00:2700:27, 28 March 2008diffhist−7
Jarhead (film)
just saw the movie, and there was no accidental artillery attack, it was an aircraft attack. At least in my version. If there are several versions, better make it a bit more general
23 January 2008
23:2923:29, 23 January 2008diffhist+4
Einhard
replaced 'He' with 'Alcuin'. if you dont check alcuins own wiki page, its hard to find out who the 'he' is referring to in this sentence : alcuin or einhard ?
10 December 2007
21:1121:11, 10 December 2007diffhist−3
Western (genre)
changed wrong conjugation of a verb, and splitted long sentence with several commas in 2 smaller ones, easier to read I assume
00:2700:27, 28 March 2008diffhist−7
Jarhead (film)
just saw the movie, and there was no accidental artillery attack, it was an aircraft attack. At least in my version. If there are several versions, better make it a bit more general
23 January 2008
23:2923:29, 23 January 2008diffhist+4
Einhard
replaced 'He' with 'Alcuin'. if you dont check alcuins own wiki page, its hard to find out who the 'he' is referring to in this sentence : alcuin or einhard ?
10 December 2007
21:1121:11, 10 December 2007diffhist−3
Western (genre)
changed wrong conjugation of a verb, and splitted long sentence with several commas in 2 smaller ones, easier to read I assume