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26 May 2017
- 12:19 12:19, 26 May 2017 diff hist +3 Mesh rplc "/" with "or" per WP:/
24 May 2017
- 00:56 00:56, 24 May 2017 diff hist −1 Pierre Bergé →Philanthropic, cultural, and political interests: correct "an" to "a" before "UNESCO", which in English is always pronounced as a word beginning with the IPA consonant [j]
- 00:47 00:47, 24 May 2017 diff hist −10 Pierre Bergé →Philanthropic, cultural, and political interests: correct absurd "later went on to serve" to "later served"
- 00:43 00:43, 24 May 2017 diff hist +2 Bernard Buffet ce: correct quotes to italics for foreign language phrase
- 00:40 00:40, 24 May 2017 diff hist −2 Pierre Bergé →Yves Saint Laurent: ce: correct ; to :, rmv quotation marks from blockquote per MOS:BQ
23 May 2017
- 08:27 08:27, 23 May 2017 diff hist +132 Eli M. Black →Business career: clarify what jargon "take a run at" means in this context, replacing it with encyclopedic language readers can understand
22 May 2017
- 19:16 19:16, 22 May 2017 diff hist −35 Cassino (card game) rmv obviously false (and unsupported) stmnt re It/Am immigrants: it was treated as familiar by Jane Austen in rural England (P&P, ch 29: "Miss de Bourgh chose to play at cassino") in 1813—long before large-scale It/Am immigration
- 03:24 03:24, 22 May 2017 diff hist −6 Luísa Sobral →Early life and career: WP:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
21 May 2017
- 02:20 02:20, 21 May 2017 diff hist +18 Baskin-Robbins →History: correct "Burt and Irv" to "Baskin and Robbins" per WP:SURNAME
- 02:14 02:14, 21 May 2017 diff hist −11 Howard Johnson's →Entering the hotel business: correct colloquial
- 02:07 02:07, 21 May 2017 diff hist −8 Manchester by the Sea (film) →Plot: rmv spaces from em dashes per WP:MDASH: "An em dash is always unspaced (that is, without a space on either side)"
- 01:48 01:48, 21 May 2017 diff hist +3 Manchester by the Sea (film) →Plot: correct informal "teen" (used as an adjective) to "teenage", more appropriate in an encyclopedia
- 01:45 01:45, 21 May 2017 diff hist −2 Manchester by the Sea (film) →Plot: rmv indefinite article from "cardiac arrest", which (like most health-related conditions—"cancer", eg) is usually a mass noun, rather than a count noun, in English
20 May 2017
- 23:55 23:55, 20 May 2017 diff hist +191 Corn syrup →Commercial preparation: need definition, citation for "seven layers density column"
- 21:19 21:19, 20 May 2017 diff hist −49 Cape Ann →Popular culture: rmv inappropriate inline link to external promotional site
19 May 2017
- 19:13 19:13, 19 May 2017 diff hist −3 Harry Ruby →Biography: WP:SURNAME Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
- 00:25 00:25, 19 May 2017 diff hist −23 Brown marmorated stink bug →Population increase: ce
- 00:23 00:23, 19 May 2017 diff hist 0 Brown marmorated stink bug →In the United States: correct verb tense (2011 is no longer the present)
18 May 2017
- 05:36 05:36, 18 May 2017 diff hist −1 69th Regiment Armory →Notable events: rmv errant comma
- 03:20 03:20, 18 May 2017 diff hist −8 Lascaux →Interpretation: rmv inane puffery "famous" (if something is truly famous, no one has to be told it is) and inappropriate period from image caption
- 03:10 03:10, 18 May 2017 diff hist +26 Chauvet Cave →Features: weasel words
- 01:27 01:27, 18 May 2017 diff hist −6 RG-6 rmv weaselly "quite" from "generic"—if the genericness is not completete, then its limitations must be specified, not hinted at
- 01:21 01:21, 18 May 2017 diff hist +22 RG-6 →Applications: define "in recent years"
16 May 2017
- 10:58 10:58, 16 May 2017 diff hist −325 Liza's at The Palace.... →Public television special: ce, correcting text format, verb tense, etc; prune unencyclopedic fan-mag crap; link to HDNet
- 10:57 10:57, 16 May 2017 diff hist +6 AXS TV bold HDNet, since that former name redirects to this article
- 10:42 10:42, 16 May 2017 diff hist 0 Maybe This Time (song) "include in" is English idiom, "include on" is strange
- 10:40 10:40, 16 May 2017 diff hist −14 Maybe This Time (song) correct album, movie titles to italics; no need for second link to Cabaret (1972 film) in one short ¶;
