02:2602:26, 22 October 2022diffhist−213
Glioma
Rewrote the treatment section to be more clear about what the options are and updated the references with more on-point citations. Expanded the section on treatment to include IDH inhibitors with links to the wiki article for Ivosidenib (since it's the best example of this.) I'll come back to add further citations later for the various treatment options under trial but as-is this is a better explanation for the lay reader.Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
7 July 2019
14:3214:32, 7 July 2019diffhist−98
Ziad Jarrah
Removed picture of him where he was smiling. This picture is creepy and gives a more positive slant to a vicious person. I think it's more neutral without the smiling photo and helps avoid glorifying terrorists.
7 October 2017
01:0501:05, 7 October 2017diffhist−458
Cockroach
I deleted the part that is not supported by the citation. The citation is only for the last sentence. The source paper in the last sentence doesn't have the experiment about shelters. That's a big claim and it needs to be supported by a paper.
16:2616:26, 1 March 2017diffhist+472
Chinese law
Added official portal, translated search engine + two commercial providers of Chinese law information (Lexis and WestLaw)
16:2116:21, 1 March 2017diffhist−21
m
Chinese law
"Retained their influence" implies that it has continued to the present. There's no need to repeat that at the end of the sentence.
16:1916:19, 1 March 2017diffhist−142
Chinese law
Link doesn't work. This is an archive.org link, and even that is displaying an error. There are 3 snapshots but looks like they've all been deleted.
12 April 2016
00:0500:05, 12 April 2016diffhist−15
Fine (penalty)
The word "mulct" is not used in any system. That's old English that doesn't appear in any law I can find other than two in West Virginia, USA. There needs to be a citation to support the use of this very unusual word if it's going to stay in the article.
15:5915:59, 29 March 2016diffhist−86
Legal research
Given that the Free Access to Law Movement is mentioned in the introduction, I think it's unnecessary to repeat the reference here.
15:5415:54, 29 March 2016diffhist+1,034
Legal research
AustLII was not founded before the US one (LII). I've split up the list into commercial and free b/c there's an important distinction.
15:2915:29, 29 March 2016diffhist−5
m
Legal research
Changed to markdown numbered list and moved away from lawyer-style list towards easier to read numbered sentences
15:1715:17, 29 March 2016diffhist−8
Comparative law
It seems a truism that some legal rules are comparable. The more interesting questions are about the broader issue of comparing systems (see rest of article).
15:1515:15, 29 March 2016diffhist+342
Comparative law
Added Global-Regulation comparative law search, EU national law portal, Library of Congress national law guides & LOC global law blog
18:5318:53, 4 October 2011diffhist−157
Sovereignty
Moved UN part to bottom w/ international law. Changed completely b/c author claimed that Article 4 says something other than what it really says (now quoted and properly referenced).
20 September 2011
19:3719:37, 20 September 2011diffhist−94
Bill Graham (promoter)
The four year lease option upon Sullivan's death is completely unsupported by the references cited and I couldn't find anything on Google that supported this other than items that are uncited text that appears to be taken from this article.
02:2602:26, 22 October 2022diffhist−213
Glioma
Rewrote the treatment section to be more clear about what the options are and updated the references with more on-point citations. Expanded the section on treatment to include IDH inhibitors with links to the wiki article for Ivosidenib (since it's the best example of this.) I'll come back to add further citations later for the various treatment options under trial but as-is this is a better explanation for the lay reader.Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
7 July 2019
14:3214:32, 7 July 2019diffhist−98
Ziad Jarrah
Removed picture of him where he was smiling. This picture is creepy and gives a more positive slant to a vicious person. I think it's more neutral without the smiling photo and helps avoid glorifying terrorists.
7 October 2017
01:0501:05, 7 October 2017diffhist−458
Cockroach
I deleted the part that is not supported by the citation. The citation is only for the last sentence. The source paper in the last sentence doesn't have the experiment about shelters. That's a big claim and it needs to be supported by a paper.
16:2616:26, 1 March 2017diffhist+472
Chinese law
Added official portal, translated search engine + two commercial providers of Chinese law information (Lexis and WestLaw)
16:2116:21, 1 March 2017diffhist−21
m
Chinese law
"Retained their influence" implies that it has continued to the present. There's no need to repeat that at the end of the sentence.
16:1916:19, 1 March 2017diffhist−142
Chinese law
Link doesn't work. This is an archive.org link, and even that is displaying an error. There are 3 snapshots but looks like they've all been deleted.
12 April 2016
00:0500:05, 12 April 2016diffhist−15
Fine (penalty)
The word "mulct" is not used in any system. That's old English that doesn't appear in any law I can find other than two in West Virginia, USA. There needs to be a citation to support the use of this very unusual word if it's going to stay in the article.
15:5915:59, 29 March 2016diffhist−86
Legal research
Given that the Free Access to Law Movement is mentioned in the introduction, I think it's unnecessary to repeat the reference here.
15:5415:54, 29 March 2016diffhist+1,034
Legal research
AustLII was not founded before the US one (LII). I've split up the list into commercial and free b/c there's an important distinction.
15:2915:29, 29 March 2016diffhist−5
m
Legal research
Changed to markdown numbered list and moved away from lawyer-style list towards easier to read numbered sentences
15:1715:17, 29 March 2016diffhist−8
Comparative law
It seems a truism that some legal rules are comparable. The more interesting questions are about the broader issue of comparing systems (see rest of article).
15:1515:15, 29 March 2016diffhist+342
Comparative law
Added Global-Regulation comparative law search, EU national law portal, Library of Congress national law guides & LOC global law blog
18:5318:53, 4 October 2011diffhist−157
Sovereignty
Moved UN part to bottom w/ international law. Changed completely b/c author claimed that Article 4 says something other than what it really says (now quoted and properly referenced).
20 September 2011
19:3719:37, 20 September 2011diffhist−94
Bill Graham (promoter)
The four year lease option upon Sullivan's death is completely unsupported by the references cited and I couldn't find anything on Google that supported this other than items that are uncited text that appears to be taken from this article.