00:4200:42, 11 October 2016diffhist+542
Massah and Meribah
the essay here is near to fully derived from primary sources, which makes it a work of WP editors' original research (in defiance of WP:OR and WP:VERIFY
29 December 2015
23:0423:04, 29 December 2015diffhist+526
Soft Kitty
Edited lawsuit paragraph because the citation provided ONLY indicated that the copyright was renewed, and doesn't shop that the book contains the lyrics. All that can and should be said at this point is that a suit has been filed. (No side taken.)
28 December 2015
06:0806:08, 28 December 2015diffhist+67
Hugh Glass
Corrected clumsy markup editing that left the Revenant wikilink broken, though it helpfully called attention to the Richard Harris film in '71
27 December 2015
15:1415:14, 27 December 2015diffhist−114
The Revenant (2015 film)
→Plot: Copyediting and editing the plot for consistency of style (Captain v. captain, etc.), and to address ambiguities from poorly constructed sentences. Annotated parts of plot that do not yet make sense. SHOULD NOT INTRODUCE WIFE IN CLOSING.
26 December 2015
15:4515:45, 26 December 2015diffhist+2,076
Unicorn (finance)
Making citations uniform using cite journal template. Added citation needed tag to Aileen Lee statement; it's not enough to cite Aileen Lee article, even seminal one, to support statement that she popularized title term: someone ELSE must say this.
00:4200:42, 11 October 2016diffhist+542
Massah and Meribah
the essay here is near to fully derived from primary sources, which makes it a work of WP editors' original research (in defiance of WP:OR and WP:VERIFY
29 December 2015
23:0423:04, 29 December 2015diffhist+526
Soft Kitty
Edited lawsuit paragraph because the citation provided ONLY indicated that the copyright was renewed, and doesn't shop that the book contains the lyrics. All that can and should be said at this point is that a suit has been filed. (No side taken.)
28 December 2015
06:0806:08, 28 December 2015diffhist+67
Hugh Glass
Corrected clumsy markup editing that left the Revenant wikilink broken, though it helpfully called attention to the Richard Harris film in '71
27 December 2015
15:1415:14, 27 December 2015diffhist−114
The Revenant (2015 film)
→Plot: Copyediting and editing the plot for consistency of style (Captain v. captain, etc.), and to address ambiguities from poorly constructed sentences. Annotated parts of plot that do not yet make sense. SHOULD NOT INTRODUCE WIFE IN CLOSING.
26 December 2015
15:4515:45, 26 December 2015diffhist+2,076
Unicorn (finance)
Making citations uniform using cite journal template. Added citation needed tag to Aileen Lee statement; it's not enough to cite Aileen Lee article, even seminal one, to support statement that she popularized title term: someone ELSE must say this.