19:3019:30, 18 May 2016diffhist+1,128
Joe Berlinger
→Paradise Lost: Adding as a closing paragraph the sourced content appearing in the lede of the WM Three article (so this section does not close with editorializing)
19:1019:10, 18 May 2016diffhist+175
Joe Berlinger
→Paradise Lost: Correcting "17" to "20" as article actually states. Revising opening sentence to match citation content. Parts of each sentence not in the source are marked by {{cn}}.
19:0119:01, 18 May 2016diffhist−76
Joe Berlinger
→film: Removing verification tags, because content verified in the citation. Corrected "18" to "20" as article presents, and Itzkoff article title to that actually appearing on article.
18:5618:56, 18 May 2016diffhist−33
Joe Berlinger
→Paradise Lost: Itzkoff citn removed from 3rd paragraph this section—sentence content not found in citn as presented (words "DNA experts," "genetic", "physical evidence", "stepfather," "shoelace," "hogtie" absent Itzkoff citn.).
18:5318:53, 18 May 2016diffhist+53
Joe Berlinger
→Paradise Lost: Itzkoff citn removed from 2nd paragraph this section—sentence content not found in citn as presented (words "incompetence," "strange man", "blood", "bath/restroom" absent Itzkoff). NPOV placed to make clear where issue lies.
18:4118:41, 18 May 2016diffhist+195
Joe Berlinger
→Other media: Adding information on The System, and downgrading section tag because there now is a citation here. Most material in section, however, remains unsourced.
18:0218:02, 18 May 2016diffhist+1,650
Joe Berlinger
→Career: ADDING AVAILABLE MISSING CITATIONS. Adding, in standard fashion, dates of films, so can remove some {{when?}} tags. Removed some puffery. Improving citation appearance to a standard [ {{cite template… }} ]
14:2314:23, 18 May 2016diffhist+24
Joe Berlinger
Refimprove tag added for obvious reason (many historical/factual statements unsourced). NPOV added for Paradise lost section (e.g., e.g., the word "incompetence" does not appear in the Itzkoff article, making whole of presentation suspect)
14:0714:07, 18 May 2016diffhist+260
Ganterschwil
Filled in 2 bare reference(s) with
reFill Filled two bare URL citations with reFIll, and manually edited NYT article to complete
19:3019:30, 18 May 2016diffhist+1,128
Joe Berlinger
→Paradise Lost: Adding as a closing paragraph the sourced content appearing in the lede of the WM Three article (so this section does not close with editorializing)
19:1019:10, 18 May 2016diffhist+175
Joe Berlinger
→Paradise Lost: Correcting "17" to "20" as article actually states. Revising opening sentence to match citation content. Parts of each sentence not in the source are marked by {{cn}}.
19:0119:01, 18 May 2016diffhist−76
Joe Berlinger
→film: Removing verification tags, because content verified in the citation. Corrected "18" to "20" as article presents, and Itzkoff article title to that actually appearing on article.
18:5618:56, 18 May 2016diffhist−33
Joe Berlinger
→Paradise Lost: Itzkoff citn removed from 3rd paragraph this section—sentence content not found in citn as presented (words "DNA experts," "genetic", "physical evidence", "stepfather," "shoelace," "hogtie" absent Itzkoff citn.).
18:5318:53, 18 May 2016diffhist+53
Joe Berlinger
→Paradise Lost: Itzkoff citn removed from 2nd paragraph this section—sentence content not found in citn as presented (words "incompetence," "strange man", "blood", "bath/restroom" absent Itzkoff). NPOV placed to make clear where issue lies.
18:4118:41, 18 May 2016diffhist+195
Joe Berlinger
→Other media: Adding information on The System, and downgrading section tag because there now is a citation here. Most material in section, however, remains unsourced.
18:0218:02, 18 May 2016diffhist+1,650
Joe Berlinger
→Career: ADDING AVAILABLE MISSING CITATIONS. Adding, in standard fashion, dates of films, so can remove some {{when?}} tags. Removed some puffery. Improving citation appearance to a standard [ {{cite template… }} ]
14:2314:23, 18 May 2016diffhist+24
Joe Berlinger
Refimprove tag added for obvious reason (many historical/factual statements unsourced). NPOV added for Paradise lost section (e.g., e.g., the word "incompetence" does not appear in the Itzkoff article, making whole of presentation suspect)
14:0714:07, 18 May 2016diffhist+260
Ganterschwil
Filled in 2 bare reference(s) with
reFill Filled two bare URL citations with reFIll, and manually edited NYT article to complete