04:5004:50, 1 March 2024diffhist+96
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San Andreas Lake
→Public access: the trail ends at hillcrest not millbrae ave, fixed that and added which city each mentioned street is in; also removed ", California" after "Millbrae" in the list of settlements to be consistent with San Bruno, the other city listedTag: Visual edit
03:1203:12, 20 December 2023diffhist+1
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San Francisco Bay Area
→History: "Monterey Bay Area" redirects to Monterey Bay so I edited the article to say "Monterey Bay area" (lowercase "area"), I removed the word "area" from the link, and I edited the link to go straight to Monterey BayTag: Visual edit
08:4608:46, 18 December 2023diffhist+5,349
San Francisco Bay Area
Rephrased a few sentences, added a few sentences/a couple of paragraphs or so, moved things around so it flows better, removed claim that seems to not be accurate anymore, updated population stats and added sources at the top—added a couple paragraphs to the history section tooTag: Visual edit
20:1120:11, 3 June 2023diffhist+113
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San Francisco Bay Area
i split that massive paragraph into 4 smaller ones, rephrased a sentence in one of those resulting paragraphs, added the word "numerous" with a link to the category mentioned in the text, and converted a couple of spelled out numbers to numerals/symbols for internal consistencyTag: Visual edit
20:0520:05, 23 April 2023diffhist+2
Stanford University
→Central campus: a few years ago Stanford renamed a portion of Serra St as Jane Stanford Way. Serra St and Junipero Serra Blvd are not the same street. Jane Stanford Way cuts across campus, it's the street along the front of the main quad. Junipero Serra Blvd runs along the foothills along the southwestern edge of the main campus.Tag: Visual edit
03:3803:38, 17 April 2023diffhist+3,325
Old Southwest
I rephrased and added some information to the top of the article. In the geography section I modified the first paragraph since the Red River (which flows primarily east-west) was not the western border of this region, nor were states/regions entirely west of the Mississippi in this region (so I removed TX, AR, and MO from the top as well), and I combined the last three sentences into a single paragraph. In the last sections I rephrased some things and I added a paragraph in the history sectionTag: Visual edit
21:4921:49, 16 April 2023diffhist−23
Saladoid
→Migrations: I get the sense this originally said "these colonizers" which was changed to "these indigenous people of the americas" I did not add a source, but I rephrased the sentence to simply note it is widely believed that the saladoid spoke an arawak languageTag: Visual edit
04:5004:50, 1 March 2024diffhist+96
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San Andreas Lake
→Public access: the trail ends at hillcrest not millbrae ave, fixed that and added which city each mentioned street is in; also removed ", California" after "Millbrae" in the list of settlements to be consistent with San Bruno, the other city listedTag: Visual edit
03:1203:12, 20 December 2023diffhist+1
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San Francisco Bay Area
→History: "Monterey Bay Area" redirects to Monterey Bay so I edited the article to say "Monterey Bay area" (lowercase "area"), I removed the word "area" from the link, and I edited the link to go straight to Monterey BayTag: Visual edit
08:4608:46, 18 December 2023diffhist+5,349
San Francisco Bay Area
Rephrased a few sentences, added a few sentences/a couple of paragraphs or so, moved things around so it flows better, removed claim that seems to not be accurate anymore, updated population stats and added sources at the top—added a couple paragraphs to the history section tooTag: Visual edit
20:1120:11, 3 June 2023diffhist+113
m
San Francisco Bay Area
i split that massive paragraph into 4 smaller ones, rephrased a sentence in one of those resulting paragraphs, added the word "numerous" with a link to the category mentioned in the text, and converted a couple of spelled out numbers to numerals/symbols for internal consistencyTag: Visual edit
20:0520:05, 23 April 2023diffhist+2
Stanford University
→Central campus: a few years ago Stanford renamed a portion of Serra St as Jane Stanford Way. Serra St and Junipero Serra Blvd are not the same street. Jane Stanford Way cuts across campus, it's the street along the front of the main quad. Junipero Serra Blvd runs along the foothills along the southwestern edge of the main campus.Tag: Visual edit
03:3803:38, 17 April 2023diffhist+3,325
Old Southwest
I rephrased and added some information to the top of the article. In the geography section I modified the first paragraph since the Red River (which flows primarily east-west) was not the western border of this region, nor were states/regions entirely west of the Mississippi in this region (so I removed TX, AR, and MO from the top as well), and I combined the last three sentences into a single paragraph. In the last sections I rephrased some things and I added a paragraph in the history sectionTag: Visual edit
21:4921:49, 16 April 2023diffhist−23
Saladoid
→Migrations: I get the sense this originally said "these colonizers" which was changed to "these indigenous people of the americas" I did not add a source, but I rephrased the sentence to simply note it is widely believed that the saladoid spoke an arawak languageTag: Visual edit