14:0214:02, 29 May 2024diffhist+2
Skunked term
Undid revision
1226254042 by
Swpb (
talk) Why was this reverted? I don't think "while" is grammatically conventional in this circumstance as it is used for comparison, not to indicate time; I think "whereas" or "whilst" would be more fitting?Tags: UndoReverted
10:4610:46, 28 May 2024diffhist+421
IFA Wartburg
Effectively reverting revisions 1216344413 and 1215578190; the former is uncited but even if it's true, I don't think it needs to be mentioned in the lead; the latter I don't buy the invocation of
WP:RS because it's a primary source, maybe you could argue it's irrelevant but I don't think socurrent
14:0214:02, 29 May 2024diffhist+2
Skunked term
Undid revision
1226254042 by
Swpb (
talk) Why was this reverted? I don't think "while" is grammatically conventional in this circumstance as it is used for comparison, not to indicate time; I think "whereas" or "whilst" would be more fitting?Tags: UndoReverted
10:4610:46, 28 May 2024diffhist+421
IFA Wartburg
Effectively reverting revisions 1216344413 and 1215578190; the former is uncited but even if it's true, I don't think it needs to be mentioned in the lead; the latter I don't buy the invocation of
WP:RS because it's a primary source, maybe you could argue it's irrelevant but I don't think socurrent