles. Nothing too major.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web edit
19:3619:36, 13 November 2022diffhist+1,204
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Mike Cernovich
Added that prior to James Gunn’s rehiring, he signed on to direct a DC film, and later became the head of DC Studios as a result of his initial firing.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web edit
17:3717:37, 30 October 2022diffhist−57
The Super Mario Bros. Movie
Actually another error. Payton speaks about the final episodes of The Walking Dead but the article never mentions he was shooting that while recording his lines, just that he is promoting it. Him being in Georgia refers to his closet at his house if I’m not mistaken.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web edit
17:3317:33, 30 October 2022diffhist−782
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The Super Mario Bros. Movie
Reworked casting section again since it was changed back to the original wording. Michael Jelenic’s name was misspelt (Jenelic), “The Walking Dead” needed to be italicized since it is a title. Also rearranged mentions of opinions on Martinet vs Pratt’s voice by Tara Strong, Khary Payton and Martinet to be next to each other rather than sporadically throughout this section. Nothing too major.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web edit
18:3818:38, 29 October 2022diffhist+35
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The Super Mario Bros. Movie
Added genre(s) to the first sentence of first paragraph (fantasy adventure comedy, seems fair to say since it is fantastical, there is comedy in the trailer and an emphasis on venturing through different locales). Also moved Chris Pratt’s mention down to the rest of the cast in the first paragraph. Nothing major, just adjusting.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web edit
17:3717:37, 5 July 2024diffhist+471
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Tom & Jerry (2021 film)
Rearranged some stuff (moved the quotations from the second introductory paragraph into Production). Again, this is not an ego move, this is a collaborative effort and I’m trying to make sure the tone of the article is relatively neutral.Tag: Visual edit
16:3916:39, 4 July 2024diffhist−2,908
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Tom & Jerry (2021 film)
Nothing is being done for ego’s sake; there were a lot of sentences that were unnecessary or poorly cited. I’m glad you added some stuff back so the article can be massaged into the best it can be, but there was a lot of verbosity and bias I was trying to clean up.Tag: Visual edit
20:4720:47, 1 January 2023diffhist+11
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The Super Mario Bros. Movie
Don’t want to start an edit war over something pretty frivolous, but in the first sentence of the first paragraph, I would rather refer to what the film is based on as the Mario video game franchise. “Super Mario” only refers to the mainline series of platforming games, but we can see this film is borrowing from Donkey Kong, Mario Kart, etc., which fall under the Mario franchise as a sort of umbrella (the Mario franchise wiki page implies as much). Other than that, a few grammar tweaks.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web edit
03:5003:50, 29 December 2022diffhist−247
m
The Super Mario Bros. Movie
Reworked the wording in the first paragraph; retained allusions to the other two Mario films but omitted the title and instead described their year, country and medium. It was feeling too wordy, especially considering the full titles are already cited above as related or “not to be confused with” articles. Nothing too major.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web edit
19:3619:36, 13 November 2022diffhist+1,204
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Mike Cernovich
Added that prior to James Gunn’s rehiring, he signed on to direct a DC film, and later became the head of DC Studios as a result of his initial firing.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web edit
17:3717:37, 30 October 2022diffhist−57
The Super Mario Bros. Movie
Actually another error. Payton speaks about the final episodes of The Walking Dead but the article never mentions he was shooting that while recording his lines, just that he is promoting it. Him being in Georgia refers to his closet at his house if I’m not mistaken.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web edit
17:3317:33, 30 October 2022diffhist−782
m
The Super Mario Bros. Movie
Reworked casting section again since it was changed back to the original wording. Michael Jelenic’s name was misspelt (Jenelic), “The Walking Dead” needed to be italicized since it is a title. Also rearranged mentions of opinions on Martinet vs Pratt’s voice by Tara Strong, Khary Payton and Martinet to be next to each other rather than sporadically throughout this section. Nothing too major.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web edit
18:3818:38, 29 October 2022diffhist+35
m
The Super Mario Bros. Movie
Added genre(s) to the first sentence of first paragraph (fantasy adventure comedy, seems fair to say since it is fantastical, there is comedy in the trailer and an emphasis on venturing through different locales). Also moved Chris Pratt’s mention down to the rest of the cast in the first paragraph. Nothing major, just adjusting.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web edit