14:4014:40, 29 July 2024diffhist−37
Albert Einstein
capitalized 'Brownian motion', italicized 'Physics World'; changed 'top among physicists for making the most important contributions to physics' to 'ranked the greatest physicist of all time',current
21:1821:18, 25 July 2024diffhist0
John Williams
nixed 'incidental music for the first season of 'Gilligan's Island'; as far as I know, it was the unaired pilot. There was a link to '1985' after 'Amazing Stories', don't know why. replaced 'He has received numerous honors' with 'Among other accolades' nixed 'two of Williams's early scores', 'onward' Added that he worked with Alfred Hitchcock, Brian De Palma, Robert Altman, Clint Eastwood and Richard Donnercurrent
01:2601:26, 23 July 2024diffhist−234
John Williams
'Williams has worked with such diverse directors as Steven Spielberg, George Lucas, Alfred Hitchcock, Brian De Palma, Robert Altman, Chris Columbus, Oliver Stone, Richard Donner, Irvin Kershner, Clint Eastwood, Sydney Pollack, Mark Rydell, Mark Robson, Ron Howard, Alfonso Cuarón, Jean-Jacques Annaud, J. J. Abrams and James Mangold.' This was under 'Legacy', didn't belong there. It's introductory information. Nixed Oxford commas, Jaws 2, 'onward', 'several', 'remake of'. Replaced '-', with '.'
00:4200:42, 23 July 2024diffhist−462
John Williams
→Awards, recognition and legacy: Williams has worked with such diverse directors as Steven Spielberg, George Lucas, Alfred Hitchcock, Brian De Palma, Robert Altman, Chris Columbus, Oliver Stone, Richard Donner, Irvin Kershner, Clint Eastwood, Sydney Pollack, Mark Rydell, Mark Robson, Ron Howard, Alfonso Cuarón, Jean-Jacques Annaud, J. J. Abrams, and James Mangold.
21:2221:22, 19 July 2024diffhist−579
Billy Joel
→1994–present: Touring: nixed duplicate link to 'Times Union Center', 'Albany, New York', ' in a ceremony at the Waldorf Astoria Hotel in New York City', added links to 'Philadelphia', 'Atlanta', 'SunTrust Park'. 'He also had a banner raised in his honor for being the highest grossing act in the history of the Times Union Center (formerly the Knickerbocker Arena and Pepsi Arena) in Albany, New York.' This is noted later.
21:0421:04, 19 July 2024diffhist−116
Billy Joel
→1994–present: Touring: →1994–present: Touring: →1994–present: Touring: nixed 'second wife', duplicate link to Elton John, 'Christmas in Fallujah', 'Rock and Roll Hall of Fame' replaced 'obscure tunes' with 'deep cuts', 'into' with 'in', 'written, or at least released' to 'released', 'Joel's 48 Philadelphia sold-out shows' to '48 sold-out Philadelphia shows', 'first' with 'debut'. italicized 'Fantasies & Delusions', nixed 'New Jersey native', 'The album', 'titled'
13:3013:30, 19 July 2024diffhist+64
Billy Joel
added links to pop, rock, classical; changed ' and release his second album' to 'where he released', 'Joel released his critical and commercial breakthrough' to 'achieved his critical and commercial breakthrough with', ' the album also includes the popular' to 'as well as also includes the concert staple'. added links to 'rock & roll', 'rhythm & blues'
22:3222:32, 18 July 2024diffhist−127
Billy Joel
nixed 'both charted from' (my bad), 'magazine', space after 'including', Oxford comma after James Taylor; changed 'was a minor hit; Ronnie Spector recorded a cover as did Nigel Olsson' to 'covered by', nixed 'then drummer with Elton John'. 'which featured Tom Hanks in one of his earliest roles' is interesting, irrelevant
21:4921:49, 18 July 2024diffhist−132
Billy Joel
fixed link to The Beatles (my bad), ' changed 'his band, which consisted of' to 'his band, consisting of', replaced 'groups' with 'artists'; nixed 'his next studio album', 'The album', 'before Joel', 'the success of', ' the character' changed '19971's To Make You Feel My Love', etc. to 'Greatest Hits Volume III yielded'. added Dickens, Bob Dylan, link to Ray Charles.
