00:1900:19, 18 May 2011diffhist−79
Yehudi Menuhin
Firstly, reference for "virtuoso" did not mention the word, even though Menuhin was one. Secondly, it's kinda become a no-no to say "virtuoso" when describing someone. For this reason, the word and reference have been removed from paraphrase.Tag: references removed
00:1100:11, 18 May 2011diffhist−17
Itzhak Perlman
clearing the brief summary of article (removed word "virtuoso," edited last sentence, changed master-instructor (not what master class teachers are called; is a scuba term) to master class instructor
07:1907:19, 14 May 2011diffhist+227
David Oistrakh
I edited down to "In Moscow" to clarify text by removing questionable information and fixing poor writing and wording, although further edits will be needed to source and fix any errors or omissions I may have made. I also edited "Distinctions."
05:5605:56, 14 May 2011diffhist+6
Kyung Wha Chung
Made distinction of South Korea vs. North Korea. I think it's a rather important distinction to make, but if some admin deems it unnecessary, feel free to edit.
02:5902:59, 14 May 2011diffhist+20
Pablo Casals
Previous version was subjective; changed "the greatest" to "one of," such as in the cases of Rostropovich and Heifetz
08:1808:18, 18 March 2011diffhist+10
Hilary Hahn
Again, look up the definition for 'virtuoso.' If you're not going to call Hahn a virtuoso, it would be just as fair to do such to Heifetz.
08:1508:15, 18 March 2011diffhist+10
Sarah Chang
Look up the definition of virtuoso. It's not in question whether she meets that definition, and it's not advertising; it's fact. She makes thousands of dollars per concert for a reason.
00:1900:19, 18 May 2011diffhist−79
Yehudi Menuhin
Firstly, reference for "virtuoso" did not mention the word, even though Menuhin was one. Secondly, it's kinda become a no-no to say "virtuoso" when describing someone. For this reason, the word and reference have been removed from paraphrase.Tag: references removed
00:1100:11, 18 May 2011diffhist−17
Itzhak Perlman
clearing the brief summary of article (removed word "virtuoso," edited last sentence, changed master-instructor (not what master class teachers are called; is a scuba term) to master class instructor
07:1907:19, 14 May 2011diffhist+227
David Oistrakh
I edited down to "In Moscow" to clarify text by removing questionable information and fixing poor writing and wording, although further edits will be needed to source and fix any errors or omissions I may have made. I also edited "Distinctions."
05:5605:56, 14 May 2011diffhist+6
Kyung Wha Chung
Made distinction of South Korea vs. North Korea. I think it's a rather important distinction to make, but if some admin deems it unnecessary, feel free to edit.
02:5902:59, 14 May 2011diffhist+20
Pablo Casals
Previous version was subjective; changed "the greatest" to "one of," such as in the cases of Rostropovich and Heifetz
08:1808:18, 18 March 2011diffhist+10
Hilary Hahn
Again, look up the definition for 'virtuoso.' If you're not going to call Hahn a virtuoso, it would be just as fair to do such to Heifetz.
08:1508:15, 18 March 2011diffhist+10
Sarah Chang
Look up the definition of virtuoso. It's not in question whether she meets that definition, and it's not advertising; it's fact. She makes thousands of dollars per concert for a reason.