03:4503:45, 28 October 2012diffhist−70
Paul Robeson
actually, that's all he did later in his life was remain unapologetic...............and it saves some bytes to boot
03:4003:40, 28 October 2012diffhist+51
Paul Robeson
persona non grata , orwellian non person, any way u slice the pie i'm getting in trouble on wikipedia, let me roll with this for now
03:2403:24, 28 October 2012diffhist−48
Paul Robeson
no, sorry, its way too many bytes to include that Robeson was really upset that his father suffered as a slave....it can't go in the intro...its too many bytes and its way too concrete...intro means abstract
03:1703:17, 28 October 2012diffhist+34
Paul Robeson
NOT DEBATABLE: during the the age of McCarthyism has to be in the intro, not even close to being debatable , not even close - its totally mandatory; never debate this point w me
03:0003:00, 28 October 2012diffhist+10
Paul Robeson
us policies, us government....needs a lil rework because of multiple uses of the same phrases but its not that bad
02:4502:45, 28 October 2012diffhist+42
Paul Robeson
needs work: he was against anti-imperialism....but this is still much better:, this needs fixing"becoming politically outspoken against the policies of the US government"......should b imperialism as existed in the US blah blah
01:4401:44, 26 October 2012diffhist+6
Paul Robeson
1) provide segway between 2nd and 3rd paragraph; 2) this is way way way too wordy "in an otherwise all-white cast"...just say significant....put in specifics in the body of the article why it is "significant"...Shakespeare OUT, Othello covers it
03:4503:45, 28 October 2012diffhist−70
Paul Robeson
actually, that's all he did later in his life was remain unapologetic...............and it saves some bytes to boot
03:4003:40, 28 October 2012diffhist+51
Paul Robeson
persona non grata , orwellian non person, any way u slice the pie i'm getting in trouble on wikipedia, let me roll with this for now
03:2403:24, 28 October 2012diffhist−48
Paul Robeson
no, sorry, its way too many bytes to include that Robeson was really upset that his father suffered as a slave....it can't go in the intro...its too many bytes and its way too concrete...intro means abstract
03:1703:17, 28 October 2012diffhist+34
Paul Robeson
NOT DEBATABLE: during the the age of McCarthyism has to be in the intro, not even close to being debatable , not even close - its totally mandatory; never debate this point w me
03:0003:00, 28 October 2012diffhist+10
Paul Robeson
us policies, us government....needs a lil rework because of multiple uses of the same phrases but its not that bad
02:4502:45, 28 October 2012diffhist+42
Paul Robeson
needs work: he was against anti-imperialism....but this is still much better:, this needs fixing"becoming politically outspoken against the policies of the US government"......should b imperialism as existed in the US blah blah
01:4401:44, 26 October 2012diffhist+6
Paul Robeson
1) provide segway between 2nd and 3rd paragraph; 2) this is way way way too wordy "in an otherwise all-white cast"...just say significant....put in specifics in the body of the article why it is "significant"...Shakespeare OUT, Othello covers it