- 10:35 10:35, 16 May 2017 diff hist +40 Maybe This Time (song) →Analysis: correct quotation(song title)-within-quotation marks; rmv errant mid-sentence carriage returns; italicize publication titles, adding wikilinks where articles exist
- 10:33 10:33, 16 May 2017 diff hist −2 Manic Pixie Dream Girl →Examples: rmv quotation marks from another term for exactly the same reasons given in my previous edit
- 10:29 10:29, 16 May 2017 diff hist −4 Manic Pixie Dream Girl rmv inappropriate quotation marks from straightforward terms that are not quotations, not words-used-as-words, do not merit scare quotes, and have no other reason to be enclosed in quotation marks except in some editor's mind
- 10:14 10:14, 16 May 2017 diff hist −6 Maybe This Time (song) →Synopsis: link to h2g2 again, for readers who jump directly to this section and are baffled as to what h2g2 is; block quotation inappropriate for such a short quotation
- 10:07 10:07, 16 May 2017 diff hist +3 Maybe This Time (song) →Production: ce; link to h2g2, because most readers have no idea what it is
- 08:39 08:39, 16 May 2017 diff hist −8 I Wanna Be Loved by You rmv puffery Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
- 06:21 06:21, 16 May 2017 diff hist −2 Koko (gorilla) →Use of language: correct "claims" to "says" per WP:SAY
14 May 2017
- 19:15 19:15, 14 May 2017 diff hist −6 Gloria Swanson →Sadie Thompson: correct euphemistic "pass away" to "die"
- 18:59 18:59, 14 May 2017 diff hist −85 Gloria Swanson →Early years: rmv unencyclopedic and inane editorialzing ("one would hardly believe Swanson was barely five feet tall"); rmv "unfortunately" per WP:OPED: "Wikipedia should not take a view as to whether an event was fortunate or not"
13 May 2017
- 12:44 12:44, 13 May 2017 diff hist +90 Yes and no →Three-form systems: correct text formatting and add Faroese links, as already in place for all other languages in this section
- 12:24 12:24, 13 May 2017 diff hist −2 Yes Featuring Jon Anderson, Trevor Rabin, Rick Wakeman →Formation: correct euphemistic "passing" to "death"
- 03:16 03:16, 13 May 2017 diff hist −401 John Getz →Career: ce; prune more puffery and irrelevant details (like wearing a beard in a particular role—again, this isn't a fan mag)
- 02:52 02:52, 13 May 2017 diff hist +24 John Getz →Career: prune much empty and inappropriately biased editorializing about failed TV series; cn for 10pm Monday as "graveyard slot"; rmv errant comma, quotes from another character name
- 02:40 02:40, 13 May 2017 diff hist −13 John Getz →Career: rmv unnecessary pipe "|daytime drama" from soap opera; correct verb tense
- 02:36 02:36, 13 May 2017 diff hist −131 John Getz →Career: prune unnecessary verbosity, puffery, and irrelevant details about other actors (this is an encyclopedia, not a fan magazine); rmv inappropriate quotation marks from character name; rplc colloquial "moved on" w/ "then moved"
- 02:25 02:25, 13 May 2017 diff hist −10 John Getz →Career: rmv puffery "respected"
- 02:22 02:22, 13 May 2017 diff hist −6 Sam Wood →Life and career: correct colloquial "would spend" to "spent"
11 May 2017
- 11:42 11:42, 11 May 2017 diff hist +1 Margaret Hunt Hill Bridge correct "a" to "an" before "heiress"
- 03:31 03:31, 11 May 2017 diff hist −1 Creep (Radiohead song) →Release and reception: they didn't "move onto" a second single, they "moved on to" it
10 May 2017
- 17:54 17:54, 10 May 2017 diff hist 0 The Air That I Breathe →History: move quotation marks outside of link
- 15:45 15:45, 10 May 2017 diff hist −13 Radio Ga Ga →Meaning: correct format of several quotations, including removing inappropriate italics and decorative quotation marks from blockquote per MOS:BQ
- 02:59 02:59, 10 May 2017 diff hist +585 Indian giver →Usage: move refs here from deleted duplicate passage rmvd from Etymology section
- 02:57 02:57, 10 May 2017 diff hist −676 Indian giver →Etymology: rmv duplicate first use in print, which is already in the following Usage section where it fits better Tag: references removed
