02:0302:03, 26 May 2024diffhist+63
Carlo Acutis
Moved several chunks of text to where they’d better fit in the discussion; added a sentence for clarification; made a few grammar/punctuation fixes. #article-section-source-editorTags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
01:5001:50, 26 May 2024diffhist+69
Carlo Acutis
A few more moves of text to fit better in the discussion plus some punctuation fixes. #article-section-source-editorTags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
01:4001:40, 26 May 2024diffhist−50
Carlo Acutis
deleted one sentence to move to the next section, where it belongs better; also moved a sentence back to the previous paragraphs, where it also belongs better. #article-section-source-editorTags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
01:2201:22, 26 May 2024diffhist−80
James Alberione
Deleted excess words in one sentence and a whole sentence that also seemed unneeded. #article-section-source-editorTags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
02:0302:03, 26 May 2024diffhist+63
Carlo Acutis
Moved several chunks of text to where they’d better fit in the discussion; added a sentence for clarification; made a few grammar/punctuation fixes. #article-section-source-editorTags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
01:5001:50, 26 May 2024diffhist+69
Carlo Acutis
A few more moves of text to fit better in the discussion plus some punctuation fixes. #article-section-source-editorTags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
01:4001:40, 26 May 2024diffhist−50
Carlo Acutis
deleted one sentence to move to the next section, where it belongs better; also moved a sentence back to the previous paragraphs, where it also belongs better. #article-section-source-editorTags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
01:2201:22, 26 May 2024diffhist−80
James Alberione
Deleted excess words in one sentence and a whole sentence that also seemed unneeded. #article-section-source-editorTags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit