05:3105:31, 26 May 2013diffhist+33
Sauna suit
Fixed untagged link in "body wrapping" section, added {{who}} tag for "many people" in "body wrapping" section
13:0613:06, 25 June 2012diffhist+2
m
Addictive personality
→Treatment: 2nd paragraph had minor spelling errors (sooth instead of soothe--although 'soothing' is correct, 'sooth' is a noun which means 'truth'), also minor rewording for clarification in 2nd paragraph
00:4100:41, 30 January 2012diffhist−2
m
Aisha Tyler
→Personal life: no need for commas around husband's name. He is not introduced as "her attorney, Jeff Tietjens,..." just "attorney, Jeff Teitjens,..." which requires no commas.
20:2920:29, 3 March 2011diffhist+4
House (TV series)
summary - The character (Cameron) can't leave the "show"; she can leave the setting of the show (the hospital); the actress (Jennifer Morrison) CAN leave the show
03:0803:08, 2 January 2011diffhist+10
Sirius XM
→Financial: 5th bullet: added "when" tag to beginning of sentence ("current economic conditions..."). isn't "come due in 2009" out of date as well?
20:5520:55, 23 May 2010diffhist−29
Jaden Smith
removed the phrase "and close cousin Jake Tipton" from introduction of article after parents. the only other mention of family is in the personal life section
05:3105:31, 26 May 2013diffhist+33
Sauna suit
Fixed untagged link in "body wrapping" section, added {{who}} tag for "many people" in "body wrapping" section
13:0613:06, 25 June 2012diffhist+2
m
Addictive personality
→Treatment: 2nd paragraph had minor spelling errors (sooth instead of soothe--although 'soothing' is correct, 'sooth' is a noun which means 'truth'), also minor rewording for clarification in 2nd paragraph
00:4100:41, 30 January 2012diffhist−2
m
Aisha Tyler
→Personal life: no need for commas around husband's name. He is not introduced as "her attorney, Jeff Tietjens,..." just "attorney, Jeff Teitjens,..." which requires no commas.
20:2920:29, 3 March 2011diffhist+4
House (TV series)
summary - The character (Cameron) can't leave the "show"; she can leave the setting of the show (the hospital); the actress (Jennifer Morrison) CAN leave the show
03:0803:08, 2 January 2011diffhist+10
Sirius XM
→Financial: 5th bullet: added "when" tag to beginning of sentence ("current economic conditions..."). isn't "come due in 2009" out of date as well?
20:5520:55, 23 May 2010diffhist−29
Jaden Smith
removed the phrase "and close cousin Jake Tipton" from introduction of article after parents. the only other mention of family is in the personal life section