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26 May 2017
- 12:19 12:19, 26 May 2017 diff hist +3 Mesh rplc "/" with "or" per WP:/
24 May 2017
- 00:56 00:56, 24 May 2017 diff hist −1 Pierre Bergé →Philanthropic, cultural, and political interests: correct "an" to "a" before "UNESCO", which in English is always pronounced as a word beginning with the IPA consonant [j]
- 00:47 00:47, 24 May 2017 diff hist −10 Pierre Bergé →Philanthropic, cultural, and political interests: correct absurd "later went on to serve" to "later served"
- 00:43 00:43, 24 May 2017 diff hist +2 Bernard Buffet ce: correct quotes to italics for foreign language phrase
- 00:40 00:40, 24 May 2017 diff hist −2 Pierre Bergé →Yves Saint Laurent: ce: correct ; to :, rmv quotation marks from blockquote per MOS:BQ
23 May 2017
- 08:27 08:27, 23 May 2017 diff hist +132 Eli M. Black →Business career: clarify what jargon "take a run at" means in this context, replacing it with encyclopedic language readers can understand
22 May 2017
- 19:16 19:16, 22 May 2017 diff hist −35 Cassino (card game) rmv obviously false (and unsupported) stmnt re It/Am immigrants: it was treated as familiar by Jane Austen in rural England (P&P, ch 29: "Miss de Bourgh chose to play at cassino") in 1813—long before large-scale It/Am immigration
- 03:24 03:24, 22 May 2017 diff hist −6 Luísa Sobral →Early life and career: WP:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
21 May 2017
- 02:20 02:20, 21 May 2017 diff hist +18 Baskin-Robbins →History: correct "Burt and Irv" to "Baskin and Robbins" per WP:SURNAME
- 02:14 02:14, 21 May 2017 diff hist −11 Howard Johnson's →Entering the hotel business: correct colloquial
- 02:07 02:07, 21 May 2017 diff hist −8 Manchester by the Sea (film) →Plot: rmv spaces from em dashes per WP:MDASH: "An em dash is always unspaced (that is, without a space on either side)"
- 01:48 01:48, 21 May 2017 diff hist +3 Manchester by the Sea (film) →Plot: correct informal "teen" (used as an adjective) to "teenage", more appropriate in an encyclopedia
- 01:45 01:45, 21 May 2017 diff hist −2 Manchester by the Sea (film) →Plot: rmv indefinite article from "cardiac arrest", which (like most health-related conditions—"cancer", eg) is usually a mass noun, rather than a count noun, in English
20 May 2017
- 23:55 23:55, 20 May 2017 diff hist +191 Corn syrup →Commercial preparation: need definition, citation for "seven layers density column"
- 21:19 21:19, 20 May 2017 diff hist −49 Cape Ann →Popular culture: rmv inappropriate inline link to external promotional site
19 May 2017
- 19:13 19:13, 19 May 2017 diff hist −3 Harry Ruby →Biography: WP:SURNAME Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
- 00:25 00:25, 19 May 2017 diff hist −23 Brown marmorated stink bug →Population increase: ce
- 00:23 00:23, 19 May 2017 diff hist 0 Brown marmorated stink bug →In the United States: correct verb tense (2011 is no longer the present)
18 May 2017
- 05:36 05:36, 18 May 2017 diff hist −1 69th Regiment Armory →Notable events: rmv errant comma
- 03:20 03:20, 18 May 2017 diff hist −8 Lascaux →Interpretation: rmv inane puffery "famous" (if something is truly famous, no one has to be told it is) and inappropriate period from image caption
- 03:10 03:10, 18 May 2017 diff hist +26 Chauvet Cave →Features: weasel words
- 01:27 01:27, 18 May 2017 diff hist −6 RG-6 rmv weaselly "quite" from "generic"—if the genericness is not completete, then its limitations must be specified, not hinted at
- 01:21 01:21, 18 May 2017 diff hist +22 RG-6 →Applications: define "in recent years"
16 May 2017
- 10:58 10:58, 16 May 2017 diff hist −325 Liza's at The Palace.... →Public television special: ce, correcting text format, verb tense, etc; prune unencyclopedic fan-mag crap; link to HDNet
- 10:57 10:57, 16 May 2017 diff hist +6 AXS TV bold HDNet, since that former name redirects to this article
- 10:42 10:42, 16 May 2017 diff hist 0 Maybe This Time (song) "include in" is English idiom, "include on" is strange
- 10:40 10:40, 16 May 2017 diff hist −14 Maybe This Time (song) correct album, movie titles to italics; no need for second link to Cabaret (1972 film) in one short ¶;
