07:4507:45, 10 January 2010diffhist−13
The Commanding Heights
This article needs improvement, but for now I have removed the least credible claim: the anti-globalisation movement cannot truthfully be said to have "gained power" anywhere.
01:3301:33, 31 December 2009diffhist−54
Agnes Grey
Tidied up the syntax, replaced the ungrammatical and over-elaborate "Similar to" with plain and simple "Like", adjusted text to UK English
21:1621:16, 23 December 2009diffhist+240
Parliamentary procedure
Adjusted the phrasing to make the article just a little less U.S.-centric and to indicate that "parliamentary procedure" does *not* have the same meaning in other countries
18:1018:10, 20 December 2009diffhist−82
Dubliner Cheese
Corrected infobox (County Cork is an area, not a town, and "ageing" has an "e" in the British Isles); also deleted POV assertions (probably advertising?) about flavour
23:4223:42, 18 December 2009diffhist+19
Hugh Mahon
Minor changes for clarity: "Mahon" replacing ambiguous "he", "the Labor Party" replacing "the Labor", a few cases of confusing word order changed
09:0809:08, 17 December 2009diffhist−8,479
Asset forfeiture
Removed the off-topic section about civil versus criminal law, the POV and OR section on "abuses and controversy", and some items of overblown rhetoric and slang ("digging up dirt", for example)Tag: blanking
18:4818:48, 16 December 2009diffhist−841
Property
Copyedited early paragraphs, but then gave up - this article is too US-centric, too repetitive and too informally written and needs major revisions that I don't have time for
18:3418:34, 16 December 2009diffhist−3
Property
"dispense with" (which means give up using) corrected to "dispose of" (which means use, and is presumably what was meant)
18:5318:53, 15 December 2009diffhist+41
Stephen Toulmin
Copyedited for grammar, and to remove the eccentric and misleading use of italics and upper-case initials for terms that are not book titles
07:4507:45, 10 January 2010diffhist−13
The Commanding Heights
This article needs improvement, but for now I have removed the least credible claim: the anti-globalisation movement cannot truthfully be said to have "gained power" anywhere.
01:3301:33, 31 December 2009diffhist−54
Agnes Grey
Tidied up the syntax, replaced the ungrammatical and over-elaborate "Similar to" with plain and simple "Like", adjusted text to UK English
21:1621:16, 23 December 2009diffhist+240
Parliamentary procedure
Adjusted the phrasing to make the article just a little less U.S.-centric and to indicate that "parliamentary procedure" does *not* have the same meaning in other countries
18:1018:10, 20 December 2009diffhist−82
Dubliner Cheese
Corrected infobox (County Cork is an area, not a town, and "ageing" has an "e" in the British Isles); also deleted POV assertions (probably advertising?) about flavour
23:4223:42, 18 December 2009diffhist+19
Hugh Mahon
Minor changes for clarity: "Mahon" replacing ambiguous "he", "the Labor Party" replacing "the Labor", a few cases of confusing word order changed
09:0809:08, 17 December 2009diffhist−8,479
Asset forfeiture
Removed the off-topic section about civil versus criminal law, the POV and OR section on "abuses and controversy", and some items of overblown rhetoric and slang ("digging up dirt", for example)Tag: blanking
18:4818:48, 16 December 2009diffhist−841
Property
Copyedited early paragraphs, but then gave up - this article is too US-centric, too repetitive and too informally written and needs major revisions that I don't have time for
18:3418:34, 16 December 2009diffhist−3
Property
"dispense with" (which means give up using) corrected to "dispose of" (which means use, and is presumably what was meant)
18:5318:53, 15 December 2009diffhist+41
Stephen Toulmin
Copyedited for grammar, and to remove the eccentric and misleading use of italics and upper-case initials for terms that are not book titles