16:5816:58, 18 July 2024diffhist−144
Billy Joel
nixed 'music', 'next album', ' the character', ' for influencing American culture through the arts',; replaced 'hit' with 'song', replaced 'Piano Man's' to 'the album's',; removed (), 'sung', 'song'; changed 'front cover of the album' to 'album cover'; nixed 'at the time'; ' nixed 'used as the theme song, covered by Southside Johnny, for the CBS mid-1990s sitcom 'Dave's World'); changed 'received the Kennedy center honors' to 'was recognized at'; added link to Kennedy Center
15:0515:05, 18 July 2024diffhist−472
Billy Joel
nixed Oxford comma, 'of the same name', 'music', added comma before 'Cold Spring Harbor'. nixed 'groups such as', 'song', 'album', 'different', 'Since the advent of his solo career', 'Across the years of his solo career', 'In an interview he said of the group's effect on him', 'the album', 'film', 'of which were', 'future wife', 'released in November'. That 'Scenes' and 'Vienna' are among Joel's personal favorites is worth noting, but shouldn't be in lead. Replaced 'first release' with 'debut'.
17 July 2024
21:5521:55, 17 July 2024diffhist−36
Hart Crane
removed duplicate 'the' (my bad), duplicate mention of the Waste Land, link to T. S. Eliot. italicized 'Salmagundi', 'Oxford Research Encyclopedia', corrected spelling of 'truths'current
16 July 2024
03:1403:14, 16 July 2024diffhist+70
Hart Crane
changed 'inspired by T. S. Eliot' to 'Inspired by the Romantics and his fellow Modernists', as Crane was influenced by a good deal more than Eliot.
8 July 2024
22:3222:32, 8 July 2024diffhist−39
Wallace Stevens
added ':' to 'Wallace Stevens: Imagination and Faith'; removed commas around 'Milton Bates' as he is not Stevens's only biographer; replaced 'book dealing with his insurance executive career' with 'The Wallace Stevens Case'
22:2122:21, 8 July 2024diffhist−46
The Emperor of Ice-Cream
'Stevens' biographer, Paul Mariani, identifies the poem as one of Stevens' personal favorites from the 'Harmonium' collection.' We know it's a collection; it's in the first sentence. Replaced 'from' with 'by'. change 'and his collection of short stories 'Just After Sunset' in the short story 'Harvey's Dream' to ' in the short story 'Harvey's Dream' from the collection 'Just After Sunset'
13:4913:49, 8 July 2024diffhist+34
Wallace Stevens
nixed Oxford commas, changed title of second collection from 'The Idea of Order at Key West' to 'Ideas of Order'; changed 'Biography of Wallace Stevens' to 'The Whole Harmonium', as that is the title. added links to F. O. Mathiessen, The New York Times. 'throughout his years and many visits to New York City Stevens was in the habit of visiting St. Patrick's Cathedral for meditative purposes while in New York'; nixed last part. de-italicized Monroe (my bad), added links to Dante, Milton
7 July 2024
19:3219:32, 7 July 2024diffhist+446
Robert Frost
nixed 'His work was initially published in England before it was published in the United States'; true, but not important enough to be in lead, and mentioned later; merged Frost 'was awarded the Congressional Gold Medal in 1960' and 'on July 22, 1961, he was named poet laureate of Vermont', merged paragraphs on politics; nixed 'The poet and critic'; 'In an introduction to Jarrell's 'No Other Book: Selected Essays'; added 'The Figure a Poem Makes'.current
18:0218:02, 7 July 2024diffhist−2
Robert Frost
→Early life: changed 'where he published his first poem in his high school's magazine' to 'where he published his first poem in the high school magazine'
14:5314:53, 7 July 2024diffhist−108
Robert Frost
added ':' before Jarrell quote, nixed 'stating that Frost was particularly skilled at representing a wide range of human experience in his poem', 'also', 'including'; 'For forty-two years –' replaced 'at' with 'in. swapped photos of Frost's Derry Farm, 85th birthday; nixed duplicate link to Jarrell, Robert Frost's 'Home Burial' added that Frost served as class poet.
6 July 2024
22:4322:43, 6 July 2024diffhist−96
Robert Frost
→Style and critical reception: nixed 'notable and', added ','; merged paragraphs on Jarrell; nixed 'In Frost's defense'; 'And'; replaced 'book of essays' with 'No Other Book: Selected Essays', nixed 'an article called'; 'In a later poem'
22:2222:22, 6 July 2024diffhist−3,235
Robert Frost
→Adult years: moved ','; nixed 'additional', added link to New Hampshire, Vermont, Michigan, 'Dearborn, Michigan', 'Florida', Massachusetts, 'John F. Kennedy', nixed parentheses, duplicate link to 'Amherst, Massachusetts'. Shouldn't awards go under 'Awards and recognition'? Shouldn't materials go under 'Legacy and cultural influence'?
