17:4217:42, 15 January 2022diffhist+39
Machine
→top: Add related terms
engine and motor to 2nd sentence, as these can overlap with use of machine. Slight CE for flow and to reduce scope of claims about how term is used.
17:3917:39, 15 January 2022diffhist−54
Machine
→top: Remove first sentence definition that is too vague and general; "any structure with function" could apply to static systems like bridges or barrels, which are not called machines. (Also not supported in body of article.) Replace with the more precise definition from the third sentence (which is supported).
23:3723:37, 29 July 2021diffhist−35
Épée
→top: Shorten short description. Per guideline, purpose is to distinguish, not describe, keeping as short as possible.
23:5523:55, 28 July 2021diffhist−31
Daniel Harvey Hill
No, "American" and "Confederate" still don't go well together. "American" is already implied by "American Civil War", so redundant as well as likely confusing.Tag: Undo
17:4217:42, 15 January 2022diffhist+39
Machine
→top: Add related terms
engine and motor to 2nd sentence, as these can overlap with use of machine. Slight CE for flow and to reduce scope of claims about how term is used.
17:3917:39, 15 January 2022diffhist−54
Machine
→top: Remove first sentence definition that is too vague and general; "any structure with function" could apply to static systems like bridges or barrels, which are not called machines. (Also not supported in body of article.) Replace with the more precise definition from the third sentence (which is supported).
23:3723:37, 29 July 2021diffhist−35
Épée
→top: Shorten short description. Per guideline, purpose is to distinguish, not describe, keeping as short as possible.
23:5523:55, 28 July 2021diffhist−31
Daniel Harvey Hill
No, "American" and "Confederate" still don't go well together. "American" is already implied by "American Civil War", so redundant as well as likely confusing.Tag: Undo