11:2911:29, 14 January 2024diffhist−4
A Groovy Kind of Love
In The Mindbenders singles chronology correctly includes their 1966 song "Can't Live With You, Can't Live Without You", but incorrectly included a link to the unrelated 1989 song of the same name performed by Billy Newton-Davis and Celine Dion. Removed this link.Tag: Visual edit: Switched
15:1415:14, 21 July 2023diffhist+2
m
Byte
Replaced hyphen immediately before "2" with ", as", because the hyphen could be read as "minus 2".Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
6 June 2023
08:3708:37, 6 June 2023diffhist+12
Isle of Man
Changed sentence order and construction only to improve clarity. I am not an expert on this topic, and I did not check the content or sources. There is no intended change in the actual content.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
07:2307:23, 20 February 2023diffhist−126
Film award
Changed to refer and link to British Academy Film Awards, rather than the broader BAFTA organisation. Removed superfluous description as most prestigious in UK. (There is currently much more that could be improved with this paragraph).Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
3 February 2023
11:2811:28, 3 February 2023diffhist+232
Adolph Rickenbacker
Removed Paul Barth from list of co-founders of Rickenbacker. I could find no reference describing him as a founder - although several to him working at Rickenbacker in the early years. Added reference.Tag: Visual edit
17:5717:57, 18 January 2023diffhist−194
America (Razorlight song)
Removed part about reviewer Michael Lomas comparing with Foreigner, Boston and U2. I found previous editor's paraphrasing of the review hard to understand. I tried to make small changes to make it clearer, but ultimately removed altogether because it only made sense in the context of the reviewer's implicit admiration of U2 and his disdain for Foreigner and Boston, which seemed too far from the original topic and too opinionated.Tag: Visual edit
20 December 2022
17:4517:45, 20 December 2022diffhist−5
Iselin Solheim
Replaced "simplyously". This word was not found in dictionary - but a search (forcing this spelling rather than the corrected "simultaneously") led back to this wikipage!Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
4 December 2022
09:1609:16, 4 December 2022diffhist−1
War of 1812
Used "press-ganged" rather than "impressment" on grounds that it is a better known term. This change also enabled me to rephrase sentence so it is clear that it was the Royal Navy who did this. (Changes made to improve clarity for a person like myself, who knew nothing about the 1812 war and the term "impressment" until reading this article.)Tag: Visual edit
08:1408:14, 4 December 2022diffhist+10
m
War of 1812
For readability only. In the context of a war between US and Britain clarified at the start of this sentence that it refers to differences in opinion *within* the US.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
11:2911:29, 14 January 2024diffhist−4
A Groovy Kind of Love
In The Mindbenders singles chronology correctly includes their 1966 song "Can't Live With You, Can't Live Without You", but incorrectly included a link to the unrelated 1989 song of the same name performed by Billy Newton-Davis and Celine Dion. Removed this link.Tag: Visual edit: Switched
15:1415:14, 21 July 2023diffhist+2
m
Byte
Replaced hyphen immediately before "2" with ", as", because the hyphen could be read as "minus 2".Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
6 June 2023
08:3708:37, 6 June 2023diffhist+12
Isle of Man
Changed sentence order and construction only to improve clarity. I am not an expert on this topic, and I did not check the content or sources. There is no intended change in the actual content.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
07:2307:23, 20 February 2023diffhist−126
Film award
Changed to refer and link to British Academy Film Awards, rather than the broader BAFTA organisation. Removed superfluous description as most prestigious in UK. (There is currently much more that could be improved with this paragraph).Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
3 February 2023
11:2811:28, 3 February 2023diffhist+232
Adolph Rickenbacker
Removed Paul Barth from list of co-founders of Rickenbacker. I could find no reference describing him as a founder - although several to him working at Rickenbacker in the early years. Added reference.Tag: Visual edit
17:5717:57, 18 January 2023diffhist−194
America (Razorlight song)
Removed part about reviewer Michael Lomas comparing with Foreigner, Boston and U2. I found previous editor's paraphrasing of the review hard to understand. I tried to make small changes to make it clearer, but ultimately removed altogether because it only made sense in the context of the reviewer's implicit admiration of U2 and his disdain for Foreigner and Boston, which seemed too far from the original topic and too opinionated.Tag: Visual edit
20 December 2022
17:4517:45, 20 December 2022diffhist−5
Iselin Solheim
Replaced "simplyously". This word was not found in dictionary - but a search (forcing this spelling rather than the corrected "simultaneously") led back to this wikipage!Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
4 December 2022
09:1609:16, 4 December 2022diffhist−1
War of 1812
Used "press-ganged" rather than "impressment" on grounds that it is a better known term. This change also enabled me to rephrase sentence so it is clear that it was the Royal Navy who did this. (Changes made to improve clarity for a person like myself, who knew nothing about the 1812 war and the term "impressment" until reading this article.)Tag: Visual edit
08:1408:14, 4 December 2022diffhist+10
m
War of 1812
For readability only. In the context of a war between US and Britain clarified at the start of this sentence that it refers to differences in opinion *within* the US.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit