19:5319:53, 24 November 2009diffhist−426
Department 56
Remove hyperbole, edit grammar, remove random ALL CAPS words. No attempt made to edit for factual accuracy, just writing and tone
22:3522:35, 16 January 2009diffhist+62
Sport
First sentence of Terminology paragraph had been broken by somebody fixing vandalism. Reverting to older version of that para.
20:0120:01, 10 November 2008diffhist+395
White tie
Expanded hunting attire mention. "Hunt Uniform" is not the right phrase. Livery, colours, pinks, attire, sure, but not uniform. Google for "scarlet if convenient" for descriptions.
19:5319:53, 24 November 2009diffhist−426
Department 56
Remove hyperbole, edit grammar, remove random ALL CAPS words. No attempt made to edit for factual accuracy, just writing and tone
22:3522:35, 16 January 2009diffhist+62
Sport
First sentence of Terminology paragraph had been broken by somebody fixing vandalism. Reverting to older version of that para.
20:0120:01, 10 November 2008diffhist+395
White tie
Expanded hunting attire mention. "Hunt Uniform" is not the right phrase. Livery, colours, pinks, attire, sure, but not uniform. Google for "scarlet if convenient" for descriptions.