21:3021:30, 6 July 2024diffhist−60
Robert Frost
nixed Oxford commas; removed duplicate 'that', added Jarrell quote to lead; added link to Randall Jarrell; nixed 'often praised Frost's poetry', 'the essays', 'which consisted of'
14:4014:40, 29 July 2024diffhist−37
Albert Einstein
capitalized 'Brownian motion', italicized 'Physics World'; changed 'top among physicists for making the most important contributions to physics' to 'ranked the greatest physicist of all time',current
21:1821:18, 25 July 2024diffhist0
John Williams
nixed 'incidental music for the first season of 'Gilligan's Island'; as far as I know, it was the unaired pilot. There was a link to '1985' after 'Amazing Stories', don't know why. replaced 'He has received numerous honors' with 'Among other accolades' nixed 'two of Williams's early scores', 'onward' Added that he worked with Alfred Hitchcock, Brian De Palma, Robert Altman, Clint Eastwood and Richard Donnercurrent
01:2601:26, 23 July 2024diffhist−234
John Williams
'Williams has worked with such diverse directors as Steven Spielberg, George Lucas, Alfred Hitchcock, Brian De Palma, Robert Altman, Chris Columbus, Oliver Stone, Richard Donner, Irvin Kershner, Clint Eastwood, Sydney Pollack, Mark Rydell, Mark Robson, Ron Howard, Alfonso Cuarón, Jean-Jacques Annaud, J. J. Abrams and James Mangold.' This was under 'Legacy', didn't belong there. It's introductory information. Nixed Oxford commas, Jaws 2, 'onward', 'several', 'remake of'. Replaced '-', with '.'
00:4200:42, 23 July 2024diffhist−462
John Williams
→Awards, recognition and legacy: Williams has worked with such diverse directors as Steven Spielberg, George Lucas, Alfred Hitchcock, Brian De Palma, Robert Altman, Chris Columbus, Oliver Stone, Richard Donner, Irvin Kershner, Clint Eastwood, Sydney Pollack, Mark Rydell, Mark Robson, Ron Howard, Alfonso Cuarón, Jean-Jacques Annaud, J. J. Abrams, and James Mangold.
21:2221:22, 19 July 2024diffhist−579
Billy Joel
→1994–present: Touring: nixed duplicate link to 'Times Union Center', 'Albany, New York', ' in a ceremony at the Waldorf Astoria Hotel in New York City', added links to 'Philadelphia', 'Atlanta', 'SunTrust Park'. 'He also had a banner raised in his honor for being the highest grossing act in the history of the Times Union Center (formerly the Knickerbocker Arena and Pepsi Arena) in Albany, New York.' This is noted later.
21:0421:04, 19 July 2024diffhist−116
Billy Joel
→1994–present: Touring: →1994–present: Touring: →1994–present: Touring: nixed 'second wife', duplicate link to Elton John, 'Christmas in Fallujah', 'Rock and Roll Hall of Fame' replaced 'obscure tunes' with 'deep cuts', 'into' with 'in', 'written, or at least released' to 'released', 'Joel's 48 Philadelphia sold-out shows' to '48 sold-out Philadelphia shows', 'first' with 'debut'. italicized 'Fantasies & Delusions', nixed 'New Jersey native', 'The album', 'titled'
13:3013:30, 19 July 2024diffhist+64
Billy Joel
added links to pop, rock, classical; changed ' and release his second album' to 'where he released', 'Joel released his critical and commercial breakthrough' to 'achieved his critical and commercial breakthrough with', ' the album also includes the popular' to 'as well as also includes the concert staple'. added links to 'rock & roll', 'rhythm & blues'
22:3222:32, 18 July 2024diffhist−127
Billy Joel
nixed 'both charted from' (my bad), 'magazine', space after 'including', Oxford comma after James Taylor; changed 'was a minor hit; Ronnie Spector recorded a cover as did Nigel Olsson' to 'covered by', nixed 'then drummer with Elton John'. 'which featured Tom Hanks in one of his earliest roles' is interesting, irrelevant
21:4921:49, 18 July 2024diffhist−132
Billy Joel
fixed link to The Beatles (my bad), ' changed 'his band, which consisted of' to 'his band, consisting of', replaced 'groups' with 'artists'; nixed 'his next studio album', 'The album', 'before Joel', 'the success of', ' the character' changed '19971's To Make You Feel My Love', etc. to 'Greatest Hits Volume III yielded'. added Dickens, Bob Dylan, link to Ray Charles.
