17:1717:17, 8 August 2022diffhist−37
Frontenac, Missouri
removed "affluent suburb" descriptor from lead; demographics are discussed in the article; these descriptors were added to the articles for a number of St. Louis County suburbs in 2007 and have since been removed.
1 August 2022
06:2006:20, 1 August 2022diffhist−5,815
St. Louis County, Missouri
→Arts and culture: removed unsourced descriptions of colloquial regions that are largely unencyclopedic in tone, unfocused in scope, and excessively generalizing towards demographics. Some descriptions also contain advertising-like language regarding local attractions that could be better located elsewhere in the article in a more encyclopedic form.
21:2121:21, 6 July 2022diffhist−1,403
Boca Raton, Florida
Removed poorly sourced claim suggesting Boca Raton is "one of the wealthiest places in south Florida". Census data refutes this. The abundance of wealthy people in the city (a different claim) is better discussed in the article and presenting it that way in the lead comes off as an attempt to try to "sell" the city.
21:1121:11, 6 July 2022diffhist−1,200
Boca Raton, Florida
Deleting the excessive discussion of neighborhoods outside the city limits from the article and eliminating the now empty "neighborhoods and west boca raton" section. The West Boca Raton article is linked elsewhere in the article.
17:1717:17, 8 August 2022diffhist−37
Frontenac, Missouri
removed "affluent suburb" descriptor from lead; demographics are discussed in the article; these descriptors were added to the articles for a number of St. Louis County suburbs in 2007 and have since been removed.
1 August 2022
06:2006:20, 1 August 2022diffhist−5,815
St. Louis County, Missouri
→Arts and culture: removed unsourced descriptions of colloquial regions that are largely unencyclopedic in tone, unfocused in scope, and excessively generalizing towards demographics. Some descriptions also contain advertising-like language regarding local attractions that could be better located elsewhere in the article in a more encyclopedic form.
21:2121:21, 6 July 2022diffhist−1,403
Boca Raton, Florida
Removed poorly sourced claim suggesting Boca Raton is "one of the wealthiest places in south Florida". Census data refutes this. The abundance of wealthy people in the city (a different claim) is better discussed in the article and presenting it that way in the lead comes off as an attempt to try to "sell" the city.
21:1121:11, 6 July 2022diffhist−1,200
Boca Raton, Florida
Deleting the excessive discussion of neighborhoods outside the city limits from the article and eliminating the now empty "neighborhoods and west boca raton" section. The West Boca Raton article is linked elsewhere in the article.