- 10:35 10:35, 16 May 2017 diff hist +40 Maybe This Time (song) →Analysis: correct quotation(song title)-within-quotation marks; rmv errant mid-sentence carriage returns; italicize publication titles, adding wikilinks where articles exist
- 10:33 10:33, 16 May 2017 diff hist −2 Manic Pixie Dream Girl →Examples: rmv quotation marks from another term for exactly the same reasons given in my previous edit
- 10:29 10:29, 16 May 2017 diff hist −4 Manic Pixie Dream Girl rmv inappropriate quotation marks from straightforward terms that are not quotations, not words-used-as-words, do not merit scare quotes, and have no other reason to be enclosed in quotation marks except in some editor's mind
- 10:14 10:14, 16 May 2017 diff hist −6 Maybe This Time (song) →Synopsis: link to h2g2 again, for readers who jump directly to this section and are baffled as to what h2g2 is; block quotation inappropriate for such a short quotation
- 10:07 10:07, 16 May 2017 diff hist +3 Maybe This Time (song) →Production: ce; link to h2g2, because most readers have no idea what it is
- 08:39 08:39, 16 May 2017 diff hist −8 I Wanna Be Loved by You rmv puffery Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
- 06:21 06:21, 16 May 2017 diff hist −2 Koko (gorilla) →Use of language: correct "claims" to "says" per WP:SAY
14 May 2017
- 19:15 19:15, 14 May 2017 diff hist −6 Gloria Swanson →Sadie Thompson: correct euphemistic "pass away" to "die"
- 18:59 18:59, 14 May 2017 diff hist −85 Gloria Swanson →Early years: rmv unencyclopedic and inane editorialzing ("one would hardly believe Swanson was barely five feet tall"); rmv "unfortunately" per WP:OPED: "Wikipedia should not take a view as to whether an event was fortunate or not"
13 May 2017
- 12:44 12:44, 13 May 2017 diff hist +90 Yes and no →Three-form systems: correct text formatting and add Faroese links, as already in place for all other languages in this section
- 12:24 12:24, 13 May 2017 diff hist −2 Yes Featuring Jon Anderson, Trevor Rabin, Rick Wakeman →Formation: correct euphemistic "passing" to "death"
- 03:16 03:16, 13 May 2017 diff hist −401 John Getz →Career: ce; prune more puffery and irrelevant details (like wearing a beard in a particular role—again, this isn't a fan mag)
- 02:52 02:52, 13 May 2017 diff hist +24 John Getz →Career: prune much empty and inappropriately biased editorializing about failed TV series; cn for 10pm Monday as "graveyard slot"; rmv errant comma, quotes from another character name
- 02:40 02:40, 13 May 2017 diff hist −13 John Getz →Career: rmv unnecessary pipe "|daytime drama" from soap opera; correct verb tense
- 02:36 02:36, 13 May 2017 diff hist −131 John Getz →Career: prune unnecessary verbosity, puffery, and irrelevant details about other actors (this is an encyclopedia, not a fan magazine); rmv inappropriate quotation marks from character name; rplc colloquial "moved on" w/ "then moved"
- 02:25 02:25, 13 May 2017 diff hist −10 John Getz →Career: rmv puffery "respected"
- 02:22 02:22, 13 May 2017 diff hist −6 Sam Wood →Life and career: correct colloquial "would spend" to "spent"
11 May 2017
- 11:42 11:42, 11 May 2017 diff hist +1 Margaret Hunt Hill Bridge correct "a" to "an" before "heiress"
- 03:31 03:31, 11 May 2017 diff hist −1 Creep (Radiohead song) →Release and reception: they didn't "move onto" a second single, they "moved on to" it
10 May 2017
- 17:54 17:54, 10 May 2017 diff hist 0 The Air That I Breathe →History: move quotation marks outside of link
- 15:45 15:45, 10 May 2017 diff hist −13 Radio Ga Ga →Meaning: correct format of several quotations, including removing inappropriate italics and decorative quotation marks from blockquote per MOS:BQ
- 02:59 02:59, 10 May 2017 diff hist +585 Indian giver →Usage: move refs here from deleted duplicate passage rmvd from Etymology section
- 02:57 02:57, 10 May 2017 diff hist −676 Indian giver →Etymology: rmv duplicate first use in print, which is already in the following Usage section where it fits better Tag: references removed
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