07:0507:05, 18 January 2024diffhist+5
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Kathleen Martínez
Added the copy edit tag, removed incorrect tag formatting (it was not an actual tag, it just said in all caps that more sources were needed) of a particular section. I would just reformat it for whoever seemed to want to tag it for more sources needed but I don't feel qualified to make that call as I'm not familiar with the subject or the amount of sources. It is possible this could be ironed out with copyediting anyway.
08:2508:25, 6 May 2023diffhist+18
Russell Williams (criminal)
Felonies do not exist in Canada; they are called indictable offences rather than felonies. Wording changed to reflect. In previous edits that the term 'serial killer' was removed because he killed two people rather than three or more. This definition of ‘serial killer’ does not seem to be consensus. He was described by the court he was indicted by as 'a serial murderer' and is mentioned on the Serial killer Wikipedia page. Hence returned inclusion.
15:1115:11, 25 April 2023diffhist+915
Lynn Breedlove
Added quote on gender/religion/addiction to personal life section, switched out name for pronouns in areas where it seemed clunky (and because pronouns seemed to be avoided throughout most of the article, which seemed strange in a circumstance in which we have some knowledge of what pronouns he uses based on past interviews.Tag: Visual edit
17:3617:36, 20 June 2022diffhist+30
Nazi euthanasia and the Catholic Church
For more encyclopedic tone. (i.e. added "those deemed by the Nazis" rather than implying the language Nazis used for disabled people is objective or neutral terminology.) Some terminology has also been changed when it is more relevant what terminology disabled people use for themselves rather than what terminology the Nazis used for them.
00:2000:20, 12 March 2022diffhist−80
Conspiracy of Cinadon
→Conspirators: Removed a section which referred to Cinadon as "a young and valiant man" and a bit that described him as "coming from a humble background" along with some more subjective descriptors, as this is not the language for an encyclopedia.
07:0507:05, 18 January 2024diffhist+5
m
Kathleen Martínez
Added the copy edit tag, removed incorrect tag formatting (it was not an actual tag, it just said in all caps that more sources were needed) of a particular section. I would just reformat it for whoever seemed to want to tag it for more sources needed but I don't feel qualified to make that call as I'm not familiar with the subject or the amount of sources. It is possible this could be ironed out with copyediting anyway.
08:2508:25, 6 May 2023diffhist+18
Russell Williams (criminal)
Felonies do not exist in Canada; they are called indictable offences rather than felonies. Wording changed to reflect. In previous edits that the term 'serial killer' was removed because he killed two people rather than three or more. This definition of ‘serial killer’ does not seem to be consensus. He was described by the court he was indicted by as 'a serial murderer' and is mentioned on the Serial killer Wikipedia page. Hence returned inclusion.
15:1115:11, 25 April 2023diffhist+915
Lynn Breedlove
Added quote on gender/religion/addiction to personal life section, switched out name for pronouns in areas where it seemed clunky (and because pronouns seemed to be avoided throughout most of the article, which seemed strange in a circumstance in which we have some knowledge of what pronouns he uses based on past interviews.Tag: Visual edit
17:3617:36, 20 June 2022diffhist+30
Nazi euthanasia and the Catholic Church
For more encyclopedic tone. (i.e. added "those deemed by the Nazis" rather than implying the language Nazis used for disabled people is objective or neutral terminology.) Some terminology has also been changed when it is more relevant what terminology disabled people use for themselves rather than what terminology the Nazis used for them.
00:2000:20, 12 March 2022diffhist−80
Conspiracy of Cinadon
→Conspirators: Removed a section which referred to Cinadon as "a young and valiant man" and a bit that described him as "coming from a humble background" along with some more subjective descriptors, as this is not the language for an encyclopedia.