08:3408:34, 25 December 2015diffhist+13,831
User talk:69.200.228.170
→Notice: The accused defends against inaccurate charges, and notes dishonesties; humbly promises to seek more sourcing of good quality, and quicker, as long as DMDv harassment stops.
24 December 2015
08:5608:56, 24 December 2015diffhist+8,401
User talk:69.200.228.170
→Notice: Response for administrators or any others concerned concerning 'incident...', made without chopping up language, visibly and substantively, and placing it out of context... Read if you've time, do as you will.
22 December 2015
09:4009:40, 22 December 2015diffhist+3
Flanders
added 'by' to a sentence (3rd paragraph of header, comparing the development rates of the Waloon and Flemish economy in the 19th century)
05:0905:09, 22 December 2015diffhist−1
Education Act 1902
→Church Party: Minor edit. Salisbury is listed as a 'Marquis'--not accurate. He was an English 'Marquess'. Both are equal to German Margrave, all being theoretically Counts/Earls, a small fractional rank higher due to historic military duties.
21 December 2015
22:3622:36, 21 December 2015diffhist+11,118
User talk:69.200.228.170
DMDv uniformly suppresses, claims privilege to do so based on not being a scholar or having qualifications, claims wikipedia is not scholarship, notes suggest obvious vendetta, considering the much unsourced material in wikipedia
12:5812:58, 21 December 2015diffhist+121
Petrary
approve removal of large paragraphs recently added; primary sources and other are necessary to categorize trebuckets (trebuchets) as 'perrarries' or petraries--in traditional scholarship distinction is made; question added to that effect.
10:3010:30, 21 December 2015diffhist+2,498
Petrary
note that this entire section confuses tension with torsion in the discussion of the powering of siege engines. Also, no, espringals are indeed not petraries. They don't throw rocks.
18 December 2015
02:4302:43, 18 December 2015diffhist+857
Leon Czolgosz
→Legacy: Note - obvious part of L.C.'s "legacy", much more consequential than others mentioned, was the bringing to office of a famed populist reformer Theodore Roosevelt. Brief summary of broad outlines of Roosevelt's effect, none requiring citation.
13 December 2015
10:5810:58, 13 December 2015diffhist+4
Ehden massacre
→Related publications: added 'alleged' to the summary of Richard Labeviere's controversial (some might say fanciful) claim that the Ehden massacre was directed by Israel. The change is one word, 'the' to 'alleged'.
09:3809:38, 18 November 2015diffhist+253
User talk:69.200.228.170
I don't understand the technical issues I've caused with the text, I believe just at the end, after a long period of editing/mild-revision, but I'll attempt to fix it. If it hasn't been already (I can't find the dangling parathesis here...] Thanks.
08:2008:20, 18 November 2015diffhist+1,841
Mangonel
→Role in war: Refined the inaccurate description of mangonel as a traction petrary, corrected to traditional-if-contested-original term i.e. torsion not traction powered engine /but later, broader, use of term to so set up for the next section
04:4804:48, 18 November 2015diffhist+2,263
Talk:Mangonel
→Propose merge: Noted traditional (pre-history-channel-special) 'hard' pronunciation of Trebuchet, and the conflation, both in talk and page itself, of tension-catapults with torque-powered onagers. Appears distinct medieval device so oppose
03:1503:15, 18 November 2015diffhist+140
Mangonel
→Role in war: Re-edited the terminology bit re 'traction-based petraries' to attempt to refine it and avoid projecting inappropriate certainty over Mangonel design in an....already slightly self-contradictory and overassured article.
02:4602:46, 18 November 2015diffhist+248
Mangonel
→Role in war: Gave more precision to the terminology regarding these siege engines, i.e. replacing a description essentially as modified TREBUCHET with
petrary to avoid further technical confusion.
02:1202:12, 18 November 2015diffhist+62
Petrary
Added in specific medieval terms for 'espringals' as primary a (that being the medieval engine), while immediately explaining/linking the reader to the ancient, similar 'ballista', and its page on wikipedia.
14:0614:06, 22 September 2015diffhist+257
Reagan Democrat
Data clearly shows an across the board shift to the right in 1980 during the climax of stagflation among voters, NOT a shift from Dems in particular; that phenomenon must wait until the boom of 1983-4, and I have so-altered this stub to reflect that fact.
1 September 2015
08:4708:47, 1 September 2015diffhist−19
United Nations Emergency Force
→UNEF II: 'October War' is not a legit name, so excised. This war has been known by lay and religious by 'Yom Kippur' 40 year. The other serves no purpose, and it shamefully avoids the use of the Arabs of Jewish holy days to try to launch a sneak
28 August 2015
19:1719:17, 28 August 2015diffhist+6
First Crusade
→Battle of Dorylaeum: This is a well-researched area; I think quite well enough to discuss Arslan's leaving of the field and evacuation of the theater as a 'flight', not a 'retreat'. I've not seen contrary accounts and he failed to oppose after -CA
06:3406:34, 20 August 2015diffhist−24
Battle of the Trebia
Edited out the talk of 'honor' and 'victory' (on the losing side), in favor of neutral language which doesn't act as though it was a special triumph that the entire army was not annihilated...
