20:5720:57, 9 January 2011diffhist+8
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Superluminal motion
The article had read, "astrophysicists still argue for this view" thus the grammar sounded awkward and has been changed to "astrophysicists still argue in favor of this view"
6 January 2011
06:5906:59, 6 January 2011diffhist+8
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Yoko Ono
→Early life: The article had read, "One famous has her mother..." I believe this should read something like "One famous story..." or "One famous anecdote..."
00:0700:07, 30 October 2010diffhist+5
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Pam Grier
→Early life: Had previously read, "She is a mix of several races" ... Hispanic, Chinese, Filipino are not "races" thus I replaced the word "races" with the proper word, "ethnicities"
21:1021:10, 29 June 2010diffhist+4
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Counterintelligence
Original post consisted of weak grammar, i.e., "The other side of the CI coin-counterespionage-has one purpose" which should read, "On the other side of the CI (Counterintelligence) coin, counteresp..
20:5720:57, 9 January 2011diffhist+8
m
Superluminal motion
The article had read, "astrophysicists still argue for this view" thus the grammar sounded awkward and has been changed to "astrophysicists still argue in favor of this view"
6 January 2011
06:5906:59, 6 January 2011diffhist+8
m
Yoko Ono
→Early life: The article had read, "One famous has her mother..." I believe this should read something like "One famous story..." or "One famous anecdote..."
00:0700:07, 30 October 2010diffhist+5
m
Pam Grier
→Early life: Had previously read, "She is a mix of several races" ... Hispanic, Chinese, Filipino are not "races" thus I replaced the word "races" with the proper word, "ethnicities"
21:1021:10, 29 June 2010diffhist+4
m
Counterintelligence
Original post consisted of weak grammar, i.e., "The other side of the CI coin-counterespionage-has one purpose" which should read, "On the other side of the CI (Counterintelligence) coin, counteresp..