16:2516:25, 4 January 2024diffhist+8
Rebel Moon
→top: "Pt.1: CoF" & "Pt.2: Scargiver" could be considered as a single story arc, so a trilogy of sequels MIGHT imply 3 films OTHER than ScargiverTags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
14:2714:27, 5 October 2023diffhist0
Too Human
minor edit - moved around "in 1999" in the 2nd sentence of introductory paragraph 2, bc it is less ambiguous and fits with the facts stated in the "Development" section.
26 September 2023
16:1516:15, 26 September 2023diffhist+27
Emma Heming Willis
The standards for writing differing nationalities AND ethnicity interchangeably need to change (Brit isn't "specific enough" for an ethnic context and denotation; therefore strictly implies nationality). As a fellow Guyanese, our nationality is Guyanese first and THEN we talk about "what kind" we are (since a lot of us intermingle)
16:3116:31, 21 July 2023diffhist+1
Secret Invasion (miniseries)
corrected a typo ("may" -> "May", as in the month) and re-ordered that clause to prevent confusion (could also suggest that Selim would direct the series starting in May 2021). Use your commas, folks.
19 July 2023
13:5213:52, 19 July 2023diffhist+27
Glossary of video game terms
→top: "Proc" - triggered programmed events might not have RANDOMIZED outcomes, but they're always conditional (including the actually random ones)Tags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
18:3518:35, 14 July 2023diffhist+17
Maya Erskine
→Early life and education: put in the "Caucasian" qualifier before "American" bc the latter term is just a nationality (whereas "Japanese" is usually a metonym for both the major ethnic group, Yamato, and the nationality)Tag: Reverted
10 July 2023
23:1623:16, 10 July 2023diffhist+4
List of the Inheritance Cycle characters
added in "and" between the clauses "the human son of Morzan and Selena," and "Eragon's half-brother." (A semi-colon would also suffice in lieu of that conjunction). Without it, it suggests Selena is Eragon's half-brother.
00:2200:22, 30 June 2023diffhist+61
E3
The timeframe for E3 2023 has come and gone and should be reflected in a historical tone; also rephrased the last sentence for a tad bit more detail (be aware that some publishers like WB Games had their own specific events since 2019 or so, pre-pandemic); first sentence in paragraph 3 needs to be written that way bc E3 is not defunct but past events had been held in different venues
21:4121:41, 16 March 2023diffhist+38
Aegean Sea
prev. wording suggests that Aegean Sea also connects to Black Sea (B <-> A <-> M), but it does not (it is A <-> M <-> B).
21:3321:33, 3 March 2023diffhist−2
Luminous Productions
→Focus: a video game production is media that has content; do not refer to it as content itself unless talking about a list of games on a platform or somethingTag: Reverted
16:2516:25, 4 January 2024diffhist+8
Rebel Moon
→top: "Pt.1: CoF" & "Pt.2: Scargiver" could be considered as a single story arc, so a trilogy of sequels MIGHT imply 3 films OTHER than ScargiverTags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
14:2714:27, 5 October 2023diffhist0
Too Human
minor edit - moved around "in 1999" in the 2nd sentence of introductory paragraph 2, bc it is less ambiguous and fits with the facts stated in the "Development" section.
26 September 2023
16:1516:15, 26 September 2023diffhist+27
Emma Heming Willis
The standards for writing differing nationalities AND ethnicity interchangeably need to change (Brit isn't "specific enough" for an ethnic context and denotation; therefore strictly implies nationality). As a fellow Guyanese, our nationality is Guyanese first and THEN we talk about "what kind" we are (since a lot of us intermingle)
16:3116:31, 21 July 2023diffhist+1
Secret Invasion (miniseries)
corrected a typo ("may" -> "May", as in the month) and re-ordered that clause to prevent confusion (could also suggest that Selim would direct the series starting in May 2021). Use your commas, folks.
19 July 2023
13:5213:52, 19 July 2023diffhist+27
Glossary of video game terms
→top: "Proc" - triggered programmed events might not have RANDOMIZED outcomes, but they're always conditional (including the actually random ones)Tags: Mobile editMobile app editAndroid app edit
18:3518:35, 14 July 2023diffhist+17
Maya Erskine
→Early life and education: put in the "Caucasian" qualifier before "American" bc the latter term is just a nationality (whereas "Japanese" is usually a metonym for both the major ethnic group, Yamato, and the nationality)Tag: Reverted
10 July 2023
23:1623:16, 10 July 2023diffhist+4
List of the Inheritance Cycle characters
added in "and" between the clauses "the human son of Morzan and Selena," and "Eragon's half-brother." (A semi-colon would also suffice in lieu of that conjunction). Without it, it suggests Selena is Eragon's half-brother.
00:2200:22, 30 June 2023diffhist+61
E3
The timeframe for E3 2023 has come and gone and should be reflected in a historical tone; also rephrased the last sentence for a tad bit more detail (be aware that some publishers like WB Games had their own specific events since 2019 or so, pre-pandemic); first sentence in paragraph 3 needs to be written that way bc E3 is not defunct but past events had been held in different venues
21:4121:41, 16 March 2023diffhist+38
Aegean Sea
prev. wording suggests that Aegean Sea also connects to Black Sea (B <-> A <-> M), but it does not (it is A <-> M <-> B).
21:3321:33, 3 March 2023diffhist−2
Luminous Productions
→Focus: a video game production is media that has content; do not refer to it as content itself unless talking about a list of games on a platform or somethingTag: Reverted