16:5816:58, 18 July 2024diffhist−144
Billy Joel
nixed 'music', 'next album', ' the character', ' for influencing American culture through the arts',; replaced 'hit' with 'song', replaced 'Piano Man's' to 'the album's',; removed (), 'sung', 'song'; changed 'front cover of the album' to 'album cover'; nixed 'at the time'; ' nixed 'used as the theme song, covered by Southside Johnny, for the CBS mid-1990s sitcom 'Dave's World'); changed 'received the Kennedy center honors' to 'was recognized at'; added link to Kennedy Center
15:0515:05, 18 July 2024diffhist−472
Billy Joel
nixed Oxford comma, 'of the same name', 'music', added comma before 'Cold Spring Harbor'. nixed 'groups such as', 'song', 'album', 'different', 'Since the advent of his solo career', 'Across the years of his solo career', 'In an interview he said of the group's effect on him', 'the album', 'film', 'of which were', 'future wife', 'released in November'. That 'Scenes' and 'Vienna' are among Joel's personal favorites is worth noting, but shouldn't be in lead. Replaced 'first release' with 'debut'.
17 July 2024
21:5521:55, 17 July 2024diffhist−36
Hart Crane
removed duplicate 'the' (my bad), duplicate mention of the Waste Land, link to T. S. Eliot. italicized 'Salmagundi', 'Oxford Research Encyclopedia', corrected spelling of 'truths'current
16 July 2024
03:1403:14, 16 July 2024diffhist+70
Hart Crane
changed 'inspired by T. S. Eliot' to 'Inspired by the Romantics and his fellow Modernists', as Crane was influenced by a good deal more than Eliot.
8 July 2024
22:3222:32, 8 July 2024diffhist−39
Wallace Stevens
added ':' to 'Wallace Stevens: Imagination and Faith'; removed commas around 'Milton Bates' as he is not Stevens's only biographer; replaced 'book dealing with his insurance executive career' with 'The Wallace Stevens Case'
22:2122:21, 8 July 2024diffhist−46
The Emperor of Ice-Cream
'Stevens' biographer, Paul Mariani, identifies the poem as one of Stevens' personal favorites from the 'Harmonium' collection.' We know it's a collection; it's in the first sentence. Replaced 'from' with 'by'. change 'and his collection of short stories 'Just After Sunset' in the short story 'Harvey's Dream' to ' in the short story 'Harvey's Dream' from the collection 'Just After Sunset'
13:4913:49, 8 July 2024diffhist+34
Wallace Stevens
nixed Oxford commas, changed title of second collection from 'The Idea of Order at Key West' to 'Ideas of Order'; changed 'Biography of Wallace Stevens' to 'The Whole Harmonium', as that is the title. added links to F. O. Mathiessen, The New York Times. 'throughout his years and many visits to New York City Stevens was in the habit of visiting St. Patrick's Cathedral for meditative purposes while in New York'; nixed last part. de-italicized Monroe (my bad), added links to Dante, Milton
7 July 2024
19:3219:32, 7 July 2024diffhist+446
Robert Frost
nixed 'His work was initially published in England before it was published in the United States'; true, but not important enough to be in lead, and mentioned later; merged Frost 'was awarded the Congressional Gold Medal in 1960' and 'on July 22, 1961, he was named poet laureate of Vermont', merged paragraphs on politics; nixed 'The poet and critic'; 'In an introduction to Jarrell's 'No Other Book: Selected Essays'; added 'The Figure a Poem Makes'.current
18:0218:02, 7 July 2024diffhist−2
Robert Frost
→Early life: changed 'where he published his first poem in his high school's magazine' to 'where he published his first poem in the high school magazine'
14:5314:53, 7 July 2024diffhist−108
Robert Frost
added ':' before Jarrell quote, nixed 'stating that Frost was particularly skilled at representing a wide range of human experience in his poem', 'also', 'including'; 'For forty-two years –' replaced 'at' with 'in. swapped photos of Frost's Derry Farm, 85th birthday; nixed duplicate link to Jarrell, Robert Frost's 'Home Burial' added that Frost served as class poet.
6 July 2024
22:4322:43, 6 July 2024diffhist−96
Robert Frost
→Style and critical reception: nixed 'notable and', added ','; merged paragraphs on Jarrell; nixed 'In Frost's defense'; 'And'; replaced 'book of essays' with 'No Other Book: Selected Essays', nixed 'an article called'; 'In a later poem'
22:2222:22, 6 July 2024diffhist−3,235
Robert Frost
→Adult years: moved ','; nixed 'additional', added link to New Hampshire, Vermont, Michigan, 'Dearborn, Michigan', 'Florida', Massachusetts, 'John F. Kennedy', nixed parentheses, duplicate link to 'Amherst, Massachusetts'. Shouldn't awards go under 'Awards and recognition'? Shouldn't materials go under 'Legacy and cultural influence'?
21:3021:30, 6 July 2024diffhist−60
Robert Frost
nixed Oxford commas; removed duplicate 'that', added Jarrell quote to lead; added link to Randall Jarrell; nixed 'often praised Frost's poetry', 'the essays', 'which consisted of'