08:3408:34, 25 December 2015diffhist+13,831
User talk:69.200.228.170
→Notice: The accused defends against inaccurate charges, and notes dishonesties; humbly promises to seek more sourcing of good quality, and quicker, as long as DMDv harassment stops.
24 December 2015
08:5608:56, 24 December 2015diffhist+8,401
User talk:69.200.228.170
→Notice: Response for administrators or any others concerned concerning 'incident...', made without chopping up language, visibly and substantively, and placing it out of context... Read if you've time, do as you will.
22 December 2015
09:4009:40, 22 December 2015diffhist+3
Flanders
added 'by' to a sentence (3rd paragraph of header, comparing the development rates of the Waloon and Flemish economy in the 19th century)
05:0905:09, 22 December 2015diffhist−1
Education Act 1902
→Church Party: Minor edit. Salisbury is listed as a 'Marquis'--not accurate. He was an English 'Marquess'. Both are equal to German Margrave, all being theoretically Counts/Earls, a small fractional rank higher due to historic military duties.
21 December 2015
22:3622:36, 21 December 2015diffhist+11,118
User talk:69.200.228.170
DMDv uniformly suppresses, claims privilege to do so based on not being a scholar or having qualifications, claims wikipedia is not scholarship, notes suggest obvious vendetta, considering the much unsourced material in wikipedia
12:5812:58, 21 December 2015diffhist+121
Petrary
approve removal of large paragraphs recently added; primary sources and other are necessary to categorize trebuckets (trebuchets) as 'perrarries' or petraries--in traditional scholarship distinction is made; question added to that effect.
10:3010:30, 21 December 2015diffhist+2,498
Petrary
note that this entire section confuses tension with torsion in the discussion of the powering of siege engines. Also, no, espringals are indeed not petraries. They don't throw rocks.
18 December 2015
02:4302:43, 18 December 2015diffhist+857
Leon Czolgosz
→Legacy: Note - obvious part of L.C.'s "legacy", much more consequential than others mentioned, was the bringing to office of a famed populist reformer Theodore Roosevelt. Brief summary of broad outlines of Roosevelt's effect, none requiring citation.
13 December 2015
10:5810:58, 13 December 2015diffhist+4
Ehden massacre
→Related publications: added 'alleged' to the summary of Richard Labeviere's controversial (some might say fanciful) claim that the Ehden massacre was directed by Israel. The change is one word, 'the' to 'alleged'.
09:3809:38, 18 November 2015diffhist+253
User talk:69.200.228.170
I don't understand the technical issues I've caused with the text, I believe just at the end, after a long period of editing/mild-revision, but I'll attempt to fix it. If it hasn't been already (I can't find the dangling parathesis here...] Thanks.
08:2008:20, 18 November 2015diffhist+1,841
Mangonel
→Role in war: Refined the inaccurate description of mangonel as a traction petrary, corrected to traditional-if-contested-original term i.e. torsion not traction powered engine /but later, broader, use of term to so set up for the next section
04:4804:48, 18 November 2015diffhist+2,263
Talk:Mangonel
→Propose merge: Noted traditional (pre-history-channel-special) 'hard' pronunciation of Trebuchet, and the conflation, both in talk and page itself, of tension-catapults with torque-powered onagers. Appears distinct medieval device so oppose
03:1503:15, 18 November 2015diffhist+140
Mangonel
→Role in war: Re-edited the terminology bit re 'traction-based petraries' to attempt to refine it and avoid projecting inappropriate certainty over Mangonel design in an....already slightly self-contradictory and overassured article.
02:4602:46, 18 November 2015diffhist+248
Mangonel
→Role in war: Gave more precision to the terminology regarding these siege engines, i.e. replacing a description essentially as modified TREBUCHET with
petrary to avoid further technical confusion.
02:1202:12, 18 November 2015diffhist+62
Petrary
Added in specific medieval terms for 'espringals' as primary a (that being the medieval engine), while immediately explaining/linking the reader to the ancient, similar 'ballista', and its page on wikipedia.
14:0614:06, 22 September 2015diffhist+257
Reagan Democrat
Data clearly shows an across the board shift to the right in 1980 during the climax of stagflation among voters, NOT a shift from Dems in particular; that phenomenon must wait until the boom of 1983-4, and I have so-altered this stub to reflect that fact.
1 September 2015
08:4708:47, 1 September 2015diffhist−19
United Nations Emergency Force
→UNEF II: 'October War' is not a legit name, so excised. This war has been known by lay and religious by 'Yom Kippur' 40 year. The other serves no purpose, and it shamefully avoids the use of the Arabs of Jewish holy days to try to launch a sneak
28 August 2015
19:1719:17, 28 August 2015diffhist+6
First Crusade
→Battle of Dorylaeum: This is a well-researched area; I think quite well enough to discuss Arslan's leaving of the field and evacuation of the theater as a 'flight', not a 'retreat'. I've not seen contrary accounts and he failed to oppose after -CA
06:3406:34, 20 August 2015diffhist−24
Battle of the Trebia
Edited out the talk of 'honor' and 'victory' (on the losing side), in favor of neutral language which doesn't act as though it was a special triumph that the entire army was not annihilated...